1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 63及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on The Lonely Life of Aged People. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 18
2、0 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Water Shortage. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1水 的重要性。 2造成水资源缺乏的原因。 3如何解决缺水问题。 3 For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a compositio
3、n on the topic Cell Phones. You should write no less than 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline below:1描述下图所示的手机用户的数量变 化情况。 2出现这种情况的原因。 3对此现象作出评价。4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Internet Slang. You should write a
4、t least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: 1随着网络的盛行，出现了很多的网络语言。 2分析出现这种现 象的原因以及危害。 3你对此有何看法。 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 63答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 The Lonely Life of Aged People (1) Above is a thought-provoking cartoon: an old grandma sits in front of a mirror, l
5、ooking at “herself in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel lonely when my son is at work and my grandson studies in school.“ (2) Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of childrens company for old parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is ad
6、visable for their children to spend more time with their parents. (3) In modern society, young people have become busier with their work. (4) Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it hard to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. (5) However, they may not know that company enables
7、 aged parents to build up adequate enthusiasm for life. (6) As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged parents. (7) As a young man, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accord
8、ingly, we should advocate and encourage our acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people. 【试题解析】 (1)首句引出图画，然后描述图画内容，主要体现四个方面：人物、动作、文字和环境。 (2)图画联系主题，后面的 if句为图画简单评论。 (3)阐述图画现象产生的原因。 (4)写出年轻人对此很难应对。 (5)通过转折论述意义。 (6)尾句是万能总结。 (7)写出自己对该问题的看法。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Water Shortage (1) Water is in
9、dispensable in our daily life. Without water, both human beings and any other living things could not live; neither agriculture nor industry could exist, and the development of economy would become meaningless. (2) Unfortunately, we are facing a serious water shortage. (3) It chiefly results from th
10、e terrible waste of water resources and heavy pollution in some rivers and lakes. Because of the pollution, the water in those rivers and lakes is no longer drinkable or available for any other use. (4) And the uneven distribution of water resources also causes severe water shortage in some areas. O
11、f course, the large population of our nation is another fact that is closely related to water shortage. (5) Then how can we solve the water shortage problem? (6) The most effective way, in my view, is that we should not waste any water. Everyone should form a good habit of saving every drop of water
12、. We must try our best to protect the rivers and lakes from being polluted when we develop economy. The government should carry out some projects to divert water to the areas where water is seriously in shortage and some projects to desalinate large amounts of sea water to make drinking water. Lucki
13、ly, some of such projects are under construction. (7) We are convinced that when those projects are completed, the problem of water shortage in those areas will be eased. 【试题解析】 (1)提出水资源的重要性。 (2)提出我们面临的水资源缺乏的困境。 (3)水资源缺乏的原因。 (4)水资源缺乏的另一个原因。 (5)提出该如何解决问题。 (6)解决的方法。 (7)提出措施来改善水资源缺乏的状况。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确
14、答案】 Cell Phones (1) As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reached 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number suddenly soared to 9 million. By the year of 2014, the n
15、umber has got to 13 million. (2) There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Third
16、ly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone. (3) The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in peoples daily life. The functions of the cell phone have made certain people rel
17、uctant to separate themselves from their cell phone. Therefore, the modern people cannot live without it. 【试题解析】 (1)分析图表，手机使用者越来越多。 (2)分析原因，方便、信息量大、价格降低。 (3)手机已经成为生活中的必需品。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Internet Slang (1) With the wide spread of the Internet, the Internet slang such as “Kengdie“, BBS (Bulletin
18、Board System), etc. enjoys great popularity among teenagers nowadays. (2) The reason for this phenomenon can be accounted from the following two aspects. On the one hand, the Internet slang is very interesting. It can make the chatting online more funny, which can attract others attention. On the ot
19、her hand, the Internet slang can improve the efficiency of online chatting. However, it has great influenced students learning, especially teenagers language development. (3) The overuse of the Internet slang will lead to the lack of proper pronunciation, grammar and numerous misspellings in writing
20、. Some teenagers even use them in essay writing. (4) From my point of view, the Internet slang can mislead students learning, which will hinder their future development. We can use the Internet for fun, but we cannot apply it to the formal language. Therefore, for the sake of their future, teenagers had better refrain from the Internet slang. 【试题解析】 (1)指出随着网络的流行，网络语言也随之流行起来。 (2)分析网络语言流行的原因。 (3)网络语言对孩子们学习带来的负面影响。 (4)提出自己的看法。 【知识模块】 作文
