1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 51及答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 Mobile phone nowadays creates a new way of life, but meanwhile it brings about embarrassing situations and mobile phone etiquette becomes a real problem. Analyze the reasons and provide some suggestions. Write a composition of about 200 words
2、on the following topic: Mobile Phone Etiquette 2 Being online is no longer something unfamiliar in our life. To some degree, the Internet has influenced many parts of our daily life. But how does it affect our life? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic; How Does the Internet
3、 Influence Our Life? 3 Between “Made in China“ and “Originated in China“, there is only one word different. Actually, there is a world of differences between them. What do you think about it? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: “Made in China“ and “Originated in China“ 4 I
4、t is inevitable that as technology develops, traditional cultures may be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible. We cannot have both together. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Technology and Traditional Culture 专业英
5、语四级（作文）模拟试卷 51答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 【正确答案】 Mobile Phone Etiquette The mobile phone is indispensable in our modern life, but when used in the wrong place at the wrong time, it can be rude and offensive. Sometimes such embarrassing cases happen to us without intention, people may enco
6、unter unexpected calls when they are in restaurants, concerts, classrooms, or other public places. It is likely that we have to suffer from those who loudly talk about personal issues over their phones while strangers are around. What is worse, someone usually talks to the people on the other side o
7、f mobile phones without noticing friends accompanying at that time. Therefore, mobile phone etiquette should attract our attention. To be a responsible mobile phone user, there are some rules you should follow. Firstly, turn off your phone when you participate in some formal activities. Secondly, sh
8、ow concerns to people around you when you make calls in public. Thirdly, when your phone rings unexpectedly during the talk with friends, dont forget to ask for their forgiveness. Bearing these rules in mind, we will be responsible and considerate users. The disharmonious voice will vanish with ever
9、yones growing awareness of mobile phone etiquette. Only in this way will a harmonious society full of love and light never be a dream. 【试题解析】 本题属于自由发挥型题目，要求考生围绕手机礼仪进行讨论。考生在构思时应该考虑到，手机几乎是人人都会随身携带的物品，因此，是否合理使用手机关乎个人素质、人际关系甚至社会和谐。考生可以从以下几方面构思： 注重手机礼仪的原因：手机是现代人的生活必需品，能否做到合理使用手机关系到使用者个人素质是否有待提高、社 会环境是否有待
10、改善等问题，因此关注手机礼仪对个人和社会都极为重要。 不注重手机礼仪的行为和后果： 1有些手机使用者接打电话不分场合，在公共场合大呼小叫，完全不顾及旁人感受，这种行为容易与他人产生冲突； 2有些人在接打电话时将一些隐私性的问题毫无顾忌地说出来，此种行为不仅冒犯他人，而且会引起周围人的尴尬； 3有些人接电话时会直接打断身边朋友的谈话，而且一聊起来就没完没了，冷落身边的朋友而不自知，此种行为极为不当。 提升手机礼仪的方式： 1在进入特定公共场合时要注意是否要将手机调为静音或关机，尽 量不影响他人； 2在与朋友交谈的情况下接打手机时，要先征得朋友的谅解，避免因此冷落朋友； 3在人员比较多的场合接打电
11、话，要尽量做到控制音量、避免谈论隐私性话题，多为身边的人考虑。 范文结合了注重手机礼仪的原因、：不注重手机礼仪的行为和后果的 1、 2、 3和提升手机礼仪方式的 1、 2展开全文。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 How Does the Internet Influence Our Life? On January 11, 2011, Tang Qun announced on the 9th Annual Festival of IT Industry that the significant impact the Internet has brought on our life i
12、s beyond imagination. Another survey conducted by an American consulting company named Gallop showed that 70% of the netizens said that the Internet is greatly influencing their life. The impact can be seen as follows; First, the Internet has made peoples life more convenient and swift. Online shopp
13、ing, online hospitalizing, teaching, official business, meeting, and chat are all available nowadays, which not only saves a plenty of precious time but also frees people from trouble. Furthermore, the Internet has entertained people with diverse movies, games and appreciation of art and meanwhile e
14、nriched people with all-round knowledge and various cultures from different parts of the world. Finally, the Internet has narrowed the distance and gap between people. On the one hand, people can have access to friends afar without the confinement of regions. On the other hand, communication between
15、 the general public and the government can be easier since online petition, which makes the common people more frank, is more efficient and less time-consuming. However, the Internet is a double-edged sword. Negative effects emerge badly such as alienation of families and friends, epidemic of virtua
16、l ills, online crimes and moral crisis, etc. Therefore, we should neither blame the Internet nor hold over-optimistic attitude. I think, if we can keep alert on the matters above, we will enjoy the benefits the Internet has enabled us to share. 【试题解析】 本题属于自由发挥型题目，要求考生就互联网如何影响人们的生活发表看法。构思过程中应当注意 “如何
17、”是本文论述的重点，要体现互联网对人们生活各个方面的影响。因此，本文可以从正面论述互联网对人们生活的影响，也可以从正反两方面结合的角度展开论证： 互联网的积极影响： 1互联网的广泛推广可以帮助人们快速了解实事热点、开阔眼界； 2越来越多的人选择利用互联网购物、开会、学习新知识等，说明互联网方便了人们的日 常生活和工作； 3拥有了互联网，距离不再是影响人们交流的主要因素，即使在千里之外，人们也可以利用互联网随时联系； 4互联网的娱乐功能十分强大，使人们在工作之余也有了更多的消遣渠道。 互联网的消极影响： 1网络病毒严重威胁互联网用户的隐私，用户个人信息一旦泄露，将会造成严重后果； 2互联网会传播
18、消极信息，一些负面信息甚至会诱导青少年犯罪，危害社会； 3对于一些缺乏自控能力的人，特别是青少年，沉溺于网络影响个人健康发展； 4人们将更多的时间花在网络上，势必会影响与身边亲戚、朋友的交流，从而产生陌生感。 解决方案： 1互联网用户应当提高安全防范意识，学会用法律手段维护个人隐私安全； 2青少年应自觉抵制不良信息的影响，提高判断是非的能力； 3合理分配上网时间，多与亲友交流，保证生活质量的提高。 范文采取互联网正反影响相结合的方式，重点突出积极影响中的 2、 3、 4，并结合消极影响中的 1、 2、 4进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 “Made in China“ and
19、“Originated in China“ After the reform and opening-up policy was introduced to China, many labor-intensive factories were built; more and more Chinese products are exported to countries all over the world. Meanwhile, the goods made in China are usually associated with poor quality and low price. To
20、change the embarrassing status of Chinese products, “ Originated in China“ provides Chinese businesses a brighter path. As the world is rapidly advancing towards the Information Age, we should know that knowledge is power and creativity is everything. The exporting factories in China always take ord
21、ers from foreign countries and manufacture goods according to the existing designs. So our advantages are the cheaper labor resources and raw materials. Such advantages are not competitive at all in modern society. The poor condition of many Chinese factories in facing the economic crisis is the bes
22、t example. On the contrary, the goods with originality could do well anytime. Originality means unique feature of your own. This feature is the everlasting appeal of any product and ensures the victory in the fierce competition. As the saying goes, fire tries gold. The product with originality is th
23、e real gold which can establish its genuine brand and value in the market. This is the radical solution to Chinese manufacturing. 【试题解析】 本题属于对比选择型题目，要求考生就 “中国制造 ”和 “中国创造 ”两种不同的发展模式提出观点，并论证所支持的观点。写作时不仅可以择其一进行论证，也可以通过分析二者的特点，对比性的得出结论。因此，可根据以下思路展开： 思路 1：中国应当走 “创造强国 ”之路。 中国的商品出口量大，却只能靠薄利多销来取胜，这不是企业乃至国家发
24、展的长远之策。分析其中的原因，我们不难发现科技高度发展的时代，只有创新才是根本的生存之道。只有拥有完全属于自己的、具有唯一性的产品，我们的企业才能挺直腰板儿去和别人讨价还价。所以中国的企业要想更好地发展， “中国创造 ”才是正道。 思路 2：中国应继续坚持 “制造大国 ”之路。 中国作为世界上最大的发展中国家，借助于强大的劳动力和丰富的资源优势在世界上打响了 “中国制造 ”的品牌。品牌的塑造和产品品质的提高需要国人的长期努力，不能因为 “中国制造 ”发展不成熟、没有得到大多数国家的认可等因素的阻挠就轻言放弃。中国应当吸取经验，努力将 “中国制造 ”打造成优质品牌，否则，盲目转型不仅无益于已经建
25、立的 “中国制造 ”，而且还会影响今后其他品牌的建立，影响中国国家形象。 思路 3：中国应顺应潮流，适时转变发展模式。 “中国制造 ”是我国正在经历并在将来相当长一段时间内需要坚持的产品发展模式，而 “中国创造 ”是我国今后努力的目标和坚持的方向，两者之间是承前启后的关系。因此，我国应当在不断完善 “中国制造 ”的基础上，适时转变发展模式，不断发展科技，以 先进的技术支撑 “中国创造 ”的推进，认真走好每一步，这才是强国之道。 范文采取了思路 1的观点，对坚持 “中国创造 ”的观点进行了论证。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Technology and Traditional Cult
26、ure The development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. I do not think it is a bad result, because some respects of traditional culture block the progress and should be abandoned. Moreover, it is natural that people want to find new ways of doing thing
27、s. Firstly, science and technology have cleared up many matters that were mysterious to us in the past. We now know that volcanic explosion, thunder and lightening are not caused by the angry gods, but the normal natural phenomena. As a result, a large number of harmful superstitions have disappeare
28、d. Secondly, our daily life has become more convenient due to those scientific and technological inventions. Nowadays, many means of traffic instead of foot enable us to travel in less time than ever before, and computers enable us to make more accurate calculations at an amazing speed. Even more im
29、portant is the fact that television and family cinema bring the family together in the evening. Therefore, for the above reasons, I welcome the development of science and technology, which have eliminated the bad parts of traditional culture while preserving the good parts. 【试题解析】 本题属于对比选择型题目，要求考生对比
30、性地分析科技和传统文化，是典型的对新旧两种事物进行比较分析。可以通过列举科技和传统文化各自的优缺点，有对比、有目的地展开全文： 科技的优缺点： 优点： 1推动人类进步、文明发展； 2可以消除迷信； 3给人们的生活带来便捷； 4促使我国与国际接轨，提升我国的综合国力等。 缺点： 1资源消耗过于严重； 2个人隐私安全难以保障； 3冲击传统文化的地位 等。 传统文化的优缺点： 优点： 1体现我国特有的民族精神和文化气质； 2奠定我国浓厚的文化底蕴； 3为现代人树立道德标准等。 缺点： 1传统文化过于封闭，不能满足现代人对社会发展的需求； 2古人认识能力有限，有较多的迷信因素留存于传统文化中等。 范文立足于支持科技，利用科技优点中的 2和 3论证科技相较于传统文化体现的优势。 【知识模块】 作文
