1、考研英语(写作)-试卷 12 及答案解析(总分:14.00,做题时间:90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数:7,分数:14.00)1.Section III Writing(分数:2.00)_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.(分数:2.00)_3.Low Carbon Lifestyle Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1)
2、describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_4.World Commercial Fishing Study the two pictures carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. You should 1) describe the pictures, 2) deduce the drawer“s purpose in the pictures, and 3) suggest y
3、our counter-measures. (分数:2.00)_5.Modernization and Moral Cultivation Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with examples. (分数:2.00)_6.On Protecting Our Forests W
4、rite an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_7.More Attention Should Be Paid to Chinese Learning Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your es
5、say, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_考研英语(写作)-试卷 12 答案解析(总分:14.00,做题时间:90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数:7,分数:14.00)1.Section III Writing(分数:2.00)_解析:2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following informa
6、tion.(分数:2.00)_解析:3.Low Carbon Lifestyle Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案: In the picture, three objects are featured: bicycle and a walk
7、ing man. From the words contained in this picture, we can tell that it intends to advocate a green lifestyle, advise people to use cars less often, and encourage them to travel by bicycle or on foot. There is no doubt that a low carbon lifestyle is a proper way to sustain our life and our planet. Fi
8、rst, reducing our carbon footprint often means that we have to do more exercises. For instance, if we reduce the use of cars and ride our bikes to work, we can stretch our limbs, thereby maintaining our physical health. Second, a green lifestyle is beneficial to our environment. If we travel by publ
9、ic transport instead of driving private cars, the carbon emission would be greatly reduced and the air would be much fresher. Better still, the problem of ozone depletion would be relieved and the rate of climate change would be slowed down. In conclusion, a low carbon lifestyle would endow us as we
10、ll as the earth with numerous benefits. It is advisable for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice.)解析:解析: 这幅图片刻画了低碳生活的出行选择。从图中的深浅颜色可以看出,该图推崇绿色的出行方式,鼓励减少使用汽车等产生污染的方式。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下: 第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:倡导绿色的生活方式,尤其是出行方式。 第二段阐明低碳生活方式是可持续发展的正确途径。其一,减少碳足迹,意味着我们要多做运动,这有利我们的身体健
11、康。其二,绿色的生活方式对我们的环境也有好处。少用汽车能减少温室气体的排放,缓解臭氧空洞和气候变暖等问题。 第三段总结全文。4.World Commercial Fishing Study the two pictures carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. You should 1) describe the pictures, 2) deduce the drawer“s purpose in the pictures, and 3) suggest your counter-measures. (分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确
12、答案: From the pictures we can see that a dramatic change has taken place in the world commercial fishing in the past century. When the fishing industry was not well developed in 1900, there were plenty of fish in the sea. However, in 1995, with an ever-increasing number of fishing boats, few fish cou
13、ld be found. It is clear that the abundant fishing resource has nearly been exhausted by over-fishing. The drawer of the pictures intends to warn us that we should put an end to the uncontrolled commercial fishing before it is too late. We have to try our best to protect the natural resources while
14、trying to make money to live a better life. I think we can take some effective measures to deal with the problem of over-fishing. On the one hand, stricter laws should be enforced to confine fishing in certain areas and seasons so that the fish can have enough time to reproduce itself in mating seas
15、ons. On the other hand, the government should help people not only realize the value of limited natural resources but also cultivate a sense of social responsibility. Thus, we can keep a balance between the social development and the protection of natural resources.)解析:解析: 本题中的两幅图片显示了世界商业捕鱼行业的发展简史。随
16、着渔业的发展,渔船不断增加,捕捞方式日益先进,渔业资源却每况愈下。图中表明,在 95 年间,船与鱼的比例竞变得如此悬殊,以致引起读者对保护自然资源的思考。根据题目要求,本文的结构可安排如下: 第一段描述图片内容,指出过度捕鱼导致资源迅速减少。 第二段阐明画图者的意图在于提醒人们,不合理的资源利用将给自然和人类造成无法挽回的危害。 第三段指明解决办法,即实施法律以控制捕捞,同时政府必须帮助人们认识有限自然资源的价值培养大家的社会责任感,从而保持生态平衡。5.Modernization and Moral Cultivation Write an essay of 160-200 words ba
17、sed on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with examples. (分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案: In the picture, a lady is introducing the significant symbol of modernization: high-rise buildings. A group of people, wh
18、om she is talking to, are tiptoeing to avoid litter on the road. One man treads on a piece of banana peel and falls onto the floor. The message implied in this picture is that we are doing a great job in the construction of modernization, but there is still a long way to go in shaping citizens“ mora
19、l cultivation. Due to the rapid economic growth we achieved over the past three decades, many places have been upgraded into modernized cities. However, if citizens are not as civic-minded as they should be in a modern society, the achievement of modernization will be destroyedpeople Utter, spit, ev
20、en pee in public places, which will badly deface and disgrace the beautiful gardens and new roads. Therefore, when we are making efforts in the construction of modernization, we should also promote civic virtue. Civic virtue is of great importance for the truly success of modernization. We should en
21、deavor to become civic-minded people in order to make contribution to modernization.)解析:解析: 这幅图片刻画了城市现代化过程中的成就和问题。图片背景是高楼林立的大都市,但是地上却满布垃圾。读者可以从现代化建设与公民的道德修养间的落差来解读这幅图。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下: 第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:现代化建设虽做得好,但是城市居民的修养却仍有很长一段路要走。 第二段指出在现代化建设的进程中应该提高公民的道德素质。如果公民缺乏道德修养,现代化建设的成果就会受到损坏。 第三
22、段阐明公民道德对现代建设的重要性,并发出呼吁。6.On Protecting Our Forests Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案: As can be seen in the picture, two astronauts arrive
23、 at a new planet, only to find bare stumps. They feel sorry to say that, “We are late; all the forests on this planet have been cut down.“ This picture offers a reminder that we should cherish forests before it is too late. The valuable resources, once destroyed, would be very difficult to restore.
24、Therefore, the protection of forests is so important that we should never neglect it. First of all, forests benefit our life greatly. For instance, a forest is usually compared to “the lung“ in the local area, which helps clear the air. Besides, the forest is also helpful in preventing soils from be
25、ing washed out. Despite its immense value, forest is sometimes destroyed to make way for industrial crops or property development. I think this is a rather short-sighted decision, as we are making money at the expense of our future environment. Natural disasters incurred by soil erosion and sand sto
26、rms will follow the loss of forests. In short, we should protect forests to ensure a sustainable future for many generations to come. Otherwise they will have to seek another planet with forests to live on, as the picture shows.)解析:解析: 这幅图片刻画了两名宇航员到达一个星球,却发现所有的树木已经被砍光。从图解可以推断该图意在提醒人们要注意保护森林资源、爱护树木。根
27、据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下: 第一段简要描绘图片,指出图片提醒我们要珍惜树林,宝贵的森林资源一旦损毁,将难以恢复。第二段阐明保护森林的重要性。森林对我们的生活带来很多的好处(举例:能保护水土、净化空气等)。森林让路于经济作物和房地产的做法是短视的。 第三段总结全文,发出呼吁。7.More Attention Should Be Paid to Chinese Learning Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the dra
28、wing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. (分数:2.00)_正确答案:(正确答案: In the picture, a man is showing his love to a foreign lady in a western-styled dress. Left alone and ignored, a Chinese lady with traditional Chinese-styled dress stands beside them. The intention of the
29、 picture is to call for a balance between the foreign language learning, represented by the western lady, and the Chinese learning, represented by the Chinese lady. In my opinion, foreign language learning and Chinese learning are equally important. On the one hand, Chinese is our mother tongue, whi
30、ch is the root of our culture and identity. It is also the key to the time-honored Chinese philosophical thinking and the classical Chinese literature. If we do not master Chinese, we would not have the access to the great civilization that has survived thousands of years of vicissitude. On the othe
31、r hand, foreign languages open many windows for us and broaden our horizons. In the age of globalization, information and knowledge are transmitted instantaneously. If we understand the first-hand materials in their own languages, we would be able to keep up with the changing time. In conclusion, fo
32、reign languages and Chinese are like two arms of our body. We could not afford to use one arm only and give up the other.)解析:解析: 这幅图片刻画了一名男子向代表外语的外国姑娘示爱,却把代表母语的中国姑娘冷落一旁。从图解看出,该图指出现在一些国人重视外语而忽视母语。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下: 第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:呼吁人们在外语学习和汉语学习之间取得平衡。 第二段提出个人看法:外语和汉语的学习同等重要。其一,汉语是我们的母语,是我们文化和身份的根源。其二,外语可以为我们打开很多扇窗,拓宽我们的视野。 第三段总结全文:母语和外语就像我们的双臂,不可偏废其一