1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 269 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the Picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on paying with phone. You
2、 should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_3.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Living with Parents or Not? You should include in your essay for-and-against views on living with parents and your own choice. You should write at least
3、120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_4.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Prevention is better than cure.“ You can cite examples to illustrate why prevention better helps in working out a problem. You should write at least 120 words but no
4、 more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_5.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Misfortune may be an actual blessing.“ You can cite examples to illustrate the benefit that misfortune may bring. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：
5、2.00）_6.1现在有许多大学生参与商业活动 2对大学生是否应该参与商业活动有许多说法 3我的看法（分数：2.00）_大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 269 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the Picture below. You should start your essay with a brief descrip
6、tion of the picture and then comment on paying with phone. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Paying with PhoneNO Substitute for Cash As is illustrated in the picture, the woman is intended to pay with her phone, but the cashier told her that the la
7、st person paid a huge sum of money accidentally. Seemingly funny, the picture reveals that when we are enjoying the convenience brought by paying with phone, some severe problems are also caused. First, since each payment is traceable, people hate the idea that their transactions are monitored and t
8、racked. Second, security of accounts is another big issue. Hackers may crack the password of bank accounts and incur huge losses to both banks and individuals. In addition, average citizens have little control over how the database that stores all the personal information would work and they are dee
9、ply concerned that their private information may be illegally given out or sold to others. In conclusion, when enjoying the convenience of paying with phone, people should not lose sight of the accompanying risks. Before a sound system of electronic transactions can be invented, paying with phone is
10、 still no substitute for cash.)解析：3.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Living with Parents or Not? You should include in your essay for-and-against views on living with parents and your own choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
11、（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Living with Parents or Not? Living with Parents or Not? Some people enjoy living under the same roof with their parents even after they have grown up. They hold the opinion that when living with parents they can take better care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile, they
12、can turn to their parents for help if they have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable. Others, however, prefer to live by themselves. They cherish the idea to be independent, seek more freedom and have a place of their own, in which they can do whatever they lik
13、e. Besides, they dont want to be overprotected by their parents, and they long for a chance to face the society by themselves. As for me, I like an independent life style in spite of the fact that I love my parents. Living separately, each generation can enjoy different lifestyles, to addition, by l
14、iving an independent life I can develop an ability to deal with things happening in my life and build up the confidence that I can manage my own life well.)解析：4.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Prevention is better than cure.“ You can cite example
15、s to illustrate why prevention better helps in working out a problem. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Prevention is Better than Cure Prevention is Better than Cure As we all know, prevention and cure are both important in our life Cure is the fina
16、l solution of a problem However, in my opinion, prevention is better than cure. It means we should plan everything ahead, expect the unexpected and anticipate the trouble in advance. First of all, preventing a problem is much cheaper than solving a problem Looking for solution is always costly and t
17、ime-consuming For example, people could prevent catching a cold if they dress warmly and get good rest when the weather first gets cold in winter. But many people get sick because they fail to do so and have to spend much more money and time seeing a doctor. Secondly, everyone may experience hardshi
18、p and encounter crisis. It would be fatal if danger happens. Thus we ought to have disaster drills at home and practice emergency plans if possible. To sum up, an ounce of prevention beats a pound of cure. People who plan prevent, people who prevent prevail.)解析：5.For this part, you are allowed 30 mi
19、nutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Misfortune may be an actual blessing.“ You can cite examples to illustrate the benefit that misfortune may bring. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Misfortune May Be an Actual Blessing Many people co
20、mplain about their misfortune as if it is the end of the world. However, we should realize that things change constantly. Therefore sometimes misfortune may be an actual blessing. In my opinion, we should be optimistic since we can benefit from a temporary loss. Firstly, a loss may turn out to be a
21、gain. For instance, you would feel depressed for a rain preventing you from outing. At the same time, a friend you havent seen for a long time came and visited you. Then the regret must be displaced by the surprise of the friends visit Secondly, a loss may offer you a chance to improve yourself. If
22、you make a mistake, you will try to correct it and avoid a larger one. In this regard, misfortune leads to a final success. In all, we should bear in mind that everything is constantly changing. Life is like a box of chocolates, you will never know what you are going to get Just be optimistic, and t
23、hen we will have greater chances to make success.)解析：6.1现在有许多大学生参与商业活动 2对大学生是否应该参与商业活动有许多说法 3我的看法（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Should College Students Be Involved in Business Activities? In recent years, a new phenomenon has quietly sprung upcollege students participating in business activities. Inevitably,
24、 like many other newly-emerged things, this has also received praise and criticism. From my viewpoint, if the students can put what they have learned in school into practice or integrate their major with social activities, it is an important and valuable opportunity for them. But if they are just ob
25、sessed with the activities, that is, their exclusive goal is to earn money or to satisfy their excessive pride, it is not a wise action, and may even lead to some unexpected trouble. Whats more, if the students neglect their study, then it is no doubt putting the cart before the horse. College students who are involved in business activities should make clear to themselves the purpose of doing so, and make full use of the opportunity.)解析：
