1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）-试卷 247及答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Congratulations on Scholarship-Winning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the o
2、utline given below in Chinese. 假设你是李夏，你的朋友刘丽获得了一等奖学金，请写一封祝贺信，内容包括： 1得知朋友获得一等奖学金，向对方表达祝贺 2详述获得奖学金的意义，表达对对方的欣赏 3再次表达良好祝愿，并提出希望（分数：2.00）_3.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and
3、 then express your views on conscience or self-protection. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_4.1面对严峻的就业形势，很多人认为新毕业的大学生应该降低对工作的期望值 2但另一些人持反对意见 3我的看法（分数：2.00）_5.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a
4、brief description of the picture and then express your views on the commitment of online dealers. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_大学英语四级改革适用（作文）-试卷 247答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.For this part, you are all
5、owed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Congratulations on Scholarship-Winning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese. 假设你是李夏，你的朋友刘丽获得了一等奖学金，请写一封祝贺信，内容包括： 1得知朋友获得一等奖学金，向对方表达祝贺 2详述获得奖学金的意义，表达对对方的欣赏 3再次表达良好祝愿，并提出希望（分
6、数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： A Letter of Congratulations on Scholarship-Winning Dear Liu Li, How delighted I am when I hear that you have received the first class scholarship! This must be a special and happy moment for you. Congratulations! Everyone knows that scholarship is the best confirmation of a stude
7、nts performance. I believe you really deserve the honor since you have made great efforts in your specialized field after you entered the university. Now, your diligence and intelligence win you honor. I am not only happy for but also proud of you from the bottom of my heart. I am firmly convinced t
8、hat as an up-and-coming person, you will use your head and hands to develop your academic career to a higher level in days to come. May you make even greater achievements! Yours sincerely, Li Xia)解析：3.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You sh
9、ould start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on conscience or self-protection. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： On Conscience or Self-Protection This picture portrays such an ironic situation that a boy
10、 is walking across the street when he sees an old man falling down; however, instead of rushing to help, the boy hesitates about whether he should do him a favor or not. The phenomenon this drawing depicts has aroused a wide concern recently. In reality, more than one passerby who offered their help
11、 to the fallen old people was reported to be framed by the aged or their families in return. Shocked and frustrated though, we should stick to our faith in justice and continue to do the right things tactically. First and foremost, we cannot refrain from doing good deeds for fear of a possible risk.
12、 One small action may yield great benefits, and even save a persons life. Meanwhile, it is equally important to know some tactics before helping the fallen ones so as to protect ourselves, for example, taking a picture or asking a witness for help. In conclusion, if everybody could do a bit to the w
13、orld, it will become a paradise full of warmth and love.)解析：4.1面对严峻的就业形势，很多人认为新毕业的大学生应该降低对工作的期望值 2但另一些人持反对意见 3我的看法（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Should New Graduates Lower Job Expectations? Nowadays, college graduates are faced with a tight job market, so many people think that new graduates should lower the
14、ir job expectations. After all, it is more practical for them to accept a worse-than-expected offer than remain jobless after graduation. Furthermore, whatever jobs new graduates get, they can obtain valuable working experience and confidence in more demanding jobs in the future. However, some other
15、s argue that new graduates will lose ground if they lower job expectations. They believe that a good beginning is half the battle. In this sense, new graduates should start their careers from a relatively high point. Personally, I side with the former opinion. It is an indisputable reality that toda
16、ys university students are losing their shine, so degrees and diplomas cannot guarantee a new graduates success any longer. Lowering job expectations presents a more positive approach to job hunting for new graduates.)解析：5.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should
17、start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the commitment of online dealers. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： On the Commitment of Online Dealers What we can see in the picture is that a young woman, wh
18、o stands for the online dealers, is blowing a balloon with the word “commitment“ on it, while a consumer shrinks at the sight of this giant balloon, fearing that it might burst. Obviously, this picture aims to criticize those dishonest online dealers who break their promises. Shopping on the Interne
19、t has become a part of our life. On the one hand, the superiority of online shopping is evident. People can compare prices without walking from one shop to another. They can just settle themselves in a comfortable chair, click the mouse, and then everything is arranged. On the other hand, sometimes
20、shoppers find the products they receive are different from those shown on the computer screen; whats more, some online dealers even break their promises when the customers request a refund. As this issue has drawn attention in a wide range, every effort is made to improve online shopping. It is good to know that most shops in the cyberspace are evaluated by a customer appraisal system, so honesty has become a matter of their own interest. In addition, online shoppers should be cautious before making decisions.)解析：
