1、考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 4 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe t
2、he drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_4.Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the photos briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon refle
3、cted by them, and then 3) give your point of view. You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_5.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment o
4、n it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_6.Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “CulturesNational and International“. In the essay you should 1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2) give your comment on the phenomenon. You
5、should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 4 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Write an essay of 160
6、-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： The enlightening picture portrays that a hot pot, with n
7、umerous ingredients in it, includes domestic and alien cultures such as literature, moral values and performing arts. It seems that the hot pot tastes very delicious because of the rich nutrition of the multi-culture. Obviously, the picture characterizes the status quo of Chinese society in which Ch
8、inese and Western culture conflict with each other but they merge into a unique form to a certain degree. Since China has opened its door widely to the outside world, many people from different countries have been deeply fascinated by Chinese culture. They will accept and love Chinese culture as a w
9、hole. In addition, Chinese culture should be well shared with foreign people, who have shown their enthusiasm towards China. Meanwhile , the Chinese people are also exposed to foreign cultures when more foreign people come to this oriental country. In this way people from various nations in the worl
10、d will be able to acquire better understanding of each other. In my opinion, the culture of any nation is a kind of precious heritage, and belongs to the whole mankind. With economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become an inevitable trend of the time. No country is an isolat
11、ed island, be it China or the western world. The clearer we grasp the current situation, the more it would be beneficial to the global villagers.)解析：解析： 本文准确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切中题意，并且涵盖了题目中的信息要点。文章思路清晰，清楚地表达了其内涵。句子形式具有多样性，词语选择恰当，准确地表达了意义，词语的使用面比较宽。第一段紧扣提纲，第二段主题突出，第三段衔接顺畅。4.Study the following photos caref
12、ully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the photos briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and then 3) give your point of view. You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： There are two pictures: the first is a phot
13、o of a man“ s face on which the name of Beckham can be seen; in the second picture we can see a man in a barbershop, his hair being done in Beckham“ s hair style, costing 300 yuan. Obviously, the two persons are fans of Beckham. These pictures make me ponder: Why does this phenomenon appear? Nowaday
14、s, more and more people are influenced by celebrities, and there are many fans who run after and imitate themfilm stars, athletic stars, even super-girl singers. Firstly, they do so because they admire them and want to obtain their fame and reputation. Secondly, there is no denying the fact that som
15、e people do this out of pure adoration, yet, some just want to become wealthy overnightwithout hard work, and sweat, just effortlessly. Anyway, I think young people must know that famous people get their reputation because they have made great contribution to our societyfor example Liu Xiang. We“ d
16、better turn our admiration into practical action to learn from them so that we can make even greater contribution to our motherland in the future.)解析：解析： 本文分为三段：第一段简要描述了两张图画的内容。第二段将图画信息联系到社会现实，指出图画背后所代表的社会现象，并且对这种社会现象进行了深入分析。第三段提出自己的观点，全文布局合理紧凑，主题突出，要点明确。5.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on th
17、e following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As is shown in the picture, there are four siblings: three sons and one daughter in the fou
18、r corners of the picture, each keeping a goal net seriously as goalkeeper. Their old father crouches like a football and rolls all about on the ground, being kicked around by his children. This picture indicates the current deteriorating old-caring circumstance: many grown-up children refuse to prov
19、ide for their aged parents, regarding them as heavy burdens; those miserable senior citizens have no strength to fight for their rights and benefits, only to be maltreated by their children that have been raised by their own hands and sweats. This picture is thought-provoking to me. I feel sorry for
20、 those parents who have spent half of their lives breeding their children but at last become the deserted. People should reflect on this issue and on what has happened to our ethical values including the traditional filial duty. We should enhance our education on the traditional merits and fight aga
21、inst the morbid social backdrop. It“ s time that our traditional value should be restored and the senior citizens be taken good care of.)解析：解析： 范文结构清晰，内容安排有序。第一段对图画进行了简洁生动地描述：三个儿子和一个女儿正在把他们的老父亲当球踢，各尽所能不让父亲进自己的“门”。第二段指出画面反映出来的社会问题：子女推卸赡养老人的义务。第三段发人深省，呼吁人们应该继续传承和发扬传统美德，照顾老年人。6.Study the following pict
22、ure carefully and write an essay entitled “CulturesNational and International“. In the essay you should 1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2) give your comment on the phenomenon. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： At first
23、 sight of the picture, my eyes are brightened by the pretty girl, beaming with a simile on her face. She is a typical American girl, but she dresses in our traditional Chinese costume. It seems that the girl is very proud of the Chinese costume. It goes without saying that the picture indicates that
24、 a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all human beings. Actually the girl stands for two different culturesnational and international cultures. Her charming smile is the essential touch of the whole picture, which symbolizes the harmonious blending of the two cult
25、ures. With economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become a necessary trend of the times. On the one hand, a large number of people from different countries have been pouring into China. On the other hand, Chinese people are also exposed to different foreign cultures when they
26、 go abroad or when more foreign people come to China. In this way, people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon is good to all of us. It is an effective way to achieve efficient cross-cultural communication and promote world peace and prosperity.)解析：解析： 本文首段简要地描述了图画的客观信息，并加了作者的主观设想。次段阐述其含义，指出图中女孩代表的是东西方文化的融合，中国和世界的交流越来越频繁、紧密。末段给出评论，指出这一趋势是有利的，跨文化交流是世界的大趋势。在描绘图画时，考生可以增加亮点词汇，如发带 ribbon、少数民族 minority group、妇女饰品 accessories 等。
