1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 80及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company. Write an email to all staff: telling them which department you are moving to saying when you will be moving department explaining what your new responsibi
2、lities will be. Write 40-50 words.二、 PART TWO 2 You recently attended a one-month training course for shorthand. You were disappointed with the course and you have decided to write a letter of complaint to the training company. Read the advertisement below, which gives details of the course. You hav
3、e already made some notes on the advertisement. Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your letter to Shirley Taylor at ABC Certification Services. Do not include postal addresses. Write 120-140 words.ABC Certification ServicesGood for business, good for you. In an era of fast-breaking online
4、 news, shorthand remains a core skill for todays journalists and one that must not be compromised. If you havent got shorthand youre just too slow. Our courses will help you develop the ability to take shorthand and read back an accurate note. Shirley TaylorABC HouseSummerfield RoadOxford OX84DN BEC
5、商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 80答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A Dear All I am writing to inform you that I am going to change a department next Monday 5 May. In My new position will take place in the Marketing department, where I am going to be responsible of promoting the new products. And also to ensure thei
6、r productivity. Regards Band 3 The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on the reader is satisfactory. Sample B To: all staff From: Karen Mller /Sales Manager Date: Ju
7、ne 2nd , 2007 Subject: Department Transfer Dear Colleagues, I would like you to know that I will leave this department in order to take over a new job in the purchasing department. My new employment will start on July 1st , 2007 and my main duty will be to negotiate supply contracts. Thank you. Kare
8、n Band 5 The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Dear Mrs. Taylor, I am writing to complain about a training course for shorthand which I attended on Ma
9、rch 15th. When I booked this course, I chose your company as it came highly recommended and the courses seemed to be of a high standard. I was promised an experienced trainer but unfortunately he was sick and the replacement was not as good as expected. Regarding the information packs there were onl
10、y a pile of loose photocopies, which was not the high-quality information packs as you promised. The class was supposed to be about 8 people but in mine there were about 15. Finally. I should make it clear that the class started one hour late, and the lunch that was served was extremely cold. I am sure you can understand my disappointment. I would therefore be glad if you could investigate this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Grace Swift
