1、考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 5 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service
2、. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_4.You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the depart
3、ment concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead
4、. Do not write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_5.Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and
5、 making an apology. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_6.You want to invite a friend to a party. Write an invitation le
6、tter to a friend: 1) saying where the party will be held, 2) giving the reason(s) for the party, and 3) stating what will be arranged. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write your address. (10 point
7、s)（分数：2.00）_考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 5 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for impr
8、oving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, As an enthusiastic reader, I am writing to share some of my suggestions with
9、 the hope of making some improvement. I have found that there are a great number of magazines out of date here. Many times it is difficult for me to find the latest reading materials I need badly. It will help us a lot if you can introduce some new journals , which will bring fresh air to the librar
10、y. Meanwhile, since the books are distributed everywhere, we can introduce a computer information searching system so as to give us effective results and save our precious time. Thank you for your reading and I am looking forward to new changes soon. Sincerely Yours, Li Ming)解析：解析： 本文围绕三段式展开，第一段开门见山
11、，直奔主题，点明写信目的；第二段委婉地指出了图书馆现存问题带来的不便之处，并提出了相应的改进措施；第三段礼貌地表达出期望尽快看到新的变化。全文结构紧凑，合情合理。4.You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you
12、 want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir or Madam, I am a teacher
13、of Renmin University of China and I would like to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote part of your province. So, I would be most grateful that you could send me the information regarding such a child who meets the following standards: First, he must be very po
14、or and truly in need of help. Second, he must have the strong desire to improve things around him. Third, he must be healthy, happy and optimistic. Last but not least, he must be willing to return to his hometown to do something for it after his graduation from the university. I will send him money
15、every year, from this year on until he finishes his higher education. Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Li Ming)解析：解析： 范文层次分明，环环相扣。第一段向有关部门提出请求，明确表达了写信的目的；第二段对自己希望捐助的儿童的特点进行了具体的描述。语言运用得体、恰当，细节内容合情合理。第三段说出
16、了自己的资助计划，并以致谢收尾。5.Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology. Write your le
17、tter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to tell you my decision to leave my position. During the
18、last two months, I have enjoyed myself in the company where the interpersonal atmosphere was pleasant. But my job as an editor requires an extraordinary broad mind and perception and I find it hard to collect and comb all the materials and finally get a logical organization. On the other hand, it is
19、 routine for people in the position to work late till morning, which exceeds my health condition since my feeble heart needs sound sleep to function. I want to make an apology for quitting my position so soon and for any inconvenience it might bring to you. I hope you can understand my apprehension.
20、 Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：解析： 本文思路清晰，结构完整。第一段点明了写作目的，即提出辞职申请。第二段陈述了两个理由，一是自己能力不适合这样的工作；二是不适应加班。结尾再一次点明自己的歉意。6.You want to invite a friend to a party. Write an invitation letter to a friend: 1) saying where the party will be held, 2) giving the reason(s) for the party, and 3) stating what will be
21、arranged. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write your address. (10 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Susan, I will be holding a dinner party at our house on Saturday, June 23, 2013 to celebrate my
22、father“s being awarded the Pulitzer Prize for journalism this year. As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at five o“ clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a buffet dinner party with a selection of food and drinks. At around eight o “clock, a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss. My family and I look forward to your presence. Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：
