1、考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 9 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own un
2、derstanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write a
3、bout 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_4.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2
4、.00）_5.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_6.Write an essay of 160-200 words based
5、on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_考研英语（短文写作）-试卷 9 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12
6、.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently o
7、n the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_正确
8、答案：(正确答案： This picture shows a light in the darkness. I think the oil lamp stands for the love and help, and the darkness is the troubles and the hard time we have. The darker the room is, the brighter the light looks. It is true that the harder the situation is, the more valuable love is. One good
9、example to illustrate this love is the “Hope Project“. As we all know, although our economy is much better than that years ago, a great gap still remains between the east and the west regions, and between large cities and rural areas. Thousands of poor children are forced to quit school because of p
10、overty. All works of life have worried about this situation. “Hope Project“, which is proposed just in time, calls for people to show their love for those children unable to go to school, and tens of thousands of people have lent their hands without asking for any return. The best way to show love,
11、I think, is to stay beside others when they are in trouble. Just as the picture shows, love is most needed when it is dark and those who stand by you when you are in trouble are the most precious. So, when you see others in a dilemma, do not flee or stand by. You should give him or her a hand, and y
12、ou will also be illuminated by your virtue.)解析：解析： 按题目要求，本文分三段成文。第一段写了对于图画象征意义的理解，重申爱是黑暗中的一盏灯。第二段提到了希望工程，是一个与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。第三段提出了自己的建议，最后以一个长句子做了较强的结尾。全文段落层次清晰，语言表达自然流畅，词汇使用丰富，长短句结合。4.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing
13、 briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： This picture depicts that a bottle has fallen down to the ground, with almost half of the liquid spilling out. Two men are on the scene, one being still
14、happy, saying “How lucky it is that there is some left“. However, the other man becomes frustrated, lamenting “It“s all over and hopeless“ with his face covered by one hand. The man on the left stands for those who are pessimistic when facing troubles, and under such circumstances all they are able
15、to see is misery and the negative side. The man on the right is a representative of the optimists, who always sense the brightness through the dark and take the initiative to penetrate a way out when in difficulties. In my view, we should avoid the left man“s thinking pattern. Every rose has its tho
16、rns and life is filled with tons of possible troubles. If we succumbed to our weak mental situation, then we are destined to fail and may never resurrect. Only by focusing ourself on the positive side can we acquire firmness, strength, and happiness.)解析：解析： 本文首段描述漫画内容，第二段指出漫画的寓意两种人代表两种不同的生活态度，第三段用比喻
17、论述作者的观点，并提出建议。文章层次清晰，构思严谨，内容丰富，论述有力。语言生动形象，句式变化多端，选词恰当、词汇丰富。5.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 poi
18、nts) （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As is illustrated in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together travel in the journey of life. Accordingly, this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today“s society: the people who are in the dark and want to turn the corn
19、er can not make it respectively but in turn have to choose to pull together in times of trouble. There are several reasons accounting for this. Since we have to live in an on-the-move lifestyle, we may encounter various plights, where we would be at a loss. So it“ s better to seek for others“ assist
20、ance. Further more, if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemmas, we will not realize our dream. And to build a harmonious society in China, no issue is as basic as to conduct coordination in face of disasters. Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize t
21、he value of mutual aid. It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage people to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they a
22、re in trouble. Only in those ways, can we make people, even strangers, help each other.)解析：解析： 范文正确解读了图画的深层含义，主题思想鲜明，论述的层次清晰严谨，论据紧紧围绕中心，合乎逻辑性。第一段概括了图画反映出的寓意，第二段分析了遇到困境相互帮助的必要性，第三段提出了如何发扬互帮互助的精神。句子与句子、段落与段落之间采用了多种衔接手法，过渡自然通畅，整体性强。6.Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In yo
23、ur essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As can be seen from the cartoon, different persons hold different views towards o
24、ne thing. In the picture, the striker doesn“t believe himself and magnifies that the chance of a successful shoot is slim. While the goal-keeper simply thinks in a different way that he can“t defend the goal successfully. There is no doubt that the cartoonist wants to emphasize the importance of sel
25、f-confidence in our daily life. With the rapid development of global economy, competition is becoming increasingly fierce in all walks of society, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. Subjective mental status may result in distinction in personal views, just as the goal-keeper and the st
26、riker in the drawing. Facing different challenges and difficulties, we should hold enough self-confidence and optimism for better survival and more achievements. Suppose one always doubts his or her ability when trying something, he or she is supposed to have little chance to win. Therefore, it is n
27、ecessary to embrace the strong faith that we can fulfill our task and make a distinction. From my perspective, we should keep positive and optimistic in the face of difficulties and any other situations. Only in this way can we have more chances to win during our limited lifetime.)解析：解析： 本文正确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切合题意，并且涵盖了题目中所给的信息点；结构完整合理，层次分明，每一段的段落主题句都出现在句首，段落衔接紧凑。句子形式具有多样性，语言表达通顺。
