1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷135及答案解析 (总分：10.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.More and more college students complain that graduation means the coming of unemployment What advice will you give to me undergraduates to avoid mis dilemma? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of a
2、bout 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate details. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for you
3、r composition. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_3.It is reported that mental health has become a troublesome issue The number of people committing suicide is on the rise. You are r
4、equired to analyze this phenomenon and contribute some suggestions on how to keep psychologically healthy. Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically
5、what your view is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instru
6、ctions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_4.Many people, especially girls, would like to lose weight by eating less. What is your opinion about it? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Dieting Good or Bad? You are to write in three parts: In th
7、e first part, state what you think is the best way. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the i
8、nstructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_5.Every now and then we hear news about poisonous food, such as tainted milk powder, illegal food additives, and illegal cooking oil, which pose great danger to peoples health. Give your ideas of cracking down on poisonous food. Write on ANSWER SHE
9、ET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Ideas of Cracking down on Poisonous Food You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea. In the
10、 last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷135答案解析 (总分：10.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.P
11、ART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.More and more college students complain that graduation means the coming of unemployment What advice will you give to me undergraduates to avoid mis dilemma? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part,
12、 state specifically what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate details. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your composition. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, gra
13、mmar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： My Advice to the Undergraduates Because of the severe competition in the job market, its quite difficult to get a decent job for a college graduate. Many college students complain that gr
14、aduation means the coming of unemployment. To avoid this dilemma, I have some advice to the undergraduates. To avoid unemployment after graduation, the undergraduates have to prepare themselves for the job-hunting long before their graduation. First, study as hard as you can. Surely an applicant wit
15、h more high marks in his resume will be more likely to get a job. And a hard-working student can acquire more knowledge and pass interviews easily. Second, get a part-time job which is related to the job you want to get in the future. Many college students like to find a part-time job, but most of t
16、hem do this only for pocket money. Can this part-time job be written into your resume as a related job experience? Can this part-time job bring you new friends who are doing the very kind of job you want to do after graduation? Think it over and make full use of your part-time job. If the undergradu
17、ates prepare themselves well for the job-hunting, they will have more chances to find a good job after graduation.)解析：3.It is reported that mental health has become a troublesome issue The number of people committing suicide is on the rise. You are required to analyze this phenomenon and contribute
18、some suggestions on how to keep psychologically healthy. Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your view is. In the second part, provide one
19、 or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答
20、案：(正确答案： How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? Nowadays more and more people are concerned about mental health issue. It is reported that the number of people committing suicide is on me rise. Many of them committed suicide just because of some little frustration such as failing an exam. If they had
21、paid more attention to their mental health, they might not have reacted in such an extreme way. How to keep ourselves psychologically healthy? First, we should adjust ourselves to the new conditions. When we go to a university as freshmen, or go to work in a strange city, we may become nervous becau
22、se everything is so unfamiliar. The only way out is to adjust ourselves to the new conditions and shake off the anxiety quickly. Second, we should know ourselves well and admit that we are just ordinary people. Knowing that ordinary people may not be good at everything, we can easily accept some sma
23、ll failures in our lives. Third, we should try to share our feelings with friends. By doing mis, we are assured that any difficulty can be solved since we are not alone. It is very important for us to be psychologically healthy, and we should pay more attention to our mental health.)解析：4.Many people
24、 especially girls, would like to lose weight by eating less. What is your opinion about it? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Dieting Good or Bad? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state what you think is the best way. In the s
25、econd part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确
26、答案： Is Dieting Good or Bad? In order to keep a slim body and to be more attractive in appearance, many people, especially girls, would like to lose weight by eating less. Some people worry that dieting is bad for our health, while others dont agree. In my opinion, dieting is not good for most people
27、 First, dieting is harmful to peoples health. It has been proved that if one begins to eat less to keep slim, he or she will be much weaker than those who dont. Young peoples bowels must work in an orderly way everyday. If a 20-year-old girl eats less than what her body needs, her metabolism will s
28、low down because there is not so much food to be digested each day. As a result, this young girl will become both physically and mentally slow as a 40-year-old one. How terrible it is! Second, dieting may affect our lives. In this modern society, people need to be very energetic to face severe compe
29、titions in their study or work. Dieting will surely reduce their energy and in turn affect their lives badly. In conclusion, I believe that dieting is not advisable for most people, except for those who are told to do so by doctors.)解析：5.Every now and then we hear news about poisonous food, such as
30、tainted milk powder, illegal food additives, and illegal cooking oil, which pose great danger to peoples health. Give your ideas of cracking down on poisonous food. Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Ideas of Cracking down on Poisonous Food You ar
31、e to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, org
32、anization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： My Ideas of Cracking down on Poisonous Food Recently there are a lot of news about poisonous food, such as tainted milk powder, illegal food additives, and illegal cooking o
33、il, which do great harm to peoples health. The news has aroused much panic among people, and its high time that we took measures to crack down on poisonous food. To crack down on poisonous food, I have some ideas to offer. First, the government should make laws to forbid the making of poisonous food
34、 Manufacturers who are caught making these kinds of food should be punished severely, and factories in which these kinds of food are produced should be closed down. Second, food manufacturers must be well informed that they should produce safe food as food safety is their first priority in business
35、 Third, people should be more cautious. When you are shopping food, please remember that natural food is usually safer, better and cheaper than artificial food. And if you think that some brands of food may be poisonous, complain to me related department without hesitation. In one word, only when bom the government and citizens take some measures can poisonous food be cracked down on.)解析：
