1、同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(八)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay about the phenomenon. In the essay you should1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and2) give your comments on the phenomenon.3) conclusion.
2、You should write no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words. The essay should be based on the title: Combating Desertification.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150
3、 words. The essay should be based on the title: The Career I Pursue.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words on View on Internet Information. The essay should be based on the outlines below:Title: View on Internet InformationOutlines:1) Inte
4、rnet provides people with a lot of valuable information.2) Access to so much information creates problems.3) Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions: In this part you are required to write a composition of no less than 150 words about Sport. Remember t
5、o write clearly and logically.（分数：20.00）_同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(八)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay about the phenomenon. In the essay you should1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and2) give your c
6、omments on the phenomenon.3) conclusion.You should write no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Go abroad for further education or not?By contrasting two vastly different life experiences of a student at home and abroad, the two pictures pose thought-provoking questions to us. Many feel that a fore
7、ign educational experience brings greater rewards for the Chinese student. However, are the educational opportunities abroad really better than at home?Going abroad has been a popular trend in China in the past decades, especially for college graduates. Statistics show that over one third of college
8、 graduates pursue further studies abroad every year. It isnt altogether unjustifiable, as admittedly foreign universities may provide better academic and research facilities. The life experience in different cultures may offer a good opportunity to temper a person.However, not all people go abroad f
9、or academic advantages. For those who still hold the false belief that the moon is brighter in foreign countries, going abroad is their sole aim. In the case of college graduates, they are inclined to study abroad even though their potential will be brought out better in China.These factors contribu
10、te to a strange phenomenon: A declining supply of talents in the domestic employment market greatly hampers the rapid economic growth in China. In addition, overseas students are wasting their precious time doing manual labor work, with a fading dream of pursuing knowledge. An excellent student in C
11、hina turning out to be a dishwasher abroad is just a case in point.Therefore, rather than following them blindly, we must weigh and consider all possibilities and make a right decision. Foreign education is not right for everybody. It would be much better to remember that “All roads lead to Rome.“)解
12、析：解析 从内容和结构上看，第一段简单描述了图片，即中国留学生在国内和国外的不同境遇，引发对国外留学问题的思考。中间段落对去国外留学现象作出评论，从利弊两方面进行了阐述，第三段作出总结。2.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words. The essay should be based on the title: Combating Desertification.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Combating DesertificationWith the
13、aggressive conquering of nature, humans are now facing serious problem of desertification. In the past spring, more than ten disastrous sandstorms hit several major cities in North China. This has alarmed the whole nation about the devastating consequences of the development strategy which turned a
14、blind eye on the environment.There may be some major reasons which contribute to the problem. For one thing, the development of economy is carried out at the expense of environment. Excessive land reclamation, grazing and lumbering have consequently caused a great loss of precious vegetation, result
15、ing in the topsoils extreme vulnerability to erosion. Secondly, the rapid growth of population also accelerates the process of desertification. We can say that desertification is threatening peoples life.As the problem remains, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to combat desertifica
16、tion. First of all, laws and regulations should be passed to protect the existing natural plant cover. Secondly, the government should encourage farmers to return the reclaimed land to grasslands or forests. Thirdly, the general public should have the awareness to protect our living environment. In
17、brief, our strategy to combat desertification will be a long-term goal and everyone should make contributions to it.)解析：解析 本篇作文属于问题解决类型，主要适用于对存在的某种问题提出解决方案或建议的写作。这一模式可以具体描述为：开始段说明问题的存在，中间段分析原因或后果，结束段提出解决方案。3.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words. The
18、essay should be based on the title: The Career I Pursue.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(The Career I PursueWhen it comes to what kinds of job to take up upon graduation, a considerable proportion of college students answer that their ideal jobs may be lawyer, or teacher, or businessman, or any other professions th
19、at can ensure them fame and wealth. Contrary to the widely-held thought, I prefer to keep my first resolve to be a scientific researcher. In other words, I have decided to devote myself to the field of scientific research.The reasons why I have made this choice can be expressed as the following. On
20、the one hand, scientitle research is one of the most important and noblest professions in the world, whose development will benefit the whole humankind. On the other hand, having studied in school for so long a time, I think it is better for me to make full use of what I have learned these years.For
21、 all these reasons, I have worked hard on my college performance and have achieved good results. At the same time, in order to increase my scope of knowledge, I have carefully selected some optional subjects that might be useful in the future.)解析：解析 本文的开始段点明所要阐明的主题：我理想的职业。中间段为文章的主体，从两方面讨论了我选择这个职业的原因
22、。结束段应表明我为理想的职业做了哪些准备。4.Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay of no less than 150 words on View on Internet Information. The essay should be based on the outlines below:Title: View on Internet InformationOutlines:1) Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.2)
23、 Access to so much information creates problems.3) Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(View on Internet InformationA fact we can not deny is that our life is becoming increasingly convenient because of Internet. It is never exhausted to provide us a large
24、 quantity of information whenver we search on it. No matter the information we need is on the aspect of study, amusement or work, most of these information can not be acquired by ourselves, and the Internet will content us. As for me, the Internet is an undoutedly important aid in my editorial work.
25、 Many practical problems I meet can be sovled by consulting it.When we acclaim how significant the Internet plays a role in our life, its disadvantage is also worthy of our paying attention to. In reality, there are some people who rely too much on Internet and nearly separate them from the real wor
26、ld, which will result in their reluctance to get touch with people in the real world. Besides, cybercrime is a more and more serious problem disturbing us. In this fictitious world people, especially the young people, can hardly to distinguish between the good and the evil so that they tend to be ut
27、ilized by criminals.In my opinion, we should make use of the Internet wisely instead of being controlled by it. Whether the imformation offered by the Internet is reliable needs us to tell by means of judging of its contents or sources for the censorship on Internet information still has flaws. Alth
28、ough the Internet gives us a big help, when seeking for information we can not neglect the strength of newspapers and magazines. At last, all of us should take actions to protect the young from being hurt by net information abuse, and do our utmost to improve the Internet, making it serve us as good
29、 as possible.)解析：解析 文章是传统的三段式。第一段讲述互联网信息的优点，第二段讲述互联网信息的缺点，第三段是结论，讲述自己对这个问题的看法。注意说明里的特别提示：use specific reasons and examples。5.Directions: In this part you are required to write a composition of no less than 150 words about Sport. Remember to write clearly and logically.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(SportsAlmost e
30、verybody likes sports. One reason is that sports provide us with an entertaining form of recreation. While participating in a sports activity, we can enjoy ourselves and relax. In addition, we enjoy sports as a social activity because they give us an opportunity to be with our friends. Finally, spor
31、ts allow us to forget about our work and escape from the monotony of everyday life.Different people like different sports. For instance, many men prefer competitive sports such as basketball, tennis, and soccer. Women, however, often enjoy less strenuous activities such as walking, swimming, or danc
32、e classes. Older people usually prefer slower, more peaceful activities like walking.As for me, I enjoy energetic, non-competitive forms of sports. My favorite sport is jogging in the mornings. Several days a week I get up at 6:00 a.m. to jog about two miles. I am also fond of aerobic dancing, a popular form of exercise for women in the United States. These types of sports are beneficial in reviving my body and relaxing my mind.)解析：解析 该文讨论的主题是体育运动，可以从三方面来论述。首先是每一个人都热爱体育运动，而不同的人喜爱不同的体育运动，最后以我喜爱的体育运动作为结束。
