1、同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(九)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: It this part, you are expected to write a composition entitled Computers: Our Electronic Brain in no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than
2、 150 words. The essay should be based on the title: Go on a Diet.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions:Study the picture as following, and write an essay of about 15words. Your essay must be based on the instructions as follows:1. Describe the picture and interpret its meaning.2. Give some advice.（分数：20.00）_4.Dir
3、ections: Write a composition on the following topic: Some young people like to carry out a research project on their own, while others like to do it in a group. Which way do you prefer? Explain why. Your composition should be no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions: For this part, you are to
4、write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:1如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如2数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响。（分数：20.00）_同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(九)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: It this part, you are expected to wr
5、ite a composition entitled Computers: Our Electronic Brain in no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Computers: Our Electronic BrainNowadays computers have been widely used in China. We can easily find all kinds of computers everywhere, especially in large cities. Many people fondly call it an elec
6、tronic brain.Computers have become our companions because they can help us so much. They are useful in many ways. As we all know, scientists use computers to do experiments, analyze data, and solve large equations. Engineers use computers to control complicated industrial productions, design circuit
7、s and machine parts or even space ships. Writers and editors use computers to write hooks, edit newspapers and magazines. And office workers use computers to keep files, send and receive e-mails, etc. There are many other examples and more new applications are still developing.In short, computers ca
8、n do a variety of jobs from routine office work to research work of science and technology.Though computers do not think intelligently as man, with good software they can carry out tasks impossible for human beings.)解析：解析 一篇 150个词的英文短文基本按照开头段中间段结尾段的框架搭建。开头段应用能够吸引读者注意力的语言点明主题，使读者了解文章的主旨(Thesis)。中间段落经
9、常是作文的主干内容，其主要功能在于支持说明或论证上段提到的文章的主题，在每一个段落的首句一般为段落主题句(Topic sentence)。跟着主题句的是支持性句子，其内容可以是事实、数据、故事或专家意见等，主要功能用来帮助段落主题句说明文章主题。结尾段落用来归纳概括或重新说明主题观点，也可以用来说明观点、提出建议、做出评论或针对文章提出的问题指出具体的办法。2.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words. The essay should be based on t
10、he title: Go on a Diet.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Go on a DietWith the development of social economy, people pay more and more attention to their health and going on a diet becomes extremely popular. It keeps people from growing too fat and saves them from many inconveniences and diseases related to fatness.
11、At the same time, it provides people with sufficient nutrition to keep them in a healthy condition. Besides its good effects on peoples health, going on a diet can also help many young girls become slim and bring their dream into reality.However, if carried too far, going on a diet could become extr
12、emely dangerous. It often happens in the cases of young girls. With all their eagerness to have a beautiful figure, they will even risk their lives to lose weight. The tragedy of young Carpenter has proved this. Even if it doesnt cost their lives, it will damage their health to a certain degree.Thus
13、, apart from its positive effects, going on a diet has its bad side effects. The proper way to do it is to put health in the first place. If it is good for our health, stick to it; if not, just abandon it.)解析：解析 文中首段可以提出节制饮食的好处，并举例说明，如使人健康苗条等。中间段再从反方面阐述过度节制饮食的危险性，最后得出结论，即节制饮食应适当，以保持健康为准则。3.Direction
14、s:Study the picture as following, and write an essay of about 15words. Your essay must be based on the instructions as follows:1. Describe the picture and interpret its meaning.2. Give some advice.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(In this picture, a teacher is giving his lectures in a classroom. But if we examine th
15、e picture carefully, well be surprised to discover that most students are not interested in what he says. Some display a puzzled look, while others are sound asleep. In a sense, the picture above reveals an alarming phenomenon in our education system, that is, teachers seldom care about what their s
16、tudents demand. Instead, they simply go through their courses, and take the least attention to inspire students to think, create and explore. If this situation continues, more children will lose their interest to learn. By that time, there will be less and less effective output on the part of the st
17、udents. What should be done to reverse this disturbing situation? For one thing, teachers must realize that it is their job to inspire students rather than instructing the stockpile of information and work harder to develop more effective teaching methods. For another thing, it is essential that sch
18、ool board arrange for more practical curriculum that best represents the students need. Only in this way can education be designed to inspire genius students and plan for a bright future. Only in this way can school guarantee each student the greatest benefit.)解析：解析 本文开始段对图画进行了详细的描述，教师在讲课而学生却不感兴趣，昏昏
19、欲睡。中间段点明了其含义，并解释造成这种现象的原因。结束段提出改善这种现象的建议。4.Directions: Write a composition on the following topic: Some young people like to carry out a research project on their own, while others like to do it in a group. Which way do you prefer? Explain why. Your composition should be no less than 150 words.（分数：2
20、0.00）_正确答案：(Scientific Research Needs Joint EffortsDepending on their academic trainings as well as their own preferences, when it comes to doing a research project, young scholars can be classified into two distinct groups on whether they favor individual work or teamwork. Though both approaches ha
21、ve their advantages and disadvantages, I would select the group work approach.There are three reasons for my choice. First of all, scientific research is necessarily a joint effort. As it is known to the majority of young scientists who have newly entered the world of science as a serious career. If
22、 a persons work is to be called science, the work has to be evaluated and recognized by his colleagues both far and near. Also, modern science has already formed the consensus that for any significant scientific work, there must first exists a scientific community, which means there have to be some
23、fairly agreed-upon topics of study that demands coordination among researchers before any meaningful outcome can be obtained. Last but not least, from a practical perspective, todays scientific research has made it impossible for any individual to carry out all the work all by herself. For example,
24、a social scientist who knows a lot about human behavior may have an inadequate knowledge of statistics and therefore he has to rely on collaborative work from another researcher who is familiar with the details of technical side of the research in question.As a summary, I strongly believe that scien
25、tific research must be a joint effort instead of an individual job. Too much emphasis on an individual researchers talent and inspiration might do a lot of harm to the advancement of science. Any young scholar should bear this in mind.)解析：解析 本篇作文是一篇阐述观点的议论文。首先要说明人们在进行科学研究时是喜欢独自工作还是团队合作的不同方式，然后明确地表明自
26、己的观点。中间段落要解释自己所持观点的原因，比如研究成果需要其他同事的评估和验证，不同的人擅长的科研领域各不相同等。最后段落重申自己的观点，简单解释理由。5.Directions: For this part, you are to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:1如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如2数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Th
27、e Digital AgeThere is no doubt that this new century is becoming an age of digital products, the newly-invented facilities supported by digital technology. These products have found their way into peoples life almost overnight. Yet they have produced such a tremendous impact on us.The positive effec
28、ts of the digital products are obvious. For one thing, they have brought us great conveniences in our life. For example, We can download whatever we need into MP3 and take them wherever we go, which enables us to enjoy music or study foreign languages whenever and wherever we like. For another, they
29、 have made life more colorful. With digital video cameras at hand, everyone can become a director and records all the sweet moments in our life, such as the birthday party of his kids and parents, the wedding ceremony of his beloved, or even a spring picnic in the park. These digital products have t
30、hus greatly enriched our life.However, for all the benefits brought about by the digital products, their negative effects should not be overlooked. They have made it easier to violate peoples privacy and may also lead to more breach of copyright. And what is worse is that the over-dependence on them
31、 for fun may result in less effective interpersonal communication. I think we should realize all their positive and negative effects and learn to live with the changes they have brought to our life.)解析：解析 本文要求描述一个社会现象，并且分析这一现象对人们生活的各方面产生的影响，包括利和弊。因此第一段应写当前数字化产品越来越丰富，对人们的生活产生极大的影响。第二段具体写数字化产品对人们生活有利的影响。比如，给人们的生活带来便捷和效率，使人们的生活丰富多彩。第三段写数字化产品对人们生活会带来的负面影响。比如，更容易侵犯他人的隐私，导致更多侵权，特别是对数字化产品上瘾可能会引起有效人际交际的缺失。最后以概括结尾。
