1、Welcome,高考写作评分标准1.总分25分，按5个档次给分；2.先根据文章内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后按档次要求衡量给分；3.少于80或多于120，减去2分；4.评分重点：要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量、准确性和上下文连贯性；5.拼写和标点符号视其对交际影响程度考虑；6.书写较差，影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,第一档（2125）1.完全完成试题规定的任务;2.覆盖所有内容要点；3.应用了较多的语法和词汇；4.语法结构和词汇有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构和较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；5.有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。,Thre
2、e-part strategy:Part 1. openingPart 2. the main bodyPart 3. closingIt is strongly suggested that you have a topic sentence for each of your parts.,The application of transitional words:in my opinion; to my surprise; as a result; in the meantime; for the sake offirst of all; secondly; thirdly; then;
3、nextas far as Im concerned; whats more; as can be seen from the graph; however; besides; therefore; thus; instead; meanwhile; nevertheless;(un)fortunately; sadly for him; surprisingly; strangely; interestingly; happily.,With the rapid development of economy, China has become increasingly prosperous.
4、 With the advent of TV sets, peoples living standard has greatly improved. Some people believe (say/maintain/hold/claim) thatwhile others argue that Now an increasing number of people are coming to realize the importance of English. According to recent survey (poll/study/report/research), A recent s
5、tudy/statistics/surveyshows It has been (is) accepted (believed/proved/reported/estimated/agreed that,A proverb says/As the old Chinese saying goes（常言道） Various view exist as to（关于有很多说法） It goes without saying/There is no doubt that/No one can deny that/Needless to say, （毫无疑问） In spite of the great
6、progress made in/ Despite the fact that Recently, there has been much (heated) debate (discussion/argument) about (on/as to) Those who object toargue (maintain/say/argue) that Recent years, there is (has been) a sharp increase (growth/rise/decline) in/of It is known to all that/as we all know, Those
7、 in favor ofbelieve that,My idea/opinion may be expressed as follows: There are various reasons forFirstlySecondly Opinions vary from person to person. Perhaps the most important reason is It may result in/give rise to/lead to Considering/Given （鉴于/考虑到） As far as I see/know When it comes to（就而言） Apa
8、rt from thementioned above, The answer to/explanation of this problem involves many factors. For one thing, someFor another, others This will lead to/give rise to some serious consequences.,认为-think/argue/maintain/hold/believe 获得-getacquire/obtain/gain 利用-use-make the best of/make use of/take the ad
9、vantage of/apply/employ 现在-nownowadays/at present/currently 述说-sayput/state/claim/describe 参加-joinparticipate/attend/take part in/ go in for/engage in/be present at 注意-pay attention tofocus on, center on, concentrate on, be absorbed in, be lost in 努力-Try to/attempt to/make efforts to/manage to 想-Wan
10、t to/cannot wait to/be eager to/long for/be thirsty for/look forward to 使相信Makebelieve/convince/confirm/assure 看见-See/spot/sight/witness/catch sight of/come across 反对-say not to/oppose/object to/be against,I decided I would pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepe
11、st mysteries of nature. I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters. Located in southern Austria, Kitzbuhel is a paradise for skiers. Even though the altitude of the city is not enough to guarantee snow, the good weather and breath-taking scenery make it a world-class ski r
12、esort.,下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：,1. 该漫画告诉了我们什么； 2. 你对此现象的看法； 注意:1. 词数150字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。2. 文中不得提及本人的相关信息。,有些孩子沉溺,于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通,该漫画告诉了我们什么,你对此现象的看法,Half-controlled Composition,The information and requirements for Half-Controlled Composition are usuall
13、y given 1. by Outline (提纲式)Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下：1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动；2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。注意：1词数不少于120个；2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 （2010高考湖南卷）,2. by Graph (图表式) 假如你是李华，在最近
14、的研究性学习当中，受21世纪中学生英语报(The 21st Century)之邀，你对你所在的班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给报社的编辑写一封信，报道此事，以引起舆论的关注，并提出你的观点和建议。注意： 1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥。 2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3、词数：150 4、参考词汇：调查-make a survey,当前环境问题日益突出，“低碳经济”“低碳生活”应运而 生.但是你发现身边的很多同学还没有充分意识到这一 请结合下面的图片，谈谈你自己的看法。具体要求如下： 1.结合下图简要分析身边同学不符合“
15、低碳生活”的行为； 2.针对这些行为谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法及应采取的措施。注意：1. 词数100-120；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,说 明 文,Use both sides of paper,paper cups/ disposable chopsticks,3.by picture or cartoon (漫画式),How to write the half-controlled composition?,分析,行为,看法,措,施,Step 1: Analyze the topic,Part 1,Part 2,Part 3,use paper cups / disposabl
16、e chopsticks plant more trees; use both sides of papermake some effective lawsleave the lights on; living a low carbon life is necessary,Step 2 Organize your composition,1 2 3 4 5 6, use paper cups / disposable chopsticks; leave the lights on, living a low carbon life is necessary, use both sides of
17、 paper; plant more trees; make some effective laws,(measures),(opinion),(behavior),Now, more people have become aware of the importance of protecting our environment. However, there are many people not realizing it. Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, whi
18、ch is a waste of electricity. Paper cups and disposable chopsticks are often used, causing harm to our environment. Living a low carbon life is necessary.Not only can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. The government should make some effective la
19、ws. I believe what we do is bound to contribute to our environment.,Step 3 Enrich your composition,Any other behavior? . Such as: use plastic bags; leave the water running; use air conditioner when unnecessary; drink bottled water,Try to persuade readers to agree with your opinion, using some suppor
20、ting sentences. Such as: reasons, idioms,Any other measures? Such as: some school activities can be held,Compare: Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, which is a waste of electricity. Paper cups and disposable chopsticks are often used, causing harm to our
21、 environment. Living a low carbon life is necessary.Not only can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. The government should make some effective laws.,Now, more people have become aware of the importance of protecting our environment. However, there
22、 are many people not realizing it. As is shown in the pictures, some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom, which is a waste of electricity. Besides, many a student leaves the water running after washing hands. Whats worse, paper cups and disposable chopsticks ar
23、e often used in our daily life, causing harm to our environment. In my opinion, living a low carbon life is necessary. We can take measures and call on people around us to protect our environment. Well goes a saying that together, individuals can make a difference. For one thing, not only can we sav
24、e electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. For another, some related activities can be held in our school to arouse the awareness of low carbon life. Furthermore, the government should make some effective laws to protect our environment from being destroyed. I
25、 believe what we do is bound to contribute to our environment.,Excellent,escape responsibility flee from responsibility throw responsibility on,Writing,manufacturer,milk station,milk cow,grass,Who is to blame ?,随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全.商家的社会责任感与企业道德,人们健康的相关法律保证等问题成为人们关注的焦点. 根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文，表达你的看法，可
26、以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。 (企业道德: business ethic),controlled part,As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying to make excuses for the misconduct. _,As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying t
27、o make excuses for their illegal conduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics. (social responsibility and business ethics)Driven by profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make mone
28、y by providing the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in paint is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent babies become the victims of the milk food. In the long run,such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, bu
29、t the credibility of the society. (analyze the reason and possible results)In my opinion, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happening again. (your own opinion) It is advisable to pass related law to punish whoever produces poisonous food. (related laws) Only in th
30、is way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food. (conclusion),请以“令你生气的事”为话题，谈谈生活中一件让你生气的事例，处理的方法，以及你的想法。要求：1.仅限一个事例，不必展开。2. 字数100左右。,One day, I invited one of my best friends, Xiaogang and other classmat
31、es to my birthday party. However, he didnt turn up all the evening, which made me very embarrassed and angry. I thought he broke his promise, determined to ignore him forever. As a result, our friendship broke up.Later, I was told that he helped his sick neighbor watch over her grandchild that eveni
32、ng but was ashamed at saying sorry to me. So honest and kind was he that I was touched and we made up.I should have given him, as well as me, a chance to speak out instead of remaining angry all the time.,Important - Common - Top - Competitor - Build - Attractive - Obvious - Result - Only - Big - Sh
33、ow -Accurate -,crucial, significant,universal,peak, summit,rival, opponent,establish, construct,appealing, absorbing,evident, apparent,outcome, consequence,unique, distinctive,massive (large in size, quantity, or extent),demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means to make it clear to people),precise, e
34、xact,Try to use diverse words,假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助，请根据帖子内容，写作要点和要求回贴。写作要点：1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。要求：1.短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写须清晰、工整。,Hi, Grown-up,As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you ar
35、e facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions.First, its advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your i
36、deas of and attitudes toward many things.Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. Its even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.,假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明
37、你的计划，并简述理由。 1.休息； 2.读书； 3.陪伴父母； 4.参加社会活动。 注意： 1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)； 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇： 高考college entrance examination 社会活动social activities Dear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter_ _ Best wishes! Li Hua,Since the University Entrance Exam is coming around, my parents and I ar
38、e becoming more and more nervous. We are more easily to be sensitive about the surroundings, which makes me feel stressed out. Sometimes I didnt do very well in my study, then they would blame me, saying that I was not hardworking. The words coming out really make me feel angry, or rather upset. The
39、y just weigh the “score” too much. And this in return makes me more negative and I will not be so confident as before.I think our parents should get to know our feelings more deeply. In this special period, parents are expected to be our emotional anchor. They need to know that we are trying to do b
40、etter and we need their support. Only then will we build a bridge between us and can communicate with each other in a harmony way.,下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：该漫画告诉了我们什么； 你对此现象的看法； 我们该如何主动和父母沟通。 注意：1. 表达时要适当发挥想象，不要仅做简单描述。2. 词数150字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 文中不得提及本
41、人的相关信息。,Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This picture describes one of them. It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. (漫画告诉了我们什么) I thin
42、k it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. (你对此现象的看法) Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of
43、our parents attention. Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want to know whats happening to us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.I think we should let them know us well. For example, we ca
44、n tell them whats going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems. (我们该如何主动和父母沟通)In that way, Im sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.,高考真题赏析 公园该不该收门票,写信给报社，并谈自己看法。 60%的同学认为40%的同学认为不该收门票是公众休闲的地方如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象。应收门票
45、，但票价不宜高票款可用于支付园林工人工资票款还可用于购新花木范文,Dear Editor，Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. Around 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be fre
46、e of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the image of a city.On the other hand, the rest 40% think that fees should be c
47、harged, because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.Everything has two sides. In my opinion, fees should be charged as long as the price is reasonable.Yours truly,Li Hua,（2010湖北）请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英
48、文写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意：1.无需写标题；2.内容只需涉及一个方面；3.词数为100左右。,What do you think of competitiveness in life？Write a passage of about 120 words to demonstrate your opinion on competitiveness with specific examples. (perseverance/creativity/flexibility/friendship/the Internet/city life),
