1、考研英语（写作）-试卷 27 及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.While you were away from home on business a few days ago, your father fell into a coma. Y
2、our neighbor Mary stopped a car and brought your father to the hospital and she served him all the time till he recovered. 1. Write a letter to her to show your gratitude in about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Zhang Wei“instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数
3、：2.00）_4.You were unable to attend the examination on English Writing by Mr. White because you got sick in the morning. Write a letter to express the reason for not being able to attend it and apologize. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use
4、“Li Ming“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_5.You have been working for Aigo Computer Company for five months. However, now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s) , and
5、 making an apology. 1. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. 3. You do not need to write the address.（分数：2.00）_6.You are preparing to recommend one of your students for an internship in App
6、le. Write a letter of recommendation to the Apple HR and state the reasons why you recommend this student. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_7.Your classmate Helen has just won the
7、 first prize in the long-distance race of 5000 meters in the Spring Sports Meet of your university. 1. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate her. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_考研英语（写作）-试卷 27 答案解析(总分：1
8、4.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.While you were away from home on business a few days ago, your father fell into a coma. Your neighbor Mary s
9、topped a car and brought your father to the hospital and she served him all the time till he recovered. 1. Write a letter to her to show your gratitude in about 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Zhang Wei“instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案：
10、Dear Mary, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your taking my sick father to hospital and caring for him while I was away on business. It often happens that old people unexpectedly faint away and pedestrians just turn a blind eye to them. However, it is lucky of my father to have you aro
11、und when he fell into a coma. I cannot imagine what would have happened if you had not been there. No wonder my father speaks highly of you whenever your name is mentioned. My family is gready indebted to you for your loving attention paid to a helpless old man. Please accept my thanks again. Yours
12、sincerely, Zhang Wei)解析：解析： 感谢信的行文思路与大多数信函写作相同：表明目的(致谢)说明缘由再次点题(感谢)。指令要求中已将感谢的对象和致谢的原因交代清楚，因此，本篇行文思路清晰可见。此外，致谢原因中提到了老人“fell into a coma”这一情景，不禁使我们联想到近来的社会热点话题路遇摔倒老人，扶不扶?不妨将此话题融入写作中，以体现邻居 Mary 善良热心的品行。如此一来，在引起读者共鸣的同时也使文章颇具深意。 第一段：开门见山，表达感谢。说明感谢的原因(概述事由经过)和自己写信的目的。 第二段：细述缘由，诚挚赞扬。可联系生活实例，通过对比反衬出邻居善良热心的
13、品行。 第三段：简单总结，再次致谢。一段表达了自己对邻居的感谢，本段可更进一步地表达全家人对她的谢意。4.You were unable to attend the examination on English Writing by Mr. White because you got sick in the morning. Write a letter to express the reason for not being able to attend it and apologize. 1. You should write about 100 words. 2. Do not sign
14、your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Mr. White, I am writing to express my regret about being unable to attend the English Writing exam tomorrow morning because I was diagnosed with flu this morning. It just happened ou
15、t of the blue. I felt faint and feverish when getting up this morning and went to a doctor, who informed me that I caught the flu and need treatment in isolation. I hope you would give me a chance to take a make-up examination. Still, I feel terribly sorry for my absence and the inconvenience thus c
16、aused. I sincerely hope that you will accept my apology and take good care of yourself in this flu season. Yours truly, Li Ming)解析：解析： 从指令要求即可判断本篇作文为道歉类信函。道歉对象为 MrWhite，原因为突发疾病而不能参加考试，考生可在此基础上丰富内容，充实原因并提出补救办法。应用文写作篇幅有限，但考生要在有限的字数内澄清事件的前因后果，并保证逻辑连贯。鉴于收信人的身份是老师，所以语气要谦卑有礼，态度要真诚恳切，切莫一味找借口为自己辩护。 第一段：开门见山
17、，点明目的。说明自己因为患流感而无法参加考试，为此深感遗憾。 第二段：详述缘由，希望补救。首先描述自己的病情：染流感需隔离治疗，然后表明自己希望获得补考的机会。 第三段：再次致歉，表明愿望。再次就缺考一事向怀特老师道歉，并希望老师保持健康、严防流感。5.You have been working for Aigo Computer Company for five months. However, now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your bos
18、s, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s) , and making an apology. 1. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. 3. You do not need to write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案
19、： Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to inform you that I will resign from my current job though I“ve been employed as a technician for Aigo Computer Company for only five months. My resignation results from the factor that this job is quite different from my expectation. First of all, it is exhausting for
20、 me to spend almost three hours commuting every day. In addition, what I have learned can be of little help to my present job, and I would like to find another related to my major. I highly appreciate the invaluable experience of working here. Should there be any inconvenience caused by my resignati
21、on, I would apologize in advance. Sincerely yours, Li Ming)解析：解析： 阅读指令要求不难发现，作文的行文思路已经给出：1写信告知决定辞职；2解释辞职原因；3表达歉意。考生只需填充相关细节，并使叙述符合逻辑即可。一段在告知辞职的决定时，可点明你的职位及所在公司。二段解释原因时，要注意客观和主观相结合，可从通勤时间、工作量、个人知识能力或职业规划角度人手。三段表达歉意时，要注意语气得当，不可显得敷衍客套。 第一段：开门见山，点明主题。首先表明想要辞职的打算，并说明自己的职位及任职期。 第二段：详述原因，充分延展。先总述辞职的原因：该工作与
22、自己的期望值不符；再从两至三个方面具体论述出原因，做到有理有据，让人信服即可。 第三段：表示歉意，礼貌收尾。首先对这段经历予以肯定，表达自己对公司的感激之情，然后为辞职行为带来的影响致歉。6.You are preparing to recommend one of your students for an internship in Apple. Write a letter of recommendation to the Apple HR and state the reasons why you recommend this student. 1. You should write a
23、bout 100 words. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear HR, This letter represents my strong and sincere endorsement of Mr. Zhang Wei, a all-around young man with excellent innovative ability. Mr. Zhang maj
24、ors in Industrial Design in Tsinghua University. Being a diligent student in academic research, he always puts forward quite a few constructive opinions on how to promote academic development. Furthermore, he is a person with extraordinary communication skills and rich practical experience. Last sum
25、mer, he participated in a design project set up by our university and made great contributions to it. I am certain he is definitely the talent that Apple has been looking for. I recommend him to you without reservation. Sincerely yours, Li Ming)解析：解析： 从体裁角度来看，本题属于推荐信。一般情况下，此类信函是向某单位、组织或个人推荐人才、物品等时常用
26、的书信文体。根据指令要求，考生需向收信人(苹果公司 HR)推荐自己的学生，并说明推荐原因，如，具有创新精神、勤勉刻苦、善于沟通、实践经验丰富等。鉴于收信人是公司高层，写作语言应规范、正式。在阐述推荐原因时，一定要实事求是。 第一段：开门见山，点明主题。首先表明自己对被推荐者的肯定，然后介绍此人的整体特点。 第二段：详细原因，充分延展。可从学术、性格、经验等方面人手，展示被推荐者的优点，以提升推荐的成功率。 第三段：再次点题，展现信心。强调被推荐者正是该公司需要的人才，并对此充满信心。7.Your classmate Helen has just won the first prize in t
27、he long-distance race of 5000 meters in the Spring Sports Meet of your university. 1. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate her. 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. 3. Do not write the address.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Dear Helen, It is spectacular
28、 to watch you running at full speed on the athletic track. The spectators, I believe, were greatly impressed by your wonderful performance that day. Congratulate you on being the champion. How I wish I could possess such a slim and graceful figure as you do. It is really marvelous that you were runn
29、ing in the race like an arrow. I know your perfect performance is owed to your unremitting efforts. You have not only won the honor for our class, but set a good role model for us. Please accept my heartiest congratulations. I am sure that you will make greater achievements in the future. Yours sinc
30、erely, Zhang Wei)解析：解析： 祝贺信是写信人在收信人取得某种成就或有喜事发生时，用以向其表示祝贺的信函。由于写信人和收信人多为熟识关系，祝贺信的语气可以亲密自然，内容也可适当发挥。本文是祝贺同学海伦获得校运动会的长跑冠军，写信人应当观看了比赛。因此在信函中，除了表达必要的祝贺外，可适当描述当时的比赛场景和海伦的表现，侧面烘托她的优秀与努力。此外，语言应热情洋溢、满怀喜悦。 第一段：概述事件，表示祝贺。可先回顾海伦在赛场上的表现，再表达祝贺。 第二段：给予赞美，分析影响。首先肯定海伦的能力；继而揭示其取得成功的原因；最后点明海伦获奖的积极影响。 第三段：再次祝贺，展望前景。再次表示祝贺，并期待海伦在将来取得更大的成就。
