1、同等学力人员申请硕士学位英语-写作(十四)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:A. Title: Modernization of Family LifeB. Word limit:about 150 wordsC. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below:(1) present situation.(2) advantages of the modernization of family life.(3) disadvant
2、ages of the modernization of family life.(4) your comments.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions: In this part you are required to write a composition of no le
3、ss than 150 words under the title of My Understanding of Internet Age.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions:A. Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of about 150 words.B. Your essay should meet the requirements below:(1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning.(2) point out the problem a
4、nd give your comments.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:1有人做好事期望得到回报；2有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3我的观点。（分数：20.00）_同等学力人员申
5、请硕士学位英语-写作(十四)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:A. Title: Modernization of Family LifeB. Word limit:about 150 wordsC. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below:(1) present situation.(2) advantages of the modernization of family life.(3) disadvantages of
6、the modernization of family life.(4) your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Modernization of Family LifeWith the rapid development of society, family life is becoming modernized. Years ago, people considered owning radios, sewing machines, watches and bicycles as being modernized. But in recent years, almos
7、t all families have TV sets, refrigerators and washing machines. It is very common to see people ride motorcycles or even drive private cars. and more and more families have telephones, computers and air-conditioners.The modernization of family life brings us convenience and comfort. One may enjoy T
8、V or radio programs, communicate with his friends through telephone or work with his computer while his washing machine, refrigerator and air-conditioner are running. And by car or motorcycles one can quickly reach wherever he wants to go.In spite of this, these modern facilities also bring us some
9、disadvantages. For example, radiation from TV or computers is harmful to our health, especially to a pregnant woman; improper driving of cars or motorcycles may cause traffic accidents. The quietness of a family is often disturbed by a wrong dialing or an unwelcome phone call. But it is believed tha
10、t these disadvantages will be disposed of with the improvement of modernization and our life will become healthier and more comfortable.From the above discussion we can see that the modernization of family life has both advantages and disadvantages. So in my opinion, we should hold reasonable attitu
11、des towards it.)解析：解析 开始段通过对比说明家庭生活已变得越来越现代化。第二段分析家庭生活现代化给人们带来的好处。第三段分析家庭生活现代化的一些弊端。结束段提出自己的看法，即我们对家庭生活现代化应持一种理性的态度。2.Directions: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV. You should write at least 150 words.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Spring Festival Gala on
12、 CCTVThe Spring Festival Gala performed on CCTV on New Years Eve, as a form of celebration of Chinese lunar New Year, has been considered indispensable by all Chinese people for over two decades. People are accustomed to enjoying the grand sight and sound it presents as a brilliant feast.However, th
13、ere are more and more people claiming to cancel it in recent years. With the roaring development of economy, various mass media come out like the bamboo shoots after spring rain. As a result, more fascinating programs are available in the daily life. Moreover, the program at Spring Festival Gala has
14、 remained nearly the same form since it was born.As far as I am concerned, I prefer the program to stay, because it serves not only as entertainment but an occasion for the families to gather, chat and laugh. Of course it is supposed to be improved to draw attention, with more diverse forms. In a wo
15、rd, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people, and we still need it, may a better one.)解析：解析 文中开始段可指出许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会，中间段提出部分人建议取消春节联欢晚会，结束段表明自己的想法，并给出现由。3.Directions: In this part you are required to write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of M
16、y Understanding of Internet Age.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(My Understanding of Internet AgeWith the advance of the Internet technologies, it is no longer a luxury tool of accessing information simply for academic research staff, but has becoming a life style and it changed our life in so many aspects signific
17、antlyfrom browsing latest news to searching the advanced knowledge of Quantum Mechanics, from chatting with distant friends to writing our own blog and so forth.Firstly, it brought revolutionary changes to the way of acquiring information. We can search anything we interested and read latest news al
18、l around the world within few minutes. Secondly, the shopping have changed a lot owing to the popularization of Internet. E-commerce makes it possible for us to open a shop on the web and to make the deal, the clients only need to click their mouse. We can also manage our personal bank accounts and
19、our investments such as securities and stocks according to the market situation in the shortest time.But there are many social problems caused by the Internet Age, such as Internet addicted syndrome and cybercrime. They are threatening our health, ethical conceptions and values. We should make effor
20、ts to solve the problems and take the greatest advantages of the Internet.)解析：解析 这是一篇要求叙述对网络时代所持观点的作文。第一段可以先简要地阐述互联网在日常生活中的普遍性以及它的作用。中间段落可以集中在互联网给人们生活带来了什么，比如搜索资料、交流方便、网上购物等。对比互联网为人们带来的益处，第三段从反面提出其危害性，促使人们去思考如何正确使用互联网。4.Directions:A. Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of about
21、150 words.B. Your essay should meet the requirements below:(1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning.(2) point out the problem and give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Let the Crying Water Tap Stop CryingAs is depicted in the cartoon entitled A Crying Water Tap, water is continually dripping
22、 from the tap, spilled over the ground and wasted. The scene points to a rather thought-provoking problem of resources abuse in the present-day society.Nowadays, some people are unaware of the oncoming fresh water shortage, not only because they believe that such resources come from inexhaustible su
23、pplies, but also because they do not place a high value on valuable things at all. Even worse, they hold the same notions towards other precious natural resources than waterelectricity, paper, and food, just to name a few. Sad to say, those people never get round to noticing the sad scene depicted i
24、n the picture. It seems that they pretend not to belong to the global village or they have misconceptions about nature conservation.Given the painful situation, it is high time that the importance of nature conservation be directed to the public not simply by means of guidance but also by means of l
25、aw enforcement. Unless such an epidemic is checked, we will run into great troubles in store for us, and even worse, there will not be water dripping out of the tap any more.)解析：解析 开始段描述了图画中哭泣的水龙头的内容，指出了水资源浪费问题。中间段分析了图画的含义：人们应该意识到水及其他自然资源短缺的现实，不能错误地以为这些资源是取之不尽、用之不竭的。结束段呼吁人们通过监督和法律手段来进行资源保护，并指出了资源浪费的
26、恶果。5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outlines given below:1有人做好事期望得到回报；2有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3我的观点。（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Should One Expect a Reward When
27、 Doing a Good Deed?When asked about whether or not one should expect a reward in doing a good deed, different people hold different views. Some argue that there should be a reward for a good deed. They explain that without proper and proportionate rewards, those who have done good deeds may sometime
28、s find themselves in various difficulties. For example, in order to help the needed, they often have to sacrifice a large part of their own income and live the rest of the days in poverty.However, others claim that we should learn from Lei Feng to help others and should never ask for any reward. Hel
29、ping others is, in fact, an indispensable part of our virtues, so we are obligated to help those in trouble. They also believe that doing good deeds is purely out of willingness, which has nothing to do with expectation of rewards.As for me, doing good deeds ranging from donating blood to serving as
30、 a volunteer for a whole year, should result from ones heartfelt desire to give. And we will gain from happiness in helping others. So, rewards, whether they might be trivial or stunning, are by no means the purpose of conducting good deeds.)解析：解析 本文属于非常典型的两点论作文。要求考生就某一事物或社会现象分析人们对立的两种观点，并阐述自己的态度。第一段要先介绍有的人认为应该有回报，举例说明。第二段说明做好事不应该索取回报，因为这是传统美德，而且是自愿的行为。第三段说出自己的观点，即做好事出自奉献的愿望，而帮助别人会感到幸福，这就是回报。
