1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 85 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Overly Protected Child Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) giv
2、e your comments. 2 The Competition of Diploma or Parents? Study the picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3) give your comments. 3 Be Careful When Using Credit Cards! Study the drawin
3、g carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. You should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3) give your comments. 4 Be Yourself or a Clone Beauty? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) de
4、scribe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 5 Crowded Roads Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 85 答案与解析Pa
5、rt BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, a little boy is walking pompously in the rain. His mother is holding an umbrella for him. Likewise, his father is holding an umbrella for his mother and his grandmother for his fat
6、her. Not far away, his grandfather, with an umbrella in hand, is rushing to catch up with his grandmother. Under the picture, the caption reads: “Many protective umbrellas for a kid“. This picture draws readers attention to parents and grandparents overprotection towards their kids and the harm it m
7、ay cause.In my opinion, parents should leave some room for their kids to take care of themselves. Although it is quite understandable that parents want their kids to be safe and sound, it is not beneficial to the growth and development of their kids. Kids are like flowers that need to experience the
8、 wind and rain to get stronger and survive subsequent storms. If parents build a carefree and trouble-free fantasy world for their children, these children will not grow into independent individuals who are capable of handling various difficulties in life.In short, it is advisable that parents know
9、the importance of letting go and launching their kids on the journey to independence. Anyway, the outside world is the destination for kids when they grow up.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了四个大人为一个小孩打伞的情景。从图解看出，作者对这种过分保护孩子的行为提出异议。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出父母的过度保护会给孩子带来危害。第二段提出个人看法：父母应该培养孩子的独立性。通过比喻花朵要经历风雨，强调孩
10、子需要磨练。如果父母事事代办，孩子只会生活在虚幻中，长大后难以应对现实世界的各种考验。第三段总结全文：父母应该懂得放手，引导孩子踏上独立自主的道路。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 As can be seen in the picture, two young men are getting ready on the starting line for a race. One, who is a bit fat, is crouching on the top of his parents luxurious car. The other, who wears a square co
11、llege cap, is lashed to a cart, on which sit his poor parents. This picture intends to satirize that a rich father might be more powerful than a degree in contemporary China.As far as I am concerned, young people should owe their success to their competence rather than to their parents. To begin wit
12、h, young people can not depend on their parents all their life. Without competence in work, they will fail to find their feet in society. Moreover, competent young people usually dare to go into competition with others. Though fierce or even cutthroat, the competition will make them better improve t
13、hemselves, surpass themselves, and succeed eventually, while those who depend on their wealthy parents may not even be able to capture the real meaning of success.To sum up, young people should not treat their parents support and shelter as the anchor of success. Instead, they should work hard to ac
14、hieve their own success and be a self-made man.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了两名有着不同的学历和家庭背景的年轻人在起跑线上准备赛跑的情景。一位依靠父母的钱势蓄力待发：另一位尽管拿到了高学历。却要拖着板车上的父母与别人赛跑。图片旨在讨论学历与家庭背景对孩子参与社会竞争的影响。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：讽刺当今中国，一个富有的爸爸可能比拥有学位还管用。第二段提出个人看法：年轻人应该靠个人实力而不是靠拼爹娘来获取成功。其一，年轻人不可能一辈子都受到父母的关照。其二，凭借实力加入竞争的行列，才能
15、更好地完善自己，超越自己，最终获取成功。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the picture, a skinny man is bent over by three heavy bricks: debts of credit cards, interest of debit cards and debts. Around his neck hangs a label, which reads: “A slave of card.“ The message implied in this picture is the overdrawn consumption
16、among young people. They live from paycheck to paycheck; worse still, they have to “rob Peter to pay Paul“ in order to pay off their debt.In my opinion, the concept of rational consumption must be instilled among young people. Because of the unreasonable pursuit of material comfort in life, many you
17、ng people are prone to irrational spending and end up buying things they cannot afford. A friend of mine is a case in point. He earns only a mere 3,000 RMB per month, but to meet his desire for superior life, he spends over 10,000 RMB every month to buy Brazilian coffee beans, Italian pasta and Engl
18、ish muffins. His so-called “quality life“ does not seem superior to me at all, for he is desperate to make ends meet at the end of each month.In short, it is advisable that young people do not spend much more than they can earn, or they would run into debt and live on edge.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名男子成了卡奴，被信用
19、卡债务、现金卡利息和债务三块大砖压弯了腰。从他瘦削的身形和辛苦的表情可以看出作者对卡奴持否定的态度。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：年轻人透支消费、勉力维生。第二段提出个人看法：理性消费的观念应在年轻的时候加以培养。年轻人不应过度追求物质享受而无节制地消费。以朋友不理性消费为例加以说明。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 As is demonstrated in the picture, women of different looks, ages and figures are lining up in fro
20、nt of a beauty salon. On the other side of the salon, a new line of ladies are walking out, and they resemble one another closely: long hair, attractive face, and seductive figure. This picture vividly portrays womens willingness to give up their features in return for becoming a “standardized“ beau
21、tiful lady.As far as I can see, we should not change our appearance to become the social “standardized“ beauties. To begin with, whatever the social interpretation of beauty is, we should be confident A fine face and a curvy body may make us attractive, however, the confidence and pride we feel abou
22、t ourselves will make us glamorous. In addition, there are no two identical leaves in the world Similarly, there are no two exactly the same people either. Every single person has his/her own unique look It would be really unwise to abandon the unique features of our own to become a “standardized“ b
23、eauty.All in all, there is no need for us to conform to the so-called beauty ideals. We are unique, and our own special beauty makes us who we are.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了美容院按照世俗对美丽的标准为各色各样的人整容，整容出来的人惊人地相似，如同克隆出来的一样。该图引发我们思考：要做标准化的美人，还是宁可做有特色的自己?根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，指出图片的意图：很多人愿意放弃自己的身材样貌，变成一个标
24、准“美人”。第二段提出个人看法：我们不应该轻易改变自己的样貌。其一，我们要自信，自信比姣好的面容和迷人的身材更令人着迷。其二，我们是独一无二的，我们不应该放弃独特的自己而成为社会的标准“美人”。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 In the picture, a man is driving a spider-shaped machine, with its iron and steel long legs tiptoeing across the road. Underneath the machine, cars, motorcycles, trucks, and
25、many other vehicles are crawling along. This picture tries to draw our attention to the severe traffic congestion in cities. Probably, one day, in order to avoid being stuck in the traffic, a spider-shaped machine as shown in the picture would be invented.In my opinion, the government must take some
26、 measures to tackle traffic congestion in cities. First of all, the authorities concerned need to impose congestion charge on those who drive private vehicles during rush hour, which, to a lesser or greater degree, would alleviate the pressure of traffic jam. In addition, carpooling should be encour
27、aged and regulated by the government. To be exact, a private car with fewer than two passengers would be subject to the congestion charge, while cars with three passengers would be exempted from it.In short, driving a spider-shaped machine to avoid traffic jam may only occur in science fiction. To s
28、olve the traffic congestion, the congestion charge and carpooling policies would be much more practical in the real world.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一台蜘蛛形状的机器穿行于拥挤的公路上，机器的下方布满了正在缓慢前进的车辆。从图解看出，该图旨在反映交通拥堵的问题。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：引起我们对城市交通拥堵问题的注意。第二段提出个人看法：政府应该采取两方面措施来缓解城市交通拥堵的问题。其一，有关部门应该对高峰期使用私家车的人征收拥堵费。其二，政府应该鼓励民众拼车。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作
