1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 51及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Should the Chinese Government Purchase the Relics Lost Overseas? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below: 1)拍卖会上经常可以见到流失海外的中国文
2、物； 2)有人建议政府出资把它们购回； 3)“我 ”认为我们不应该出钱购买这些文物。 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “Prevention is better than cure“. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you
3、are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Personalised Online Services. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your essay on the chart and the outline given below:某中型城市网络个性化服务交易情况：1)网络个性化服务在大中城市越来越流行。网络个性化服务，即：顾客把求购商品的信息 (如：大小、颜色、样式等 )通过网络发送给生产厂家，由生产厂家根据顾客的要
4、求生产出产品，然后通过邮局邮寄给顾客。 2)解释网络个性化服务流行的原因： 3)“我 ”的看法。 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled by commenting on the remark “Man proposes, god disposes“. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 5 For this
5、 part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Problems Resulting from the Sponsorship Fee. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below: 1)现在很多中小学甚至幼儿园向家长收取 “赞助费 ”，不交费的孩子有可能无法入学； 2)这种现象会带来什么问题： 3)如何杜绝这种现象。 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 51答案与解析
6、一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 In recent years, some precious Chinese relics lost overseas have been put up for auction. Some people advocate that the Chinese government should purchase these relics at whatever price, while others hold the opposite attitude. As for me. I am in favour of the latter opini
7、on.(提出观点段 ) Of course. China is financially able to purchase the relics back thanks to the economic boom of these decades. Also, some patriots are afraid that if these precious relics went into some immoral peoples hands, they may never be found again. But it doesnt mean that the Chinese government
8、has to get them back by purchasing. From my point of view, the Chinese government should not buy these lost relics.(反面论证段 ) The following reasons can account for my argument. First, the government should make use of diplomatic channels to have the stolen or looted relics returned to China. Or they c
9、an be displayed in proper museums. Second, it is ridiculous to buy back the properties which originally belong to us at extremely high prices. To conclude, the Chinese government shouldnt be encouraged to purchase the relics lost overseas.(正面论证段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于提纲式文字命题 作文。提纲第 l点描述一种现象，提纲第2点指出一些人的观点；提纲第
10、 3点指出 “我 ”对这种观点的不赞成态度，由此可判断本文应为对比分析型作文，写作的重点是对 “我 ”不赞成的观点的批判和对 “我 ”赞成的观点的论证。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 That prevention is better than cure has been generally accepted. It tells us that we should plan everything ahead and prepare for the unexpected and anticipate trouble in advance. The truth of it is self-
11、evident.(提出观点段 ) Many remarkable examples account for this argument. A case in point is preparing houses against a rainy day. This is close to suggest the importance of preventing troubles from happening is better than finding solutions to them after their occurrence. For another example, every time
12、 before a terrible weather change, the National Meteorological Centre will issue an alert to warn people against possible danger. Moreover, people who pay great attention to their healtii are less likely to contract incurable diseases.(论证观点段 ) Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw
13、the conclusion that planning ahead is better than locking the barn door after the horse is stolen. But what is worth noting is that the preparation should be moderately, or we may become alarmists. To conclude, an ounce of prevention beats a pound of cure.(总结观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求评论 “与其补救于已然不如
14、防患于未然 ”(Prevention is better than cure)这一观点，题目含义清晰，考生不易跑题，这方面的例子很多，相关的成语也很多，如： “未雨绸缪 ”、 “亡羊补牢 ”等，都可以用上为文章添彩。文章展开的时候把重点放在 “防患于未然 ”的优点上，因此本文属 于观点论证型作文。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 According to the chart, we clearly learn that personalised online services are more and more popular among people. As early as in 2
15、006. we could seldom see any signs of personalised online services in a middle-sized city. Then 6 years later, the turnover of personalised online services in this middle-sized city had soared sharply to almost 100 million.(描述图表段 ) There are many reasons accounting for the tremendous growth of perso
16、nalised online services. Firstly, the personalised online services emphasise on meeting the customers individual needs. This kind of service will surely win the popularity in a society where more and more people attach vital importance to their personal preferences. Secondly, the personalised online
17、 service is convenient and time-saving. Finally, as a new business, the personalised online service caters for the fashion, and therefore it attracts a large number of young people.(说明原因段 ) As far as I am concerned, the personalised online service is a promising business. For one thing, the ever-dev
18、eloping science and technology will cut down the cost of e-commerce, thus making the personalised online service more affordable for a wider range of consumers. For another, the convenience of the Internet and the popularity of individuality will attract more people to choose personalised services.
19、To conclude, personalised online services will have greater development space and become an important part in our life in the near future.(阐述观点段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于 提纲式图表命题作文。提纲第 l点要求描述图表中反映的现象，提纲第 2点要求解释这种现象流行的原因，提纲第 3点要求谈谈个人看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文，写作的重点是对图表中数据的描述和对其所反映现象的原因的分析。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 There is a
20、 well-known proverb. “Man proposes, God disposes“. It means that the planning lies with man, the outcome with heaven. The truth of it is deep and profound(提出观点段 ). Many remarkable reasons account for this argument. First of all, mans effort is a necessity in achieving a goal. Many successful people
21、attribute their achievement to their persistent endeavor. Furthermore, in many cases our final outcome may be influenced by chances. For example. Li Yuchun, a popular singer, becomes famous through the TV programme “Super Girls“ while many other girls with singing strength are not as lucky as she. S
22、o, ones success is decided by his effort but the outside factors also exert influenced on it.(论证观点段 ). All mentioned above tells us that its our endeavour that determine our destiny. It is up to ourselves whether we go ahead or backward. Therefore,we should do our best in everything we do and the su
23、ccessful opportunity will finally knock our doors.(总结观点段） 【试题解析】 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求阐述谚语 “谋事在人，成事在天 ”(Man Proposes， God Disposes)这句话中蕴含的道理，我们首先要明确大方向：人的努力为决定因素，机遇等外部因素会起影响作用，这点不能偏差，因此应把论述的重点放在 “某事在人 ”(Man proposes)上，即人的努力是做成一件事情的关键 。很明显，本文应该是观点论证型作文。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 In modern society, the sponsorship
24、 fee is charged in quite a few high and elementary schools, even kindergartens. Obviously, it brings about a series of social problems. Whats worse, those who refuse to render the payment may be deprived of the right to enter the school they apply for.(描述问题段 ) It is very clear that the charge of the
25、 sponsorship fee chiefly affects the society in two aspects. First of all, as we believe, everyone is born equal. However, charging the sponsorship fee may raise a seeming discrimination between the rich and the poor, which may lead to the instability of the whole society. Those who cant afford the
26、fee will be left behind and end up in poverty. Even worse, theres not a chance for them to turn the corner. Therefore, it is urgent to come up with a method to end this. First, the government should enact regulations to impose on schools. Whats more, the parents should firmly reject the discrimination and fight for their rights with law. Only through the efforts from both parties can the unfairness be eliminated.(说明方法段 ) 【试题解析】 本题属于提纲式文字命题作文。提纲第 1点指出一种不良现象，提纲第 2点要求分析这种现象带来的问题，提纲第 3点要求说明解决问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文，写作的重点是对问题危害和解决方法的说明。 【知识模块】 作文
