1、1写作提升练(五)读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),a lifestraw(生命吸管) and
2、a raincoat. Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize youre in trouble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate you
3、r location. What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.Thats where your three pieces of survival necessities come into play,Stewart says. For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and
4、 you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire
5、with just a spark.”Second,youll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could s
6、till save your life,Stewart says. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:“I always say that your life depends on your water source,”he said._2_Paragraph 2:You can keep all three items with you when you are away from your home. _
7、2阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Tom appeared on the sidewalk with a bucket of whitewash and a long-handled brush.He stopped at the fence in front of the house where he lived with his Aunt Polly.He looked at it,and all joy left him.The fence was long and high.He put the brush into the whitewash and mo
8、ved it along the top of the fence.He repeated the operation.He felt it was difficult for him to continue and sat down. He knew that his friends would arrive soon with all kinds of interesting plans for the day.They would walk past him and laugh.They would make jokes about his work on a beautiful sum
9、mer Saturday.The thought burned him like fire. He put his hands into his pockets and took out all that belonged to him.Perhaps he could find some way to pay someone to do the whitewashing for him.But there was nothing of value in his pockets nothing that could buy even half an hour of freedom.So he
10、put the bits of toys back into his pockets and gave up the idea. At this dark and hopeless moment,a wonderful idea came to him.It filled his mind with a great,bright light.Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.While Tom was working,Ben Rogers appeared.Ben was eating an apple a
11、s he walked along the street.As he walked along,he was making noises like the sound of a riverboat.First he shouted loudly,like a boat captain.Then he said “Ding-Dong-Dong”,“Ding-Dong-Dong” again and again,like the bell of a riverboat.And he made other strange noises.When he came close to Tom,he sto
12、pped.Tom went on whitewashing.He did not look at Ben.Ben stared for a moment and then said,“Hello!Im going swimming,but you cant go,can you?”No answer.Tom moved his brush carefully along the fence and looked at the result with the eye of an artist.Ben came nearer.Toms mouth watered for the apple,but
13、 he kept on working.Ben said,“Hello,old fellow,youve got to work,hey?”Tom turned suddenly and said,“Why,its you,Ben!I wasnt noticing.”“SayIm going swimming.Dont you wish you could?But of course youd rather work wouldnt you?Of course you would.” Tom looked at the boy a bit,and said,“Why do you call w
14、ork?”“Why,isnt that work?”Tom went back to his whitewashing,and answered carelessly.“Well,maybe it is,and maybe it isnt.All I know is,it suits Tom Sawyer.”“Oh come,now,you dont mean to say that you like it?”The brush continued to move.“Like it?Well,I dont see why I shouldnt like it.Does a boy get a
15、chance to whitewash a fence every day?”Ben stopped eating his apple.Tom moved his brush back and forth,stepped back to look at the result,added a touch here and there,and stepped back again.Ben watched every move and got more and more interested.Soon he said,“Say,Tom,let me whitewash a little.” Tom
16、thought for a moment,was about to agree;but he changed his mind.3“Nonoit wont do,Ben.You see,Aunt Polly wants this fence to be perfect.It has got to be done very carefully.I dont think there is one boy in a thousand,maybe two thousand,that can do it well enough.”“Nois that so?Oh come,nowlet me just
17、try.Only just a little.” “Ben,Id like to,but if it isnt done right,Im afraid Aunt Polly.”“Oh,Ill be careful.Now let me try.SayIll give you the core of my apple.”“Well,hereNo,Ben,now dont.Im afraid.”“Ill give you all of it.”注意:1.所叙写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成
18、后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Tom gave up the brush with unwillingness on his face,but joy in his heart. _Paragraph 2:And he had not worked.He had had a nice idle time all the time, _4写作提升练(五) 读后续写1Paragraph 1:“I always say that your life depends on your water source,”he said.“If you are in a bad s
19、ituation and have to drink water not fit to drink,you take the risk of drinking wild poisonous water,which can quickly kill you.”In this case,a lifestraw will come into play.Finally,Stewart recommends having a raincoat,or anything that can be used to protect you against the weather.“Even food should
20、 take a back seat to these three necessary items,”he says.“Everyone gets really worried about food,but the human body is designed to last a long time without food.When it comes to survival necessary items,foods on the bottom of the list,”he said. Paragraph 2:You can keep all three items with you whe
21、n you are away from your home.You can keep them in a backpack if youre hiking or camping,or even in a car if youre traveling on the road.But in a word,the best thing you can do to ensure your own survival happens before you even leave.2Paragraph 1:Tom gave up the brush with unwillingness on his face
22、,but joy in his heart.And while Ben worked at the fence in the hot sun,Tom sat under a tree,eating the apple,and planning how to get more help.There were enough boys.Each one came to laugh,but remained to whitewash.By the time Ben was tired,Tom sold the next chance to Billy for a kite;and when Billy
23、 was tired,Johnny bought in for a dead rat and so on,hour after hour.And when the middle of the afternoon came,Tom had won many treasures. Paragraph 2:And he had not worked.He had had a nice idle time all the time,with plenty of companyand the fence had been whitewashed three times.If he hadnt run out of whitewash,Tom would have owned everything belonging to his friends.He had discovered a great law of human action,namely,that in order to make a man or a boy want a thing,it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to get.
