1、英语写作基础自考题-25 及答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.She borrowed some money. She was in need of money to call a taxi. (complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_2.Basketball is the most wonderful sport for many people. (periodic sentence) （分数：2.00）_3.Hockey is a sport which is popular in many countries around the world. (si
2、mple sentence) （分数：2.00）_4.I thought it was going to snow the next day. It turned out to be a sunny day. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_5.Though cheerful in company, he was often sad in private. (loose sentence) （分数：2.00）_6.My wife is kind, intelligent, and beautiful. I love her. I enjoy her happy co
3、mpany. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_7.He took out his textbook. He opened it. He found a note sandwiched between two pages. (sentence with parallel structure) （分数：2.00）_8.They all felt very happy and danced about the bonfire. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase) （分数：2.00）_9.I should not have t
4、old him the truth. He passed it on quickly. He exaggerated it too much. (long sentence) （分数：2.00）_10.The government evacuated the village to avoid another wave of aftershocks following the terrible earthquake. (sentence with “to Opener“) （分数：2.00）_11.He borrowed my laptop. That he promised to return
5、 in four hours. （分数：3.00）_12.They have been engaged in the work all day long. Without a rest. （分数：3.00）_13.Because he said nothing does not mean he agreed to your proposals. （分数：3.00）_14.Susan likes to swim in summer and skiing in winter. （分数：3.00）_15.I could not help looking back at him. Tears stre
6、aming down my face. （分数：3.00）_16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.You can review it a few hours in the night before the testB.You can study with friends and help each otherC.You can get up early in the morning of the test and studyD.There are man
7、y ways to study for a test17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. Most people think that being a department store salesperson is not a difficult job, but from my experience I know that it takes time, effort, and patience to be successful. Once you have helped the customers,
8、 you have to ring up and bag the merchandise, then be sure to thank them. You also have to help with displaying the merchandise attractively, with putting out new lines, with taking inventory, with keeping stock organized, and with keeping the counter area clean and tidy. You have to know what is in
9、 stock and what needs to be put out. Then, too, a salesperson must be courteous when a customer is unreasonable and demanding. As you can see, a salesperson does more than just stand around and ring up others. （分数：5.00）_18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence fro
10、m the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D. Topic Sentence: _ These memories of mine have been collected slowly, over a period of years. Some readers, finding them in a magazine, have taken them for stories. The assumption that I have “made them up“ is surprisingly
11、 prevalent(流行的), even among people who know me. I do not understand the reason for these doubts. Can it be that the public takes for granted that anything written by a professional writer is necessarily untrue? The professional writer is looked on perhaps as a “story-teller“, like a child who has fa
12、llen into that habit and is mechanically scolded by his parents even when he protests that this time he is telling the truth.（分数：5.00）A.I am essentially a story-tellerB.I am often accused of telling liesC.The fact that I am a professional writer is often doubted by my readersD.The memories of mine a
13、re often taken as stories by some of my readers19.The reason was never explained to us. 20. My father had taught me, on his lap, before I started schoolA Child“s Garden of Verses, and Eugene Field, his favorite poet. 21. I remember a storybook, which soon disappeared, about some Belgian children alo
14、ng a canal escaping from Germans. 22. At any rate, these are all the books I recall from my childhood household. 23. From an early time, I had been a great reader. 24. A few volumes had come with us, I think, from Seattle to Minneapolis, but they were for looking at the pictures on the living-room f
15、loor while a grown-up watched, not for reading. 25. But after our parents“ death, almost no books were permitted. 26. Was it to save electricity, or because books could give “ideas“ that would make us too big for our boots? 26 19 24 （分数：2.00）20.Research scientists at the institute note that babies a
16、re strongly influenced by their environment. They say a baby will smile if its mother does something the baby likes. A baby learns to get the best care possible by smiling to please its mother or other caregivers(照料者). Its mother or other caregivers then understand(s) its information. This is how ba
17、bies learn to connect and communicate with other people. The American researchers say this ability to learn exists in a baby even before birth. They say newborn babies can recognize and understand sounds they heard while they were still developing inside their mothers. A study last month from the Ne
18、therlands found evidence that unborn babies can remember sounds. This study was very valuable indeed. Dutch researchers studied almost one hundred pregnant(怀孕的)women. They played sounds to the growing fetus(胎儿) and watched its movements with ultrasound(超声)devices. They found that by thirty weeks of
19、development the fetus could remember a sound for ten minutes. By the thirty-fourth week, the fetus could remember the sound for four weeks. （分数：10.00）_21.Write a letter according to the following situation: You are Li Xiao. Your friend Zhang Jun is studying at Shanghai University. You miss him very
20、much. Write a letter to ask him about his life. (150-200 words) （分数：30.00）_英语写作基础自考题-25 答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.She borrowed some money. She was in need of money to call a taxi. (complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：She borrowed some money, because she was in need of money to call a taxi.解析 本题考查
21、将句子改写为复合句。通读题目可以发现，前后两句具有因果关系，故可采用连词 because引导后句，与前句构成因果复合句。2.Basketball is the most wonderful sport for many people. (periodic sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：For many people, basketball is the most wonderful sport.解析 本题考查松句和掉尾句之间的转换把关键意思后置，介词短语置于句首即可。3.Hockey is a sport which is popular in many coun
22、tries around the world. (simple sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Hockey is a popular sport in many countries around the world. /Hockey is a sport popular in many countries around the world.解析 本题考查把句子改写为简单句。简单句是最基本的句子类型，至少是含有主语和谓语动词的、独立的、有意义的句子。与复合句相比，简单句中不能出现从属连词。在此题中就是要把 which引导的定语从句改成定语，修饰“sport”。所以把
23、“a sport which is popular”改为“a popular sport”或“a sport popular”。4.I thought it was going to snow the next day. It turned out to be a sunny day. (compound sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：I thought it was going to snow the next day, but it turned out to be a sunny day.解析 本题考查将句子改写为并列句。题目前后两句具有转折关系，故可用 b
24、ut连接组成并列句。5.Though cheerful in company, he was often sad in private. (loose sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：He was often sad in private though cheerful in company解析 本题考查松句和掉尾句之间的转换，题目中心意思是“He was often sad in private”，将其提至句首即可。6.My wife is kind, intelligent, and beautiful. I love her. I enjoy her happ
25、y company. (compound-complex sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：My wife is kind, intelligent and beautiful, and I love her because I enjoy her happy company.解析 考查的是将若干句子组合成并列复合句。通读题目可知，后两句可构成复合句而和第一句构成并列关系。7.He took out his textbook. He opened it. He found a note sandwiched between two pages. (sentence w
26、ith parallel structure) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：He took out his textbook, opened it and found a note sandwiched between two pages.解析 本题考查把句子改写为含平行结构的句子。题目中可组成平行结构的是一组动词短语。8.They all felt very happy and danced about the bonfire. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：Dancing about the bonf
27、ire, they all felt very happy.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含动词-ing短语的句子。题目中“danced about the bonfire”可转换成-ing 形式做伴随状语。9.I should not have told him the truth. He passed it on quickly. He exaggerated it too much. (long sentence) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：I should not have told him the truth which he passed on quickly and e
28、xaggerated too much.解析 本题考查将若干短句组合成一个长句。根据各句间关系，本题可将后两句并列起来做前句的定语从句，这个长句也即成为一个复合句。10.The government evacuated the village to avoid another wave of aftershocks following the terrible earthquake. (sentence with “to Opener“) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：()解析：To avoid another wave of aftershocks following the terribl
29、e earthquake, the government evacuated the village.解析 本题考查将句子改写为含动词不定式的句子。将题目中“to avoid.terrible earthquake”置于句首即可。11.He borrowed my laptop. That he promised to return in four hours. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：He borrowed my laptop that he promised to return in four hours.解析 本题考查修饰语错置引起的病句。在此题中，想让句子的前后两部分连
30、接起来只需把前一句的句号改为逗号，后一句的第一个单词首字母小写即可，因为后一句本来就是一个定语从句。12.They have been engaged in the work all day long. Without a rest. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：They have been engaged in the work all day long without a rest.解析 此句也是一个破句。改正的方法就是让后一句和前一句连接起来，做前一句的状语。13.Because he said nothing does not mean he agreed to your
31、proposals. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：That he said nothing does not mean he agreed to your proposals.解析 本题考查从属连词引起的破句的修改。这道题的错误出在做主语的从句用错的连词引导了。表示因果关系的连词不能用作主语从句的引导词。所以在改正时只需删除连词 because，把 that置于句首引导主语从句即可。14.Susan likes to swim in summer and skiing in winter. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：Susan likes swimming in su
32、mmer and skiing in winter.解析 考查的是错误平行结构的修改。题目中“swim”和“ski”两词统一为分词形式或前接动词不定式“to”均可消除错误的平行。15.I could not help looking back at him. Tears streaming down my face. （分数：3.00）_正确答案：()解析：I could not help looking back at him, tears streaming down my face.解析 本题考查由-ing分词引起的破句的修改。本题最简单的解答方法是把后半句直接和前面部分连接，同时小写
33、Tears首字母。16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A, B, C or D.（分数：5.00）A.You can review it a few hours in the night before the testB.You can study with friends and help each otherC.You can get up early in the morning of the test and studyD.There are many ways to study for a
34、 test 解析：解析 主题句是一段话中最具概括性的话语，但主题句过于宽泛或者过于狭窄都不能算作好的主题句。主题句过于宽泛，一段话显然是不能把它发展充分；主题句过于狭窄，显然提供不出足够的细节对它进一步发展。在此题中，A、B、C 三个选项都犯了主题句过于狭窄的毛病，只有最后一个选项适中，接下来可以对考试前准备的方法进行介绍。17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. Most people think that being a department store salesperson is not a di
35、fficult job, but from my experience I know that it takes time, effort, and patience to be successful. Once you have helped the customers, you have to ring up and bag the merchandise, then be sure to thank them. You also have to help with displaying the merchandise attractively, with putting out new
36、lines, with taking inventory, with keeping stock organized, and with keeping the counter area clean and tidy. You have to know what is in stock and what needs to be put out. Then, too, a salesperson must be courteous when a customer is unreasonable and demanding. As you can see, a salesperson does m
37、ore than just stand around and ring up others. （分数：5.00）_正确答案：()解析：Most people think that being a department store salesperson is not a difficult job, but from my experience I know that it takes time, effort, and patience to be successful. Once you have helped the customers, you have to ring up and
38、bag the merchandise, then be sure to thank them. You also have to help with displaying the merchandise attractively, with putting out new lines, with taking inventory, with keeping stock organized, and with keeping the counter area clean and tidy. You have to know what is in stock and what needs to
39、be put out. Then, too, a salesperson must be courteous when a customer is unreasonable and demanding. As you can see, a salesperson does more than just stand around and ring up others. 解析 主题句是一段话中最具有概括性的话语，寻找主题句时一定要以理解段落的意思为前提，因为主题句的位置并不是总在句首，还有在句中、句末的情况，切勿凭感觉想当然地看问题。做“标出主题句”这类题时，一定要理解句意和句子之间的关系。在这段话中，作者主要描述了作为一个商店售货员都需要做的工作，这些工作看似简单其实并不容易。所以很明显主题句是第一句话：“很多人都认为售货员的工作并不难，但是从我的亲身经历来看，要想做好这份工作不仅需要时间、努力还需要耐心。”18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that f
