1、BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 20及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 In the office where you work, there is a problem with the computers. Write an email to Bob Hargreaves, the IT engineer at your company: saying which office you work in describing what is wrong with the computers requesting repairs as soon as possible. Write 3
2、0-40 words on your Answer Sheet. 二、 PART TWO 2 Read part of a fax below from Gerald Davis, a colleague in the London office of your company. As you know, we regularly use the Station Hotel in London for business meetings. However, some clients have recently complained about the business facilities a
3、t the hotel. We would be grateful if you could give us your opinion. For your next visit on 28th August, would you prefer to stay there or at another hotel? In addition, would you like us to arrange a company car from the airport? Write a fax to Gerald Davis: giving your opinion of the Station Hotel
4、 comparing its business facilities with another hotel saying which hotel you would prefer in August accepting the company car. Write 60-80 words on your Answer Sheet. Do not include any postal addresses. BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 20答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Dear Bob I work in the headquarter and have some
5、problems to start the consolidation program. I have got the following error message “There is not enough space“. Could you please check that for me? Thanks Claudia Band 4 All the content points have been achieved in this response, but the request does not communicate sufficient urgency for this to g
6、ain the top band. Sample B Hello Bob In the Quality dept. where I work, we have a problem with our computers. From Monday we have not been able to log on the MRB program. Can you please come and repear this as soon as possible. Regards Band 5 This is a very good attempt at the task set, achieving al
7、l content points. No effort is required by the reader. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Dear Mr Davis. Thank you for your fax. Im very pleased to stay in your hotel. The service in your hotel is very good. But the business facilites, in the hotel are: less professional than others;: And some equipment is in sho
8、rtage. But I think it still as room for improvements. This time I am going to stay in Great Hotel in the city centre due to the venue of the conference is in downtown. And I will accept the company car you offered. I am looking forward to see you. Yours faithfully. Weija Chang Band 2 From the candid
9、ates answer, it is clear that s/he did not fully understand the task, so despite reasonable language control and a range of appropriate expressions and suitable register, the reader would be confused as to the purpose of the fax. Consequently, a higher mark could not be awarded. Sample D Dear Mr Dav
10、is Im reference to your fax, the Sation Hotel is not bad, but the Palace Hotel is better. The problem of the Station Hotel is that the conference room is too small and there arent enough suports to do a presentation. Also the staff is rude. The Palace Hotel is more for business people and they have
11、a great conferance room. It would be fantastic if a company car can pick up me at the airport on the 28th August. At the time Ill arrive its difficult to find taxis. Thank you very much Yours Sincerelly BH Band 5 All the content points are clearly covered, and effective use is made of a good range of grammar and vocabulary. There are a number of minor errors, but these do not impede the communication of the message.
