1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 133及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Working Experience following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1很多单位要 求应届毕业生有一定的工作经验 2有人认为这样的要求不公平 3我的观点 2 For this part,
2、you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Credit Cards on Campus following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1越来越多的 大学生使用信用卡 2大学生使用信用卡的利弊 3我的观点 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Overseas
3、 Study following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1海外留学的好处 2海外留学也存 在一些问题 3我的观点 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Private Tutoring following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words b
4、ut no more than 180 words. 1做家教的大学生人数与日俱增 2大学生做家教的优缺点 3我的 看法 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 133答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Working Experience When it comes to working experience, people hold varying opinions . Most companies prefer graduates who have some kind of working experience. In their opinion , what
5、 the college students learn from books is theoretical. Besides , they believe that job seekers with working experience are more cooperative in teamwork. However, others , especially job seekers who have just graduated from university hold that it is unfair to them. For one thing , it is a pity for t
6、hem not to have the chance to practice what they have learned to gain experience. For another , they maintain that the knowledge they have gained from the books and formal education enables them to learn about the things that most people have no opportunity to experience in their daily life. As far
7、as Im concerned , both of these two arguments are reasonable to some extent. Various ways can be adopted to settle the conflicts. From the perspective of the employers, they can try their hand at hiring fresh but adventurous graduates, absorbing new thinking patterns and working methods. As for the
8、college students, they should take part in more social practice to gain practical experience. 【试题解析】 第一段提出很多用人单位要求求职者有一定的工作经验，因为他们认为大学生在学校学到的书本知识大都理论性很强，不一定适用于实践，而且有工作经验的通常更有合作精神。本段既有定语从句，又有名词性从句做主语，还有宾语从句，句式结构丰富。 第二段表明很多人尤其是刚毕业的大学生认为这样对他们不公平，因为他们在大学校园里很少有机会获取工作经验，而且认为人们不一定能在实际生活中获得他们学到的一些知识。本段最后一句两
9、个 that从句连用，使句子富有层次感。 第三段阐明自己的观点，即两者论述 都有道理，关键是如何解决这个矛盾。一方面，公司尝试多给新毕业的大学生机会；另一方面，大学生也要多参加社会实践来积累工作经验。本段多处用到现在分词短语，结构对称。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Credit Cards on Campus Credit cards have been part of college students life for many years. An increasing number of students would like to use credit cards rather
10、 than cash to pay for things. After careful observation, we can find that it is more complicated than what we have thought. On the whole, I should say credit cards are necessary for college students. For one thing, credit cards offer students a safe way to pay their tuition fees, thus reduce the ris
11、k of a large sum of money being stolen. For another, most credit cards provide a variety of services, which simplify their shopping procedures. To make the best use of credit cards, however, we have to be clear about the following several points. For one tiling, we should lay down some rules on camp
12、us to stop credit card fraud and other misconduct. For another , we should not rely too much on credit cards, or else we will fall into big debt. Credit cards play an important part in college students life nowadays. Only by planning wisely and using them reasonably can we make the best use of them.
13、 【试题解析】 第一段指出越来越多的大学生使用信用卡这一话题。 第二段指出总体上大学生需要信用卡，并阐明两点理由。第一，使用信用卡交学费，降低了携带现金的危险；第二，信用卡提供各种服务，使购物更简便。阐述第一点理由时，使用了连接词 thus，使句子衔接自然。 第三段指出为使信用卡发挥作用，我们应该设定一些使用信用卡的规则，同时不能过分依赖信用卡，否则将会负债累累。 最后一段总结全文，只有合理规划和使用才能充分利用信用卡。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Overseas Study The discussion about overseas study has never stopped
14、 in the past few years. Lets have a look at the advantages and disadvantages of overseas study before drawing a final conclusion. The biggest advantage of studying abroad is the high academic level and adequate research facilities. Whats more, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view
15、 towards the world by meeting different people and understanding a new culture. Last but not least, the experience of studying abroad will be invaluable to students character building. For example, it is likely to make the students more independent, diligent and enterprising. However, the negative e
16、ffects of overseas study are also obvious. To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment. In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the students normal life in many ways. Finally, money is
17、 always a big problem. Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay their tuition and fees when they study abroad. In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh its disadvantages. Once the students return home, they may make great contributions to our motherland. 【试题解析】
18、文章首段指出海外留学有利有弊。 第二段中阐述的好处包括国外的学术水平高，研究设施完备，还有助于塑造学生良好的性格。 第三段则指出，如果没做好准备就出国会遇到很多困难，而且文化差异和费用都是问题。 末段下结论，即出国留学利大于弊。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Private Tutoring Nowadays, an increasing number of college students make use of their free time to be private tutors. Just as the proverh goes, every coin has two sid
19、es. Private tutoring also has its advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, college students can make some money by working as a private tutor. Furthermore, they can improve their communicating skills, which are quite significant for their future life. But on the other hand, private tutoring al
20、so has some disadvantages. The most obvious one is that private tutoring takes students the time that might otherwise be dedicated to study. According to the analysis given above, the advantages of private tutoring far outweigh its disadvantages. However, college students should never neglect their study but strike a balance between their study and their tutoring jobs. 【试题解析】 第一段介绍大学生做家教这一现象，然后点明做家教有优缺点。本段中使用谚语 Every coinhas two sides “凡事都具有两面性 ”为文章增色。 第二段具体说明做家教的优缺点。优点：既能赚钱又能提升学生的交际能力。缺点：做家教占用本应该用于学习的时间。 第三段阐述自己的看法，认为做家教利大于弊，但也忠告大学生要平衡好学习与做家教之间的关系。 【知识模块】 作文
