1、1第四节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。AA long time ago，in a rich and beautiful country，there lived a unhappy king.He slept bad and d
2、idnt feel like eating.His face was always pale as chalk.He often cried for not reason.This made the queen and his people worried.One day，a doctor was called in examine the king.But he found nothing wrong with his body.“Its all in his mind.Neither medicine or rest can help him.What he need is the shi
3、rt of a happy person to wear.Thatll make him happy.”The prime minister was called to the palace.But when they explained the kings situation to him，he said， “Although I have a lot of power，but it doesnt make me happy.Im always worried about losing my power.Many people are trying to take my position.”
4、Then，the kings banker came to the palace.“Oh，Im afraid Im not happy，too， ” he said.“I have a lot of wealth，but Im always worried about losing my money.Someone tries to steal my money every day.”Next，the palace singer came to the kings room.But this was what he said：“Its true that Im famous and every
5、one loves my songs.But Im not happy because Im always worried about be followed by others.I cannot be free！”Finally，the kings top general was told to go out and find a happy man in three days time.BPeter kept his eyes on the ground.He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked
6、home lonely.It was the worst day of his life.His mind would not stop thinking about what happened only just an hour ago in the school soccer field.How could he have missed score that goal？He had let his whole team down.His stupid mistake made him angry.His team had lost the game because of he.He was
7、 really worried that his coach might kick him off the team.As soon as he walked through the door，his father asked， “Whats wrong，son？” Peters feelings written all over his face.“I lost the game， ” Peter replied.Then he went into his room without another word.Ten minutes late，Peter heard his father kn
8、ocking on his bedroom door.He opened the door to let him in.“Look，Peter.I dont know what happened.But whatever it was，dont be too hard with yourself.”“I lost the game，Dad.I failed my team.Theyll probably never let me play again.”“Soccer is about team effort.Youre the only reason your team lost.If you have a good team，you should support each other.Besides，winning and losing is only half the game.The other half is learning how to communicate with your teammate and learning from your mistakes.”2参考答案345
