1、专业英语八级写作-30及答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：1，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Some parents are over-concerned about the education of their pre-school children, so they send their kids to various training programs, believing that such a move is significant for the promising prospect of their children
2、 But other parents are convinced that pre-school should spend their time enjoying themselves. Write a composition of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropria
3、te details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a l
4、oss of marks.（分数：100.00）_专业英语八级写作-30答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：1，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Some parents are over-concerned about the education of their pre-school children, so they send their kids to various training programs, believing that such a move is significant for the promising pr
5、ospect of their children. But other parents are convinced that pre-school should spend their time enjoying themselves. Write a composition of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your
6、 argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instru
7、ctions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：100.00）_正确答案：(参考范文1 Leaving Pre-schooners UnchainedEvery Friday evening, my five-year-old nephew is unhappy since he has to get up early next morning for a piano lesson instead of having a sound sleep on weekend. Actually, he is just one of the thousands of p
8、re-school children in the city suffering from the overload of a variety of training courses. From my point of view, the disadvantages of overemphasized pre-school education have outweighed its benefits and hampered childrens healthy growth.First of all, various training courses are a heavy burden to
9、 childrens physical development. At this stage childrens physical development makes it difficult for them to adapt to vast amounts of new information. And their fun-loving nature determines that they need games and outdoor activities, just as seedlings long for sunshine. Confined indoors and forced
10、to sit in lectures all day long, lively children may be turned into a group of bookworms with thick glasses and pale faces. Isnt it sad when that takes place even before the formal schooling begins! Then how can they meet the expectation of becoming backbones of the future society and Shouldering up
11、 the responsibility to build our nation into a more prosperous one?Secondly, too much pressure deprives childrens freedom, which is harmful to their psychological development. Parents send their children to training courses of various sorts for fear that their kids are not competent enough in the fu
12、ture. However, parents cannot tell precisely what fits their children and what does not. Every kid is talented in some aspects. Forced learning would only cause tension and strain or even damp the enthusiasm for future study. No adult will tolerate a whole days study with no fun and being stuffed wi
13、th arduous knowledge, let alone children. As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Last but not least, tuition of such trainings is an extra onerous financial burden for the family budget. A considerable amount of money is consumed on courses ranging from piano lesson to comput
14、er class. Sometimes, enrolling in training courses has become so trendy that parents are tempted to climb on the bandwagon. In that case it is the last straw on the camels back since the middle-aged parents have already got loads of burdens such as supporting their elderly parents and so on.As the s
15、ociety becomes increasingly sophisticated, a higher expectation on education grows naturally. However, with a multitude of unsuccessful experiences of pre-schooling, this practice may be regarded as an event with double efforts but half achievement. Childhood, as a major episode of life that produce
16、s the happiest and sweetest memory, should be treasured and protected. Therefore, I just call on all parents to unchain your children, to give time back to them.参考范文2 Pre-school Training Is BeneficialNowadays, an overwhelming majority of young parents send their pre-school kids to several training c
17、lasses of intellectual development of specialty cultivation, which has aroused tremendous concern from the public. As a result, there is a heated discussion at present on whether pre-school training is beneficial or not. Sharing the burning desire of laying a solid foundation for the childrens futur
18、e success, I totally vote for this early education.In the first place, it gives high-level starting point for childrens intellectual development. According to educationists, the period of three to five years old is known to be the stage of the utmost mental development in language acquisition and co
19、gnitive growth. Since prenatal education is well accepted among common people, there isnt any reason for parents to ignore such a golden chance of early enlightenment. In the face of keen competition, parents are willing to do their utmost in order to pave the way for their childrens development, to
20、 say nothing of discovering potentials and shaping abilities. This is especially the case in the city, where it is deeply believed that, children will envision less difficulty in their later life voyage.In addition, the classes on some musical instruments, painting, dancing and etc. help to cultivat
21、e childrens specialty and foster their interest in life. With passage of time, parents have become more down-to-earth than before. They donor expect the kids to become pianists when sending them to piano lessons, for instance. Children may receive an early education on a certain skill as an entertai
22、nment for the rest of their life. In adulthood, they will be grateful to their parents for the decision made for the sake of them.Lastly, a pre-school education may help children to better accustom themselves to formal schooling. What happens to a child in the pre-school years makes a difference in
23、his attitude towards school learning. When he or she feels familiar with the study materials and environ- ment, it is more likely for him or her to be socially and emotionally ready for the new experience of school. The parents must make an effort to kindle the childs interests. It is through interest and confidence that a child first senses the pleasure of learning.In conclusion, pre-school training plays such an important role that it cannot be ignored by parents and the community. And it deserves further attention and dedication from educators and the society.)解析：
