1、考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 1 及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.You are doing your UCLA application for graduate admission, and you need two reference
2、letters. Please email your former foreign teacher and ask him to write one for you. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_4.You have bought a vacuum cleaner from a supermarket,
3、 but it disappointed you very much. Write a letter to Mr. Robert, the Sales Manager of the supermarket to make a complaint and ask for his help. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数
4、2.00）_5.You are supposed to write for the undergraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for the local history museum. You should conclude the bask qualification of application and the other information you think relative. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign yo
5、ur own name at the end of the letter. Use “Undergraduate Association“ instead.（分数：2.00）_6.Write a letter to the president of your university to 1)point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and 2)make suggestions for improvement. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. D
6、o not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.(10 points)（分数：2.00）_考研英语（应用文写作）-试卷 1 答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the
7、 following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.You are doing your UCLA application for graduate admission, and you need two reference letters. Please email your former foreign teacher and ask him to write one for you. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of
8、 the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with an earnest request to win your support for my UCLA application for graduate admission. Two recommendation letters are fundamental to the success of my application, and I believe that
9、one from you is definitely to add due weight ft was my great honor to have taken your course for a full semester, and it is since your comprehensive introduction of American educational system that I have begun to be enchanted by the dream of studying in UCLA. My further academic exploration would“
10、bear little hope without your support. I am looking forward to your reply. May joy and health be with you all the time. Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：解析：这是一篇请求信。要求考生给以前的外教写一封信，请求他为你写一封去美国加州大学洛杉矶分校读研究生的推荐信。根据题目要求，信件应当在开头点明给这位老师写信的目的；接着详细阐明这位老师在你学业生涯中的重要性。即为什么要找这位老师写推荐信；然后在信中表明你迫切需要得到他的帮助；最后以礼貌语结束邮件。4.Y
11、ou have bought a vacuum cleaner from a supermarket, but it disappointed you very much. Write a letter to Mr. Robert, the Sales Manager of the supermarket to make a complaint and ask for his help. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.
12、Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Mr. Robert, On Oct. 21st, I purchased a Vacuum Cleaner from your supermarket. Unfortunately, it completely failed my expectation. Disappointingly, the vacuum cleaner doesn“t work efficiently to pick up dust. To make it worse,
13、 when I went back to your store, I was told that because the cleaner was on sale, I could not exchange or return it, which I was not informed when the purchase was conducted. I request that you provide me with a prompt solution, on the condition that once the cleaner proves to be of poor quality, I
14、can change for a new one or I will get a refund. I can be reached during the day at(806)3273551. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：解析：这是一篇投诉信件。投诉信件的写法一般是先直截了当地陈述要投诉的事情或物件紧接着简明扼要地说明存在的问题，并提供解决方案，最后给出写信人的联系方式。信的措辞不卑不亢，即便投诉的内容令人不愉快有礼貌地提出意见与解决方案即可切勿让读者感到字里行间“怒气冲天”。5.You are suppose
15、d to write for the undergraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for the local history museum. You should conclude the bask qualification of application and the other information you think relative. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end o
16、f the letter. Use “Undergraduate Association“ instead.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： NOTICE January 23rd VOLUNTEERS are wanted for the local history museum! As a part of the voluntary work for Chinese Culture Expo, museum guidance welcomes YOUR PARTICIPATION. This exposition begins on March 1st and lasts til
17、l April 30th. Basic qualifications for applicants are as follows: Firstly, applicants should have a strong sense of responsibility and manage to work at least one day a week. Secondly, fluent Chinese and English speaking skills are absolutely essential. In addition, undergraduates with voluntary exp
18、erience are preferred. The application form can be downloaded from our home page. Please send your form to UGA_volunteergmail. com before February 5th. For further information, please send your email to the above address as well. Undergraduate Association)解析：解析：这篇小作文考查告示的写法。具体格式请参见参考范文，需要提醒的是告示正文以 1
19、3 段为宜，不宜分段过多，落款应写在中间偏右位置。该范文的主要内容是某校的本科生学生会组织为当地某历史博物馆招聘学生志愿者，属于比较正式的告示，须结构严谨、用词贴切。6.Write a letter to the president of your university to 1)point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and 2)make suggestions for improvement. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do no
20、t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Do not write the address.(10 points)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Mr. President, I am a senior in the Biology Department I“m writing to tell you some problems with the canteen service on campus and some suggestions on it. We really d
21、on“t think much of the quality of the food. The rice and bread are too hard for us to chew. The vegetables are often overcooked. Besides, the price of the food is too high. You know, some students“ families are very poor, and they are even short of tuition fees. How can they afford such expensive me
22、als? Furthermore, the attitude of the service staff to us is not acceptable. Therefore, I suggest that we should have more than one canteen in the university. If there is competition between them, the above-mentioned problems will be solved more easily. I sincerely hope that the canteen service will be improved soon. All of us will appreciate it. Thank you for your consideration! Yours sincerely, Li Ming)解析：解析：这篇应用型书信习作，要求考生撰写一封信，根据写作要求，作者可以先对存在的问题提出批评，然后提出相应的建议。写作时注意语言要得体，言辞不要太过激。根据题目要求，文章的结构安排如下：第一段开门见山，指明写信的目的。第二段具体描述食堂存在的问题：饭菜质量很难令人满意饭菜价格太高服务质量令人难以接受。第三段简要提出建议。第四段简要总结，注意使用礼貌语。
