1、Unit 3,A taste of English humour,Section Writing,如何写幽默类叙事性记叙文 一、文体感知 1文体特点 故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用: (1)要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when),地点(where),人物(who),事件(what),原因(why)和过程(how)。 (2)要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物,然后写事件的原因及发展过程,最后写结果。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文,使整个文章融为一体。,2亮点句式 (1)One day/The other day,sb.plan
2、ned/intended/wanted/hoped to.某一天/几天前,某人计划/打算/想要/希望 (2)Unfortunately/Fortunately/Suddenly,sb.found that. 不幸的是/幸运的是/突然,某人发现 (3)sb.ran into/came across/met with.in the.某人在遇到了 (4)sb.felt very content/happy/sad/terrible/embarrassed. 某人感到非常满意/高兴/伤心/可怕/尴尬 (5)sth.happened to sb. 某人突然发生了某事 (6)It hit/occurred
3、 to/struck sb.that.某人突然想到,3写作模板 (事件)happened _(时间,地点).Luckily/Surprisedly/To onesurprise _(结果). When _(另一件事件发生),(这件事).At first,_事件进行的情况.Then/Suddenly,_(情况发生转变).Later,_(情况的变化).In the end/At last,_(事情的结局).In my opinion/I think,_(观点或看法).If_(条件),希望或建议.,二、典题演练 结合下面的提要,写一篇100个词左右的幽默故事。 1一个过度肥胖的妇女找医生,想寻求减肥
4、的方法; 2医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天,然后隔一天(skip a day),再反复如此两周; 3一段时间后,她减肥将近20磅。医生很吃惊; 4秘诀:跳跃。,1完成句子 (1)一个过度肥胖的妇女找她的医生,想寻求减肥的方法。 A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight. (2)她的医生让她节食。 Her doctor put her on a diet. (3)医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天,然后隔一天(skip a day),再反复如此两周。 The doctor advised he
5、r to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days, then skip a day, and do it like this for 2 weeks.,(4)下次我见你时,你会至少减去5磅。 The next time I see you,you will have lost at least 5 pounds. (5)一段时间后,当她回来时,她减肥将近20磅。 Some time later, when she returned she lost nearly 20 pounds. (6)她的医生很吃惊。 Her doctor was shocked.,2句
6、式升级 (7)用and连接(1)(2)。 A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight,_. (8)用bydoing的形式合并(5)(6)。 Some time later,when she returned she shocked the doctor _ _.,and her doctor put her on a diet,by losing nearly,20 pounds,The Perfect Diet A terribly overweight woman went t
7、o ask her doctor about ways of losing weight,and her doctor put her on a diet. “I advise you to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days,then skip a day,and do it like this for 2 weeks.The next time I see you,you will have lost at least 5 pounds.” However,when the woman returned,she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 pounds.,“Why,thats amazing!” the doctor said.“Did you follow my instructions?” The woman nodded,“To tell you the truth,I thought I was going to drop dead on the third day.” “From hunger,you mean?” “No,from skipping.”,