1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）-试卷 210及答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Creating a Harmonious Family For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Harmonious Family by commenting on the saying, “If family lives in harmony, all affair
2、s will prosper.“ You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_3.The Importance of a Good Start For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “A good start is half done.“ You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of a good st
3、art to success. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_4.Welcome to Join Us 1呼吁大家参加自助游社团组织的上海自助游 2参加自助游社团的好处 3如何加入自助游社团（分数：2.00）_5.A Letter to the University President 1表明写信目的：建议提高学校的教学质量 2提出具体建议，如：改进课堂教学质量，加强培养学生的自主学习能力，举办知识竞赛以促进学习风气的改善 3希望建议得到关注（分数：2.00）_大学英语四级改革适
4、用（作文）-试卷 210答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.Part I Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Creating a Harmonious Family For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Harmonious Family by commenting on the saying, “If family lives in harmony, all affairs will
5、prosper.“ You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Creating a Harmonious Family The significance of harmony in a family has long been acknowledged. As the saying goes, if the family lives in harmony, all affairs will prosper. It is widely accepted that a h
6、armonious family has many advantages. To start with, a harmonious family is good for the development of a childs personality, while children usually have mental problems if raised in a family full of quarrels. Moreover, all family members can get a lot of benefits. For example, those who live peacef
7、ully and happily often keep a good mood, hence they can achieve success more easily at work or at school. Lastly, the increase in the number of harmonious families will lead to a more harmonious society. To sum up, a harmonious family is worth all our efforts. Lets work for that, and eventually, a h
8、armonious society.)解析：3.The Importance of a Good Start For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “A good start is half done.“ You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of a good start to success. You should write at least 120 words but no more than
9、 180 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： The Importance of a Good Start Many people may start to work without a full plan or preparation: however, we should realize that a good start is half the success. It is significant to make a full preparation in the beginning of doing any job. For one thing, a good st
10、art lays a solid foundation for us. Abraham Lincoln once said, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe“. We can infer that a good beginning will never waste our time but save our energy and enable us to work more efficiently in the following process
11、. For another, a good start secures a strong position to achieve success. For instance, in a riders race, being in a good position in the starting grid is important in securing a strong position which is a key element to ensure a chance of winning the race. In all, a good beginning can bring us a lo
12、t of benefits. To achieve success, we should attach great importance to the start)解析：4.Welcome to Join Us 1呼吁大家参加自助游社团组织的上海自助游 2参加自助游社团的好处 3如何加入自助游社团（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Ladies and Gentlemen, we, DIY Tour Society, arrange self-help tours to famous tourist spots every year. And this years destinatio
13、n is Shanghai We welcome anyone who fancies delicious Shanghai cuisine and Shanghai ancient culture to join us. You can embrace a lot of benefits if joining us. To begin with, it is you who are the controller of the tour. We hold online forum to collect views and allow members to vote on the schedul
14、e. Besides, we can live with the local students from our tour league so that we can experience the real local life and specialties Lastly, you can make friends from different places in the tour, thus enlarging your knowledge of various cultures. If you want to join our society, you can send emails t
15、o . Thanks for your interest.)解析：5.A Letter to the University President 1表明写信目的：建议提高学校的教学质量 2提出具体建议，如：改进课堂教学质量，加强培养学生的自主学习能力，举办知识竞赛以促进学习风气的改善 3希望建议得到关注（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Mr. President, Im a sophomore majoring in Law. Im writing to make suggestions on improving the education quality of our un
16、iversity. First, I think there is still much room for improvement concerning our classroom education. Some teachers just recite textbooks and their courses are boring. Its not very helpful for us. We need more interaction and communication in the classes, and we welcome more lively and practical cou
17、rses. Second, we students need help to develop our initiative in our study. I hope our university can invite some famous people to deliver lectures to us on how to study. Finally, in order to get all students involved in our studies, I suggest some contests be held in the university. For example, the Department of Law can have legal knowledge contests. Thank you for reading my letter. I hope my suggestions will be seriously considered. Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：
