1、同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(十一)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: At present, many people think that one language should be used as the common language, but others think that by doing so the cultures of different nations will be lost. What do you think of these two opinions?
2、 Write an essay of at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a composition entitled Money in 3 paragraphs. Write no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions: You are required to write a composition of no less than 150 words. Your composition should be ba
3、sed on the following topic: Electronic Mail.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled The Advantages aria Disadvantages of Studying Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:1出国留学的好处；2出国留学的弊端；3结论和你的观点（分数：20.00）_5.Dir
4、ections: For this part, you are required to write a composition on the topic The Damage of Public Facilities. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(十一)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions: At present, many people think that one language shoul
5、d be used as the common language, but others think that by doing so the cultures of different nations will be lost. What do you think of these two opinions? Write an essay of at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Language Should Be DiversifiedNowadays, many people think that, with the development of g
6、lobalization, we should use one language as the common language. However, others think that by doing so the cultures of different nations will be lost. As for me, I am in favor of the latter one. The reasons are as follows:First, language is not only a tool of communication but also a type of art. E
7、very language has its unique history and essence, which leads to the variety of the world. So, diminishing other languages will make our world less colorful. Second, language is a product of culture, it plays an important role in culture. Language is influenced and shaped by culture. Cultures differ
8、 from one another, and so do languages. Thus, we shouldnt remove other languages.As has been discussed above, we may arrive at the conclusion that speaking a common language is convenient for people all over the world, but we should protect our own language so as to keep the diversity of cultures.)解
9、析：解析 本篇作文是一篇阐述观点的议论文。首先要说明人们对于全球使用一种共同语言的不同看法，然后明确地表明自己的观点。中间段落要解释自己所持观点的原因，比如语言不只是交流的工具，其代表着多彩的世界，承载了不同的文化等。最后段落重申自己的观点，简单解释理由。2.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a composition entitled Money in 3 paragraphs. Write no less than 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(MoneyIts a common knowled
10、ge that everyone likes money and needs money. Without money we can not buy food, clothes and other daily necessities. Without money, we can not go to school or go to cinema or other places. No wonder some people believe that money is the most important thing in the world.There are certain things tha
11、t money can not buy. For example, a millionaire who suffered from serious cancer was willing to buy his health at expenses of his whole fortune, but he failed and soon died in despair. Many other things such as devoted friendship and real honor are invaluable and can not be bought with money either,
12、 so money is far from omnipotent(全能的).Money can bring us happiness as well as sadness. Money is so useful that everybody seeks to possess it. Due to the lust for money, some people do not care by what means they get it. For instance, they might steal money from others and even kill other persons to
13、get money. Therefore money has its evil side, if we do not know its correct meaning. Money can also be a curse, if we do not know how to handle it properly.)解析：解析 文中首段可以说明金钱很重要，中间段从反方面强调金钱不能买到所有东西，可以举例说明。最后提出怎样正确地看待金钱，阐明自己的看法。3.Directions: You are required to write a composition of no less than 150
14、words. Your composition should be based on the following topic: Electronic Mail.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Electronic MailAs a product of high technology, e-mail has been widely used. For instance, it is used in business, academic or government communications. And as a substitute for private letters or for fa
15、ce-to-face talk, it is also used to exchange feelings and convey messages to each other. In the picture, we can see two men sitting in front of their computers, talking about having lunch together.The wide use of e-mail may be due to its unique advantages. First of all, people who adore e-mail love
16、to say that its quick and convenient. A response can be shot back within seconds, provided that the intended recipient checks it frequently. And the recipient doesnt even have to be at the other end because the message can simply be left for him or her. In addition, this kind of computerized exchang
17、e may create friendship. People who are lazy at writing letters may prefer e-mail. Whats more, e-mail is a relatively cheap way to leave a message for someone who is far away.Despite the advantages of e-mail, it also has some disadvantages, It eliminates face-to-face conversation and makes people fe
18、el isolated. And when we are cut off from our co-workers, our sense of community and common purpose withers.In my opinion, we should be aware that e-mail has both advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, we should make proper use of it instead of failing a victim to it.)解析：解析 在进行文章的布局时，可以考虑列一个简单的提纲，
19、即将作文的内容具体化。比如本文“电子邮件”这一主题可以列一个这样的简单提纲：首段应阐明电子邮件如今已得到广泛应用，主体段落说明其原因，如电子邮件迅速、方便、省钱等。最后总结自己对电子邮件的观点。4.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled The Advantages aria Disadvantages of Studying Abroad. You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:
20、1出国留学的好处；2出国留学的弊端；3结论和你的观点（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(The Advantages and Disadvantages of Studying AbroadIt is no longer surprising now to see so many students go abroad for studies, and they have very good reasons for doing so. If they attend a university in a foreign country, they can learn the language ther
21、e more efficiently and understand the culture better. More importantly, their experience overseas and the degrees they get there may put them in an advantageous position in job competition when they are back in China.Nevertheless, there is no denying that there exist some disadvantages as well. Firs
22、t of all, it costs far more money. For the same degree study, the tuition fee in a foreign university would be around seven times the amount needed in a domestic university. And also, there is the feeling of loneliness. Their parents and friends are all far away from them and they can hardly find fa
23、miliar people to talk to. Besides, they may suffer from “culture shock“ when they come across the new culture in the foreign country and have difficulty in adjusting themselves to it.In short, as every coin has two sides, so does studying abroad. If they can make good use of the advantages and are f
24、ully aware of the disadvantages, they may benefit a lot from the experience of studying abroad.)解析：解析 本文属于常见的三段式作文。第一段应写明海外留学的优点，比如有利于学习所在国的语言和文化，能使留学生在就业时更有竞争力，等等。第二段说明留学的弊端，可以列举费用昂贵、只身他乡的孤独等。最后，要说明自己的观点，得出结论，对前文内容进行归纳总结。5.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a composition on the to
25、pic The Damage of Public Facilities. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(The Damage of Public FacilitiesWith the improvement of living standard, more and more public facilities, such as public telephone booths and ATMs, have been installed in the streets. It is necessary that we hav
26、e to pay attention to the damage of these public facilities. On the one hand, some people use them without care, which leads to inconvenience to others. On the other hand, the damaged public facilities stain the beauty of the city.Therefore, how to prevent public facilities from being damaged is wor
27、th paying attention. Firstly, public facilities should be made of hard materials so as to be more durable. Secondly, some devices should be adopted to protect them from being damaged. For example, like cars, we can install alarm devices in public facilities. Thirdly, from my point of view, it is ess
28、ential that we civilize our citizens to behave morally. In other words, we should tell the citizens that it is shameful to destroy public facilities.In fact, the ways to reduce the damage of public facilities are countless. It is time that we took most effective ones to protect them.)解析：解析 文中首段可提出公共设施被破坏的问题，并说明问题的严重性并有待解决。中间段可列出解决办法，并具体举例加以说明。最后阐明自己的看法。
