1、1写作提升练(四)读后续写1(2018浙江宁波 5 月模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in th
2、e street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not even possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave. The
3、seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on me.” she replied.“Thats nothing.Ill treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenn
4、y cried silently.“What is it?” asked the man kindly.“Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared
5、 to a stranger!”Hearing the words,the seller smiled.“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”Jenny sat t
6、here,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered mothers familiar face and weathered hands.“Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology t
7、o her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;24.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._2阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构
8、成一个完整的故事。Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he
9、 had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to himself.Then he went to the
10、bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small
11、 one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didnt notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from th
12、e bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools,he then easily
13、opened the doors of the safes.The banks security system wasnt very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:A
14、fter Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring. _Paragraph 2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man. _3_4写作提升练(四) 读后续写1Paragraph 1:Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.When she knocked at the door,she found the door was locked and her
15、mother was not in.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?” Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact
16、 that her mother really cared a lot about her,she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks. Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you,” she said,tired and relieved
17、.Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum,Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently. 2Paragraph 1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the a
18、larms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The
19、police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet. Paragraph 2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jacks wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.
