1、1Unit 8 Adventure写作园地-应用文：如何写宣传手册感悟范文假设你是野外生存夏令营的负责人，请你根据以下要点提示，为你们的夏令营写一则宣传。野外生存夏令营(Survival Summer Camp)是武夷山最大的探险夏令营，配有训练有素的工作人员，它也是福建省唯一一所由专家提供生存技能训练的营地。武夷山面积 999平方千米，是鸟的天堂、昆虫的世界和蛇的王国，这里远离城市的喧嚣和人群。活动内容有徒步旅行、登山等，这次夏令营的最大特色是野外生存技巧训练。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数 120左右；3.参考词汇：武夷山 Mount Wuyi 天堂 paradise_范
2、文Survival Summer Camp in Mount Wuyi The best adventure holiday youll ever have!Survival Summer Camp is the biggest adventure camp in Mount Wuyi and has welltrained workers. The mountain, which covers an area of 999 square kilometers, is the paradise of birds, the world of insects and the kingdom of
3、snakes. In Mount Wuyi youll go through an exciting and unbelievable adventure in a huge mountain away from the noise and crowds of the city.At the camp, you can enjoy the excitement and happiness of going hiking, climbing mountains and so on. Well teach you survival skills in the wild. The summer ca
4、mp is the best place to have your adventure. It is the only camp in Fujian to offer survival skills by experts. Contact us and youll have much fun.技法讨论首先，给出一句简洁、清楚又切中主题的话，以便在第一时间引起读者的兴趣，使他们对所宣传的事物做进一步了解。然后，给出被宣传事物大致的、最主要的信息。比如，找工作要推荐自己、宣传自己，在这一块可以简要介绍自己的学历和曾有的工作经历。2接下来，叙述被宣传事物的主要特点。还以申请工作为例，在这里可以介绍自
5、己有什么技能和特长。最后，要强调一下被宣传事物与其他同类事物的不同之处和独特之处。仍以找工作为例，可以宣传个人异于其他人的强项，比如，会说流利的英语，有丰富的工作经验等。这样，一篇目的明确、内容清晰、结构紧凑、层次分明的宣传材料就成型了。黄金表达1. Welcome to.2. The best adventure holiday youll ever have!3. .is located in./stands in the centre of.4. .covers an area of.square kilometers.5. .is the paradise of.6. You can
6、experience/enjoy.here.7. Well teach you.skills and youll learn how to.8. .is the best place for you to.9. For further information, please call us on.10. .is a famous tourist attraction with.亮点分析亮点一：文章包含了写作要求中的所有要点。醒目的标题，对武夷山详细的描述，最后写参加夏令营的好处。文章结构清晰、完整，内容充实。亮点二：本文使用了定语从句，不定式短语作定语，长短句结合，使文章更加有水平。亮点三：文
7、章表达上使用了go through，away from the noise等短语，增加了文章的可读性。亮点四：最后结尾处，很好地展现了写作意图。类文演练位于著名旅游区福建武夷山的福建旅馆想进行宣传，以吸引更多的游客来住宿，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语广告，帮助该旅馆进行宣传。福建旅馆位于福建武夷山下，每天有多班公交车经过。该旅馆有六层，120 间客房。客房每天 24小时提供热水，有电视、空调、电话和电脑。单人房每晚 120元，双人房每晚180元。如有需要，可随时拨打客服电话 4006088880。要求：1.行文须包括提示中的所有内容；2.行文流畅，过渡自然；3.词数 120左右。联想词汇31.
8、欢迎来福建旅馆 _Fujian Hotel答案：welcome to2. 坐落于 _答案：be located3. 由环绕 _答案：be surrounded by4. 六层楼的建筑 _答案：a sixstoreyed building5. 对于 _答案：as for6. 最好的服务 _答案：best service7. 盼望 _答案：look forward to连词成句1. _， its _ for you _ to the famous scenic spots from here because there are many buses nearby.此外，对于你们来说到达著名景区很方
9、便，因为这附近有许多公交。答案：Besides; convenient; to get2. Each room _： 24hour hot water every day.每个房间都配有 24小时热水。答案：comes with/is equipped with3. _. Best choice.最好的服务，最好的选择。答案：Best service连句成章_答案：Welcome to Fujian Hotel!Fujian Hotel is located at the foot of the famous Mount Wuyi in Fujian 4Province. Surrounded
10、 by beautiful scenery, it is a good place for you to have a rest. Besides, its convenient for you to get to the famous scenic spots from here because there are many buses nearby.Our hotel is a sixstoreyed building with 120 rooms. Each room comes with: 24hour hot water every day, a TV set, an air conditioner, a telephone and a computer. Our customer service number is 400608 8880 which you can call at any time. As for the price, a single room costs 120 yuan a night, and a double room is 180 yuan a night.Best service. Best choice. All the staff look forward to your visit!
