1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 91及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 How to Manage Our Emotions? Our emotions control how we think, feel, behave and actions we take. They also directly affect our bodies. With more pressures from work and life, people nowadays are more inclined to lose control of their emotions. The capacit
2、y to manage emotions is important for everyone. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic： How to Manage Our Emotions? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last
3、part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 2 The Importance of Developing Self-discipline In todays society, temptations are almost everywhere. There are various interesting computer games to play. There are a variety of TV programs tempting you into knowing the ending o
4、f the story. There are various invitations from friends. Thus if college students can not keep themselves in line, their precious free time may be wasted and their goals may get shattered. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of Developing Self-discipline You
5、 are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 3 Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals The modern soc
6、iety provides people with more opportunities than before. Some young people may become successful overnight. But actually, immediate fame and recognition usually wont last long. What should be encouraged is to pursue long-term, realistic goals. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following
7、 topic: Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 4 The
8、 Importance of the Sense of Social Responsibility Everyone is a member of the society. Each individual is closely related to and bears obligations to others. Sense of social responsibility is very important to every human being, because building a better society requires peoples mutual efforts. Writ
9、e a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of the Sense of Social Responsibility You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring
10、 what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 5 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will There goes a humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.“ This funny statement ironically reflects the importance of a strong will. Just
11、 as we cant reach the top of a mountain without unremitting climbing, we cant achieve success without will. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In th
12、e second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 91答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 【正确答案】 How to Manage Our Emotions? Because of the pressure from work or study, many of us sometimes lose our temp
13、er and are hysterical. To manage our emotions is thus very important for social harmony. I think we could follow some basic rules to control ourselves. First of all, we could count to ten, when we want to go on an outburst. When we are angry, we might lose our mind and shout at the person in convers
14、ation. To count to ten could make our furious steam cool off and return to sanity. In this way, our dialogue will be more sensible, rather than emotional. Secondly, venting our pent-up emotions in a harmless way is also helpful. If we suppress our feelings, we would be a ticking time bomb, which wou
15、ld lead to disastrous consequences when it blows up. That is why we have to release the held-back emotions on a regular basis. For instance, we could climb to the peak of a mountain and shout at the top of our lungs. We could also shoot things in some licensed shooting galleries. Once the emotions a
16、re re-leased, they are properly addressed and easier to manage. In conclusion, it is wise to calm down when we are about to get raging; it is also wise to release our emotions in a healthy manner. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “品德修养 ”。该题要求考生对 “如何控制情绪 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从 “压力大 ”入题，指出我们可以遵循一
17、些基本的准则来控制自我。 主体：阐述控制情绪的方法。 1当我们准备要爆发的时候，我们可以数数数到十。数数能消怒。 2用无害的方式来发泄积聚的情绪。举登高疾呼和射击为例。 结尾：要控制情绪就要懂得保持冷静和适当地释放。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 The Importance of Developing Self-discipline College students have to deal with more temptations than their parents did decades ago. Computer games, MTV, parties, social ac
18、tivities. the list could go on. Under this context, it is more important to develop self-discipline among college students. First of all, self-discipline keeps our endeavors on track. We might wish to be a professional lawyer, accountant, or interpreter. These professions all require lots of time an
19、d efforts. A strong sense of self-discipline would help us fight against the temptations and make sure that we would not lose the limited and valuable time in the distractions from computers or TVs. Secondly, self-discipline shapes students to be persistent and focused. Weak-minded students are easi
20、ly tempted to give up the arduous pursuit of knowledge and turn to earthly pleasure. Self-discipline, however, urges students to get persistent in their undertakings. This quality, once developed, will benefit us for life. For instance, when we graduate and work in a company, we will stick to the ta
21、sks assigned and control ourselves not to slacken or procrastinate. In conclusion, self-discipline is helpful to fulfill our dreams and keep us focused and perseverant on the targets. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “品德修养 ”。该题要求考生对 “培养自律的重要性 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从对比现在大学生和父辈们所受诱惑入题，指出大学生培养自律精神的
22、重要性。 主体：阐述原因。 1自律能让我们不断努力，不受干扰。 2自律能让学生变得坚韧不拔、心无旁骛。举在公司工作为例。 结尾：重申观点：自律能有助我们实现梦想，让我们心无旁骛、坚定目标。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正 确答案】 Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals With the stories of overnight billionaires, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg, many college students are thinking about their
23、billions of dollars, but they dont know what to do but wait Under this context, I think young people should pursue long-term and realistic goals. Long-term goals can make us far-sighted. A major problem of young people is too benefit-driven. They would ask, “If I do this and that, what can I get fro
24、m it, immediately?“ A long-term goal would enable them to focus on the bigger picture, instead of being obsessed with trivial and instant benefits. It is estimated that the odds to become a billionaire in china is less than 0.0007%. While daydreams of becoming billionaires are too difficult to be re
25、alized, they may finally frustrate us. Realistic goals can make us surefooted. They are often easier to be reached, which can make us more confident. The more surefooted and confident we are, the more possible we are to be successful. In conclusion, young people should pursue long-term and realistic
26、 goals, because these goals can teach them to look beyond the present and make them more surefooted and confident. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “品德修养 ”。该题要求考生对 “年轻人应追求长期、现实的目标 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从比尔 ?盖茨和马克 ?扎克伯格入题，指出年轻人应该追求长远和现实的目标。 主体：阐述原因。 1长远的目标能让我们有远见，不会太急功近利、只着眼于眼前。 2现实的目标能使我们脚踏实地，不会
27、总是做不切实际的白日梦。 结尾：重申观点，长远和现实的目标能使年轻人更有远见、更加稳重。 【知识 模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 The Importance of the Sense of Social Responsibility Human beings are social animals: we live in groups; we work in groups. As John Donne said, “No one is an island“. Because of this, the importance of having a sense of social responsi
28、bility is fairly prominent. First of all, the sense of social responsibility is beneficial to our social cohesion. Some of us complain that our society is rather fragmented, and not as cohesive as it used to be. One major cause of this fragmentation is that we only mind our own business, without the
29、 sense to serve others and the society. If, however, driven by the sense of social responsibility, we would offer our helping hands to those in need, and we would feel nice and warm in the society. Secondly, the sense of social responsibility will make us behave ourselves in public, which is helpful
30、 for building a better society. When we walk around major cities, we could invariably notice that some people spit and litter in the street These people, I dare say, are blind to social responsibility and put their needs before a clean and tidy public environment If their sense of social responsibil
31、ity is enhanced, they would be more civic-minded. In conclusion, the sense of social responsibility is of vital importance to our social cohesion and civic virtues. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “品德修养 ”。该题 要求考生对 “社会责任感的重要性 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从约翰 ?邓恩的诗句 “没有谁是一个孤岛 ”入题，指出社会责任感非常重要。 主体：阐述原因。 1社
32、会责任感有助提高社会凝聚力，使我们乐于助人。 2社会责任感能令我们在公共场所注意自己的行为，有助于建设更美好的社会。 结尾：重申观点，社会责任感对社会凝聚力和社会公德都是十分重要的。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Maybe most of us have heard of the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world Ive done it hundreds of times.“ But have you e
33、ver thought about its implication? In my eyes, for those who claim to have practiced smoking-quitting for hundreds of times, what they lack most is a strong will. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Everyone has a unique definition of success. When it comes to how to succeed, it is always easier
34、 said than done. Without a strong will, one can never give up smoking once and for all, not to mention being successful in other endeavors. It is a strong will that contributes to the success of the Olympic winners, that results in the spectacular victory of the World Expo, and that leads to the suc
35、cessful exploration of the moon. No one can deny the fact that a strong will is the vital point to accomplish ones task It helps us overcome the difficulties and paves the road to success. Just as the old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. Only when the will is strong enough will th
36、e way lead us to success. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “表达看法 ”型论说文，涉及的题材是 “品德修养 ”。要求从 “戒烟是世界上最容易的事情，我已经戒了几百次。 ”这句话说起，对文章主题“意志坚定方能万事成功 ”进行分析。根据题目要求，可以将文章内容安排如下： 开头：从 “戒烟最简单了，我已经戒过几百次了 ”这句话说起，提出疑问：可曾想过这句话的言外之意 ?提出自己的观点： 意志坚定方能万事成功。 主体：以具体实例对主旨进行论证。只有意志鉴定，才能永远地把烟戒掉。奥运会的获奖健将们，世博会的成功举办，人类对月球的成功探索 这些都离不开坚定的意志。 结尾：总结并再次重申文章主旨。 【知识模块】 作文
