1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 63 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 2 Write an essay based on the
2、chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 3 Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 4 Write an essay based on the
3、chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 63 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 The bar chart shows the respondents perception on the
4、 factors which affect their health status. As can be seen, 33.0% of them think that psychological factor is the most important one, closely followed by work-related one (28.9%). In addition, 22.7% consider sleep the most important one. Others believe that diet and exercise are the most important fac
5、tors, accounting for 8.2% and 5.7% respectively.The survey results inform us of how to keep healthy. First, we should often observe our psychological state, adjust our mood and thoughts according to our needs. Second, we need to work hard to make a living and to improve ourselves, but we dont have t
6、o become workaholics. It is advisable to strike a balance between life and work. No matter how busy we are, we need to take a while to relax. Whats more, we should pay attention to our sleep, diet and exercise.Life is a marathon, not a sprint. Thus, it is of great importance for us to keep a healthy
7、 body.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者对影响健康因素的看法。从图表可见，较多受访者选择了心理因素和工作因素。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段就如何保持健康提出建议。第兰段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 The bar chart shows what passengers care about when they take a bus. As can be seen, 56.60% of them care about how crowded the bus is, followed by bus fare (19.30%). 13
8、.40% of the respondents care about the cleanness and tidiness, of the bus, while the remaining 10.70% choose bus equipment.The survey results attest to the uncomfortable experience many people have to endure in the rush hour. To address this issue, two measures could be taken by the public transport
9、ation agency. First, the frequency of buses should be increased during rush hour to make sure that people would not have to wait too long for a bus to come. Second, those who are within 15-minute bicycle ride to their office should be encouraged to ride a bike to work. And the government could give
10、those riders a monetary reward equivalent to the bus fares which have been saved.To conclude, the above-mentioned measures would better control the demand and supply of buses and make bus passengers feel better.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者乘坐公交车时在乎什么。从图表可见，过半受访者认为拥挤程度是他们最在意的。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段提出
11、个人看法：应该采取两方面的措施来解决公交车拥挤问题。其一，交委应该在高峰期增加公交车的班次。其二，应鼓励离上班地点不远的市民骑自行车上班，并给予相应的奖励。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 The pie chart illustrates the four means of transportation among students. As can be seen, 60% would ride a bike to school, and a further 18% would take a bus. This is followed by walking and dr
12、iving a car, reported 12% and 10% respectively.The survey results provide some enlightenment on the measures we could take to improve students means of travel to school. First, as a majority of the students ride a bike to school, dedicated bicycle lanes should be put in place to prevent the traffic
13、tension between bikes and cars in the rush hour. This would ultimately ensure students safety on their way to school and their way back home. Second, favorable benefit schemes could be enacted to ease the financial burdens of students taking a bus to school. For instance, discounted fare or student
14、passes on the basis of a term or an academic year could be offered to students.The above two measures, if taken, would bring substantial benefits to students.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者上学出行方式的四个选择。从图表可见，大部分学生选择骑自行车上学。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法：可采取两方面的措施来改善学生上学的出行方式。其一，设立专门的自行车道，以保证学生上学安全；其二，公交车应
15、给学生提供优惠，以减轻学生的经济负担。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 The pie chart illustrates the actual personal time management made by the respondents. As can be seen, 51% of the time is spent at work and 31% in sleeping. The remaining time is shared by eating, family, housework and relaxing, each of which takes up e
16、qually 4%, and exercise, which only accounts for 2%.It is a bit frustrating to see that a large amount of time is spent at work and relatively less time in life. The results implicitly allude to the stress experienced by the respondents. As far as I can see, it is necessary for us to nurture a cultu
17、re of diversified interpretation of success. Success is not singularly contingent upon the achievement you make at work. Instead, a happy family, a self-content attitude and a healthy body are all important elements of a successful life.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.“ Therefore, wed better ease ourselves a bit and embrace the vibrancy of life.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者的时间管理的实际分布情况。从图表可见，受访者的较多时间是用于工作和睡觉。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法：受访者太注重工作，不太注重生活。并建议我们营造良好的环境，允许对成功有不同解读，不要只限于事业上的成功。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作
