1、1第十五讲 八年级下 Units 910考纲话题:人与社会人与社会是中考热点话题。该话题内容涉及广泛,如:创建和谐社会、文明城市,遵守社会公德、社会行为规范,共建美好家园等。该话题作文的命制主要围绕实际生活,要求考生根据要点提示表达个人观点,在表述时可适当发挥,以使行文连贯、表达流畅。【提分好词】陈述要点1.build the future of our country 建设我们国家的未来2.realize our Chinese Dream 实现我们的中国梦3.make a difference 有影响;起作用 4.offer ones seat to 给让座 5.be polite to
2、对有礼貌6.respect the old and take good care of the young 尊老爱幼7.raise money for 为筹钱8.spend time on volunteer work 花费时间做志愿工作表达观点1.agree with sb.同意某人的观点2.disagree with sb.反对某人的观点3.agree to do sth. 同意做某事4.be similar to. 和相似5.have the same opinion 持有同样的观点26.be different from. 和不同7.be against 反对;不赞成8.stand b
3、y 支持9.whats more 更重要的是10.on the one hand.on the other hand.一方面,另一方面11.in a word 简而言之12.last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点13.in short 总之14.all in all 总的说来15.pay more attention to.更加关注16.cause the problem of.引起问题【提分好句】陈述要点1.Its the duty for everyone to make our country better. 建设美好祖国,人人有责。2.I think we shou
4、ld keep in mind that no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference. 我认为我们应该谨记,无论多小的努力都能带来改变。3.Its our duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As students, we should do something to help. 我们有责任为实现这个目标而努力奋斗。作为学生,我们应该有所行动。4.China is one of the most ancient countries in the world. 中国是
5、世界上最古老的国家之一。5.We are supposed to speak politely. 我们说话应该有礼貌。36.Dont step on the grass or pick flowers. 不要践踏草坪,采摘花朵。7.We mustnt speak loudly in public. 公共场合不准大声喧哗。8.I believe if everyone makes an effort, our city will be one of the most wonderful places in our country. 我相信如果人人作出努力,我们的城市将成为我们国家最好的地方之一。
6、表达观点1.Nowadays, people are paying more attention to.如今,人们更加关注2.Some people think that.while others think that.一些人认为,然而另一些人认为3.It is well-known that.众所周知4.Recently,there is a discussion about.近来,就展开了一次讨论。5.I hold an opinion that.我认为6.I think it is harmful to.我认为是有害的。7.There is no doubt that.毫无疑问的是8.G
7、enerally,the advantages can be listed as follows.大体上,有以下几方面优势。9.In my opinion,it would be better to do.在我看来,做更好。10.Therefore,we have the reason to believe that.因此,我们有理由相信假设你是李华,目前你的家乡蚌埠正在创建全国文明城市,笔友 John 来信询问相关信息。请根据下列要点提示,给 John 写一封电子邮件,谈谈作为中学生你应当为此做些什么。要点提示:1.礼貌待人,遵纪守法;2.尊老爱幼,关爱他人;3.诚实守信,助人为乐。4注意:
8、1.邮件内容应包含所有要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数 80-100(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。参考词汇:civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬Dear John,Im glad to hear from you. My hometown Bengbu is trying to build a national civilized city. Li Hua【审题指导】审题时需注意提取以下信息:1.主题:作为中学生,你可以为家乡创建文明城市做些什么2.体裁:应用文3.时态:以一般现在时为主思路点拨:根据主题可知,应结合自己中学
9、生的身份,从提示的三个方面入手,结合实际情况适当发挥,表达自己为创建文明城市作贡献的方式与决心。【思维模板】5【高分佳作】Dear John,Im glad to hear from you. My hometown Bengbu is trying to build a national civilized city.As middle school students, its our duty to do something for it.First, we should be polite to people around us. For example, we should liste
10、n carefully to our teacher in class. When we meet others, we are supposed to say hello to them. And its necessary for us to follow the rules at public places. Then, we should also respect the old and take good care of the young. Offering seats to others is a good way to show our care for others. Whats more, were supposed to be honest and help people in need. Whoever is in trouble, we are supposed to lend a hand.Bengbu is my hometown. I will do my best to make it a civilized city. Li Hua【得分点拨】开门见山,点明主题通过举例,具体说明应如何礼貌待人,表达流畅运用 Whoever 引导的从句和 be in trouble,言简意赅结尾表明决心,呼应主题
