1、高级写作-3 及答案解析(总分：8.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、写作题(总题数：2，分数：8.00)1.PART ONEQuestion 1 The graph below shows the number of college students studying science in China. Using the information from the graph, write a short report describing the trend. Write 120140 words.（分数：2.00）_PART TWOQuestions 2-4 Write an answer
2、 to one of the questions 2-4 in this part. Write 200-250 words on pages 5 and 6. Write the question number in the box at the top of page 5.（分数：6.00）(1).Question 2 The Head of Marketing in your company is looking for a tourist resort for the staff in his department to spend the holiday. You have been
3、 asked by the manager to do some research. Write the report for your manager, including the following information: identifying a place to spend the holiday, the positive and negative aspects of the place as a tourist resort, how the staff of the Marketing Department could benefit from spending a hol
4、iday there.（分数：2.00）_(2).Question 3 A local company has advertised for an Accounting Manager. You would like to apply for the position and would like to know more about that position. Write a letter of application to the Personnel Manager: introducing yourself and your credentials, getting further i
5、nformation about the position, stating your expectations.（分数：2.00）_(3).Question 4 A group of business people from a foreign trade delegation are visiting your company next month. You have been asked to help prepare a program of activities for the visitors. Write your proposal, including the followin
6、g: what kinds of activities would be suitable for the visitors, which company personnel the visitors should meet, how to entertain the visitors outside working hours.（分数：2.00）_高级写作-3 答案解析(总分：8.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、写作题(总题数：2，分数：8.00)1.PART ONEQuestion 1 The graph below shows the number of college students
7、 studying science in China. Using the information from the graph, write a short report describing the trend. Write 120140 words.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(IntroductionThe aim of this report is to describe the change over fifty years in the number of college students studying science in China.FindingsBetween 19
8、50 and 1965, there is a slight rise from 2 million to 3 million college students studying science in China. However, after the year 1965, the number plummeted and until 1985 the number of science students in college reached a record low of 1.5 million. Following the sharp increase, the number goes b
9、ack to 2.5 million in 1995 and then further back to 3 million in 2000, which comes up to the historical record that is reached in 1965.)解析：PART TWOQuestions 2-4 Write an answer to one of the questions 2-4 in this part. Write 200-250 words on pages 5 and 6. Write the question number in the box at the
10、 top of page 5.（分数：6.00）(1).Question 2 The Head of Marketing in your company is looking for a tourist resort for the staff in his department to spend the holiday. You have been asked by the manager to do some research. Write the report for your manager, including the following information: identifyi
11、ng a place to spend the holiday, the positive and negative aspects of the place as a tourist resort, how the staff of the Marketing Department could benefit from spending a holiday there.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(To: Roger BrownFrom: Will SmithDate: Oct. 23, 2009Subject: Tourist ResortIntroductionThis report
12、aims to suggest the tourist resort we go to for the annual away days from the company.RecommendationsFor the annual away days from the company for Marketing Dept, I will propose that we go to Zhaoqing Tianmu Hills and Hot Spring Resort. It is the most feasible plan with both the time limits and our
13、budget plan, and I am sure that our people will enjoy going there.Zhaoqing Tianmu Hills and Hot Spring Resort is developed by a famous Hong Kong tour company, and is managed now by the renowned inter-continental hotel management group. Other than the green hills, lavender field, recreation facilitie
14、s, drifting, and hot spring, it is now providing teambuilding activities for us. The only disadvantage of the resort is that it is 5 hours drive away. My solution to this is that we leave on Friday after we complete work, and stay two nights there. We can have this within our budget.ConclusionThe re
15、sort is good place, and the facilities are quite new. We can have our people relax there to go to hot spring, and also have them active by attending the team building activities they offer free of charge. It will be definitely a both relaxing and active holiday.)解析：(2).Question 3 A local company has
16、 advertised for an Accounting Manager. You would like to apply for the position and would like to know more about that position. Write a letter of application to the Personnel Manager: introducing yourself and your credentials, getting further information about the position, stating your expectation
17、s.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(Dear Mr. Green,I have seen your advertisement for an Accounting Manager in todays newspaper and would like to apply for it.Although I am currently working in the Accounting Department of a large multinational, I would appreciate to work for a rapidly expanding young company such as
18、 yours, for I really love challenges.As you can see from my enclosed CV, I got my bachelors with honors in Accounting from Peking University in 2000. In college I thoroughly enjoyed life and research and gained invaluable insights into the nature of accounting. After leaving university I initially s
19、pent time working for a small local firm before finding my current job as assistant to the Accounting Manager and I feel that I am more suited to the dynamics and varied demands of a smaller firm. I possess not only rich work experience, but also great enthusiasm for anything new. As a result, I fee
20、l that I would be able to undertake the duties as an Accounting Manager.I hope I will be paid higher than I used to for I am shouldering more responsibilities and if I could be given more flexibility in the management of my time I will be very happy.I am available for interview from 15 October and I
21、 can clarify the information in the CV if you are interested in my education and previous and present employment.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Will Smith)解析：(3).Question 4 A group of business people from a foreign trade delegation are visiting your company next month. You have b
22、een asked to help prepare a program of activities for the visitors. Write your proposal, including the following: what kinds of activities would be suitable for the visitors, which company personnel the visitors should meet, how to entertain the visitors outside working hours.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(Introdu
23、ctionThis proposal aims at preparing a detailed program of activities for a group of business people from the foreign trade delegation who will visit our company next month.FindingsAfter serious consideration, I have arranged a series of activities for them. Firstly, I will show them around our comp
24、any, especially some main departments, to show our corporate culture to them. Meanwhile, I would introduce our companys history and culture for the guests. Secondly, some business lectures would be carried out for the purpose of better communication between two sides. These lectures are given by bus
25、iness experts who are invited honorably. I am sure this will have a significant influence on the co-operation in the future.Recommendations and ConclusionAfter the guests visit the company, they had better meet the vice-manager in the second floor conference room. The two parties can talk about how
26、to cope with the problems in the Globalization Era, which will help better understandings between the two parties.Outside working hours, we can take all the visitors to take a look at Dalian, especially the seaside. On the last evening, a farewell party will be held in honor of these business people. I am sure they may have a wonderful night and will be impressed by our hospitality.)解析：
