1、单元主题写作十一,单元主题写作十一,话题分析,本单元以“谈论过去的事情”为话题，要求同学们能用一般过去时描述学校郊游、集体活动或自己与家人、朋友等一起开展活动的情况，并且能与同伴进行口头交流或以日记、书信形式记录下活动情况。,单元主题写作十一,写作要求： 1能用一般过去时描述过去的活动； 2能用相关的动词短语描述郊游的活动内容(时间、地点、 天气、交通、活动和感受等)。 3能用great/terrible/interesting/exciting/boring等形容词表 达对郊游的感受； 4在写作中要正确运用日记和书信的格式。,单元主题写作十一,典型例题,请根据下面的内容提示写一篇英语短文，描
2、述你们去农场郊游的经历。 内容提示： 1上周六，你们骑自行车去阳光农场(Sunshine Farm)郊游。 2上午你们给奶牛挤奶、喂鸡，还摘了新鲜的(fresh)蔬菜。 3下午你们在农场散步，和农场主聊天。 4你们玩得很开心。 要求：1. 70词左右；2. 可适当发挥想象。,单元主题写作十一,思路点拨,单元主题写作十一,素材积累,单词 1马 _ 2种植；生长；发育 _ 3农场；务农；种田 _ 4采；摘 _ 5乡村；农村 _,horse,grow,farm,pick,countryside,单元主题写作十一,6礼物；赠品 _ 7所有事物；一切 _ 8使人兴奋的；令人激动的 _ 9可爱的 _ 10
3、昂贵的 _,gift,everything,exciting,lovely,expensive,单元主题写作十一,短语 1给奶牛挤奶 _ 2骑马 _ 3喂鸡 _ 4在乡下；在农村 _ 5总的说来 _,milk a cow,ride a horse,feed chickens,in the countryside,all in all,单元主题写作十一,6对感兴趣 _ 7去散步 _ 8与交谈 _ 9爬山 _ 10照相 _,be interested in,go for a walk,talk with/to,climb the mountain/go to the mountain,take p
4、hotos(pictures)/a photo(picture),单元主题写作十一,句型 根据括号中的英文提示词，将下列句子翻译成英语。 1我们昨天去农场摘了一些草莓。(pick) _ 2上周他们的学校郊游非常有趣。(trip) _,We went to the farm and picked some strawberries yesterday.,Last week their school trip was very interesting.,单元主题写作十一,3你们在山上看见了什么？(mountain) _ 4今天早上吉姆和他的朋友去湖边钓鱼了。(go fishing) _ 5昨天，我
5、妈妈教我怎样包饺子了。(teach) _,What did you see in the mountain?,This morning Jim and his friends went fishing by the lake.,My mother taught me how to make dumplings yesterday.,单元主题写作十一,Last Saturday we had a great school trip. We went to Sunshine Farm by bike. In the morning, we milked cows and fed chickens.
6、 We also went to the field to pick some fresh vegetables. It was interesting. In the afternoon, we went for a walk on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about his farm. We learned a lot and we had a good time on the farm. We were tired but happy.,高分模板,单元主题写作十一,名师点评,1文章结构清晰，
7、结尾(We were tired but happy.)与开头(Last Sunday we had a great school trip.)相呼应。文章主体按时 间顺序分别描述了上午和下午的活动。 2文章较好地运用一般过去时描述了去农场郊游的经历(包括时间、地点、 交通工具、活动和感受等)。 3运用了本单元所学词汇，如milk cows, feed chickens, on the farm, talk with等，做到了学以致用，为文章增色不少。,单元主题写作十一,小试身手,请你根据提示，写一篇短文，记述你们的一次学校郊游。 提示： 1. 上周二，我和我的同学、老师乘坐公共汽车去了儿童乐
8、园。 2. 在门口照相，坐过山车(roller coaster)。 3. 中午在餐馆吃面条。 4. 下午购物，返回。,单元主题写作十一,要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点提示，可以适当发挥；2. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last Tuesday, I went to the Childrens Fun Park with my classmates and teachers. _ _,单元主题写作十一,One possible version： Last Tuesday, I went to the Childrens Fun Park with my classmates and
9、 teachers. We took a bus to the park. At the gate we took some photos. After that, we rode the roller coaster. We were all excited when we rode it. At noon, we were hungry, so we went to a noodle house to eat noodles. In the afternoon, we went shopping and bought some gifts. Then we took the bus back to school. We enjoyed ourselves and hoped to go there again.,
