1、大学英语四级-写作 3及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the chart and then express your views on the topic Express Love for the Disabled with More Jobs. You
2、 should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: On Psychological Problems according to the outline given below in Chinese. You should write at leas
3、t 120 words but not more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the topic: Will Virtual Classroom
4、s Substitute Traditional Classrooms? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and
5、then express your views on The Causes of Toxic Smog. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of
6、the picture and then write a composition on Gratitude. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_大学英语四级-写作 3答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a shor
7、t essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the chart and then express your views on the topic Express Love for the Disabled with More Jobs. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Express Love
8、 for the Disabled with More JobsAs the chart reveals, the percentage of the disabled with employment grows rather slowly during the past four periods. The issue of whether more jobs should be granted for the disabled is still in heated debate. However, I deem that more jobs should be generously auth
9、orized to the disabled. The reasons will be elaborated in the following aspects. Firstly, the disabled are not endowed with complete lives as we are and they are in the desperate need of being equally treated. Undoubtedly, offering more jobs is the most notable approach to eliminate the inequality t
10、hey sense most in their everyday life. Secondly, the disabled also own the eagerness to establish that they possess the capability to lead a life of dignity by their working state. Moreover, more jobs would gift them access to enjoying the taste of life from the outside world. In general, offering m
11、ore jobs for the disabled not merely rebuild the equality in their inner heart but also brings them a brand-new life. More importantly, it is a powerful sign to express our love for them. 解析 1第一段考生需根据图表所显示的数据来把握其蕴含的主题，简明扼要地表达出图表所揭示的关键性内容：残疾人的就业增长率缓慢。继而指出，是否应给予残疾人更多就业机会目前依然是备受争议的话题。就此在本段末尾开门见山地表达出自己的
12、观点，譬如：我认为应给予残疾人更多的就业机会。 2第二段考生可围绕“我认为应给予残疾人更多的就业机会”这一观点展开论述，详尽分析为残疾人提供更多工作机遇的理由：首先，残疾人在生命的完整性上生而不平等，他们渴望得到公正待遇，我们可通过提供大量就业机会来日渐消除这一社会方面的最显著差异；其次，残疾人渴望如正常人一样拥有工作来印证自己生存得有尊严；再次，通过工作可让他们享受到外界生活的滋味。 3第三段即结论段考生需要总结全文，简单明了地强调自己的观点：给予残疾人更多就业机会不仅可重建他们内心深处的平等，而且带给他们的将会是全新的生活，更重要的是，那将是对他们表达关爱的有力证明。2.Direction
13、s: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: On Psychological Problems according to the outline given below in Chinese. You should write at least 120 words but not more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 On Psychological
14、 ProblemsNowadays psychological health has aroused the wide concern among people because psychological problems lead to growing suicides, murders and other abnormal incidents which are frequently reported. However, why are more and more people being sunk into the mental-health problems? The followin
15、g reasons might account for that. Firstly, the state of being unemployed brings so heavy a burden to the jobless, which is so likely to cause pain and even torture in their inner heart. Secondly, fierce competition from work or study puts intensive pressure on the majority of the salary man or stude
16、nts, which also possibly causes mental illness. Thirdly, the gap between the rich and the poor differentiation is still broadened, which engenders much hurt to the vulnerable ones. This negative impact may cause psychological imbalance. Over time those pressures taken for granted may push people int
17、o endless desperation which is likely to further cause mental problems. What measures should be taken to keep psychologically healthy? More psychological counseling rooms and lessons should be opened to ensure adequate communication accessible to people in order to release their penetrating pressure
18、. 解析 1第一段考生首先需明确指出如今心理健康已引起人们的广泛关注，这与心理问题导致一系列频繁迭起的社会惨案息息相关。心理问题带来的巨大危害毋庸置疑，然而，需提出关键性疑问：为什么越来越多的人存在心理问题? 2第二段考生需围绕“为何越来越多的人存在心理问题”这一社会话题理性分析其成因，譬如：失业压力、竞争压力及贫富分化等等。继而进一步指出这些司空见惯的日常压力久而久之便会导致心理失衡，造成心理问题。 3第三段考生应开门见山并简明扼要地提出：我们需采取有力措施有效舒缓人们的心理重担，比如增设心理咨询室及心理课程，以便对人们的心理压力进行及时疏导。3.Directions: For this p
19、art, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the topic: Will Virtual Classrooms Substitute Traditional Classrooms? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your
20、essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 Will Virtual Classrooms Substitute Traditional Classrooms?As the cartoon reveals, one student has a high degree of confidence towards the high efficiency of searching information via internet, which is obvious from his remark to another student. Thi
21、s great convenience of internet makes people more dependent on virtual classrooms to accomplish their learning. Then, the question is proposed: will virtual classrooms substitute traditional classrooms? I reckon that the traditional classrooms will not be substituted by virtual ones. The following r
22、easons might illuminate my perspective. Firstly, online education lacks face-to-face communication, so teachers can“t directly get the awareness of students“ reaction to what they“ve just learned. Secondly, teachers online can“t get the consciousness of students“ emotional feelings and psychological
23、 state, whereas teachers in traditional classrooms could get acute sense of students“ mental state through the interactive communication. Moreover, online education is confined to inculcation of knowledge, while traditional teaching means more to one“s overall development with the charm of interacti
24、ve movement and real environment. In general, the replacement of traditional classrooms with virtual ones is out of the question. We could combine them into a wonderful whole. 解析 1第一段考生需简要击中该漫画所蕴含的关键性内容：如今人们可在网络上搜集到急需的大量信息。网络中浩瀚如海的信息量，使得人们愈发依赖网络课堂来实现学习目标。由此引出以下热议话题：网络课堂未来会取代传统课堂吗? 2第二段考生需在本段第一句直接表明自
25、己的看法，譬如：我认为网络课堂无法取代传统课堂。继而围绕这一观点展开论述，尽可能运用对比的方式彰显传统教学的优势或突出网络课堂的缺陷，论述的笔触须鲜明有力。 3第三段考生应再次强调概括自己的观点，并提倡：若将网络课堂与传统课堂加以结合，各取其精华，将不失为最佳选择。4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express yo
26、ur views on The Causes of Toxic Smog. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 The Causes of Toxic SmogAs the picture depicts, the whole city is covered with such dense smog that everyone is rushing to flee to avoid
27、 breathing poisonous air. Currently, the hazy weather has imposed serious harm on our living. We just wonder: why is our environment suffused by smog for more than half the time? The causes might be paraded in the following aspects. Firstly, a great deal of wasted air is caused by those factories ju
28、st endeavoring to make profits with obsolete facilities which release excessive pollutants. Secondly, the increasing number of automobiles causes the excessive emissions of gases which also give rise to toxic air. Thirdly, the removal of forest cover has allowed soot to suffuse the whole air, which
29、in turn adds to the seriousness of air pollution. Those factors account for the toxic particles causing smog. Therefore, what should be done to eliminate smog? We could perfect law to punish those just focusing on profits, produce more energy-saving vehicles as well as cultivate more green belts to
30、improve air quality. Only through these ways can we combat toxic smog effectively. 解析 1第一段考生应首先简要地描述漫画所渲染的主题：雾霾迫使人类在仓皇之中深感无处可逃，因其巨大危害已严重影响到人类的生存。 2第二段考生需详尽分析如今雾霾产生的关键性原因，譬如：某些厂家只顾一味追求经济效益采用废弃设施而加重污染物排放；车辆的骤增加重尾气的过度排放；原始森林的大幅砍伐使得空气中的有害微粒无法得以净化。继而简要总结：以上原因会导致雾霾的产生。 3第三段不同于以往过于简短的结尾方式，需针对以上三项原因娓娓道来解决雾霾
31、的有效措施。5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then write a composition on Gratitude. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. （分数
32、：20.00）_正确答案：()解析：参考范文 GratitudeAs the picture depicts, the little girl insists on taking footbath for her mother although her mother doesn“t have the heart to trouble her darling to do so. We define the moving deed as a sign of filial piety. But what is the wellspring of filial piety? Gratitude! We
33、 are supposed to express our gratitude every day not merely confined to Thanksgiving Day. Several points account for the value of gratitude. Firstly, we should possess a thankful heart to our parents because they not merely grant us precious lives, but also illuminate the virtue of life. So we shoul
34、d cherish every opportunity to express our love for them. Secondly, we live in an interdependent world, where we also receive care from friends and strangers. Being grateful is the most meaningful way to show our reward. Thirdly, showing gratitude to each other has interactive impact, which plays an
35、 indispensable part in building a harmonious society. Let“s join the atmosphere of pure gratitude, for gratitude makes sense of our past, brings peace for today, and creates a vision for tomorrow. 解析 1第一段考生需简要描述漫画所勾勒的内容：母亲不忍心麻烦年幼的女儿为自己洗脚，然而女儿一再坚持。我们往往把这种温暖而具体的行为视为孝心的细微体现，然而，冷静思索：孝心这种美德的源泉是什么?感恩! 2第二段考生需详尽分析：如今唤醒我们深怀感恩的意义何在?首先，父母给予我们宝贵的生命，并在生命的每个阶段为我们言传身教生命的美德，据此，感恩是我们对父母养育之恩的最佳感念；同时，我们生活在一个相互依存的世界中，人与人之间的关怀决定了需要用感恩来表达对彼此的报答；再次，感恩所带来的影响是相互的，这注定是我们建立和谐社会时必不可少的元素。 3第三段考生需号召并提倡：让我们一起融人浓浓的感恩情怀当中!并在结尾处以美国作家 Melody Beattie(美乐蒂碧缇)的名言作为对感恩精神的再度抒发。
