1、单元主题写作九,单元主题写作九,话题分析,本单元以“描述人物的外貌”为话题，要求同学们能描述自己的朋友、家人、老师等周围人的外貌。 写作要求： 1能正确运用一般现在时描述人物的外貌，尤其注意主语是第三人称单数时，谓语动词要用单数形式。,单元主题写作九,2能准确使用动词(be/have/has/wear/wears)、形容词(tall/short/heavy/thin/round/long)和短语(be of medium height/be of medium build)描述外貌。 3能用形容词(handsome/beautiful/cool/funny/friendly)以及连词(beca
2、use/so)评价人物的外貌。,单元主题写作九,典型例题,请你根据提示，以“My Father”为题，写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1职业：教师 2. 外貌：英俊、圆脸、有点儿瘦、中等身高、短直发、大眼睛、戴 眼镜 3. 性格：友好、和蔼 要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点提示，可以适当发挥。2. 60词左右。,单元主题写作九,思路点拨,单元主题写作九,素材积累,单词 1卷曲的 _ 2.高的 _ 3身高；高度 _ 4.瘦的 _ 5重的 _ 6.电影院 _ 7眼镜 _ 8.女演员 _,curly,tall,height,thin,heavy,cinema,glasses,actress,单元主题写作九,
3、9鼻子 _ 10(头发)金黄色的 _ 11圆形的 _ 12.脸 _ 13眼睛 _ 14.艺术家 _ 15牛仔裤 _,nose,blonde,round,face,eye,jeans,artist,单元主题写作九,短语 1中等身高 _ 2一点儿；少量 _ 3最后 _ 4戴着眼镜 _ 5在电视上 _,(be) of medium height,a little,in the end,wear glasses,on television,单元主题写作九,6相同的方式 _ 7首先 _ 8去看电影 _ 9看起来像 _ 10短卷发 _,the same way,first of all,go to the
4、 movie(s),look like,short curly hair,单元主题写作九,句型 根据括号中的英文提示词，将下列句子翻译成英语。 1我的朋友有一双大眼睛和一个小鼻子。(big, small) _ 2海伦留着黑色的长直发。(straight) _ 3照片中的那个男孩个子矮，有点儿胖。(a little) _,My friend has two big eyes and a small nose.,Helen has long straight black hair.,The boy in the picture is short and a little heavy.,单元主题写作
5、九,4我喜欢这名演员，因为他的确很英俊。(handsome) _ 5格林先生通常戴着眼镜，穿着运动鞋。(wear) _ 6杰克的母亲不高也不矮，她中等身高。(height) _,I like the actor because he is really handsome.,Mr. Green usually wears glasses and sports shoes.,Jacks mother is not tall or short. She is of medium height.,单元主题写作九,My Father My father is 40 years old. He is a
6、teacher and he teaches in a high school. My father is handsome and a little thin. He is of medium height. He has a round face and two big eyes. He often wears glasses. He has short straight hair.,高分模板,单元主题写作九,My father is friendly to his students. His students like him very much. I love my father.,单
7、元主题写作九,名师点评,1文章使用一般现在时描述了父亲的外貌和性格特征。 2通过be friendly to sb.这个短语点明了学生喜欢父亲的原因。 3运用多个形容词(handsome, round, short, straight)描述了 父亲的外貌。 4文章结构清晰，开头介绍了父亲的职业，结尾用“I love my father.” 表达了自己对父亲的感情。,单元主题写作九,小试身手,请根据提示，写一篇题为“Our Monitor”的短文，介绍一下你们的班长。 要点提示： 班长：李敏，2006年1月8日出生 外貌特征：又高又瘦，大眼睛，黑色的长直发 性格特征：友好 爱好：体育运动，读英语
8、书,单元主题写作九,要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点提示，可以适当发挥； 2. 60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Our MonitorLi Min is our monitor. _ _ _,单元主题写作九,One possible version： Our Monitor Li Min is our monitor. She was born on January 8th, 2006. She is 13 years old now. Li Min is a beautiful girl. She is tall and thin. She has a round face with two big eyes. She has long straight black hair. Li Min likes sports and she often plays sports with us after school. She likes reading English books. Shes friendly to us. She gets along well with everyone. We all like her.,
