1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 53及答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 Many university students under pressures turn to the Internet for help not for research, but to find someone to write reports for them. So common is this phenomenon that a new research paper estimated that university students spend up to half
2、a billion yuan a year to have other people write their essays. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Views on Ghostwriting 2 A recent poll on university students self-discipline shows that only 30% of the surveyed students have very good self-control
3、 and more than half of them are rated very low in their self-discipline. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Develop College Students Self-Discipline 3 The mental health of Chinas youngsters is on the decline, with 60 percent of college students feeling isolated and
4、 80 percent feeling social injustice, a survey has suggested. Those feelings find their expression through irregular behaviors, skipping classes, autism and rebellion, and have also led to psychological problems like Internet addiction and suicide, according to a recent survey released by the China
5、Population Communication Center. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Views on Chinese Students Psychological Problems 4 Do you agree or disagree that change is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Write a compositi
6、on of about 200 words on the following topic; Is Change Always Good? 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 53答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 【正确答案】 My Views on Ghostwriting Ghostwriting has become a widespread phenomenon among university students, especially senior students who are supposed to hand in a thesis befo
7、re graduation. These students may find all kinds of excuses for finding a ghostwriter to write an essay for them, but I dont think this is a good choice for university students. Firstly, writing an essay is of vital importance to a university student, because it signifies ones professional capabilit
8、y and academic achievement. Being unable to complete thesis writing is actually the failure of your university education. So we should complete the task by ourselves no matter how difficult it is, so that we can be a qualified college graduate when we step into the society. Secondly, buying a thesis
9、 from a ghostwriter is not different from committing a theft. In a society which values honesty most, such misconduct will forever be a stain of your history. Once caught, you may spend all your lifetime trying to get rid of the stain. All in all, no matter how busy you are, and no matter how tough
10、the task is, university students must have a clear mind in making the right choice and efforts. Thesis writing is a touchstone which will test not only your academic achievement but also your personal morality as an honest person. 【试题解析】 本题目要求对当代大学生论文代写现象发表看法。既可以从分析论文代写的弊端出发，也可以从分析自己写论文的好处出发。 思路 1：论
11、文代写的弊端。 开篇指出论文代写现象在国内大学生中日趋泛滥。论文作为检验大学生学习成果、学术贡献的有效凭证，是不应该找别人代写的， 找别人代写不能体现自己真实的学术水平。同时，这种行为是一种学术造假现象，不利于社会科学及技术的发展。 思路 2：自己写论文的好处。 开篇首先指出论文是大学生学习过程中很重要的一项检验标准。自己写论文可以反映出自己对本专业的见解及在本专业的学习成果，从而进一步促进自身发展。 范文选取了思路 1，阐述了论文代写对大学生产生的弊端。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 How to Develop College Students Self-Discipline Ma
12、ny university students are not capable of controlling themselves. They spend too much time playing and entertaining, so they waste a lot of precious time and energy on things that dont have to do with their study. Self-discipline is very important for students future development and such ability wil
13、l be better developed with the joint efforts of parents, schools and students themselves. First, parents should set a good example of self-discipline for their children in their daily life. We often say that parents are childrens first teachers, because what parents say and how they behave will defi
14、nitely exert a great impact on their kids. If the parents ask a child to do his homework while they themselves play games or watch TV, do you think it will be easy for a child to concentrate on his study under such circumstances? If the parents schedule their time properly without wasting time on so
15、mething meaningless, it will surely exert formative influence on developing the childs self-discipline. Second, it is of mutual importance for universities to focus their attention on fostering students self-discipline. The university is a crucial period for the development of young peoples world vi
16、ew. After the strain high school life, these young people began to fully develop their self-consciousness and value more of their self-image. So it is really necessary for universities to create a strict but humane environment for students self-development. Only when students are mobilized by their
17、own wills can they bring their initiative into full play. In sum, to develop university students self-discipline, the guidance of parents and universities is necessary. Moreover, God only helps those who help themselves. Its students themselves, not others, who can aid themselves to develop self-dis
18、cipline. This good quality of self-discipline can help university students shape their favorable characteristics and build their strong wills. Without a strong mind, they may end up in wasting time on worthless things. 【试题解析】 本题目要求就如何培养大学生的自律性发表个人见解。可从以下几个方面展开论述，说明如何培养大学生的自律性。 思路 1：侧重从家庭方面培养。 父母言传身教
19、，给孩子树立一个好榜样。同时父母也要跟孩子多进行沟通和交流，可以共同制定一些约束自身行为的规定。 思路 2：侧重从学校方面培养。 学校应将教书和育人置于同等重要的地位。不仅要教授学生知识，还要注重培养学生的自律性，对学生进行适当的行之有效的引导。 思路 3：侧重从家庭和学校两方面结合培养。 综合 思路 1和思路 2，从家庭和学校两个方面进行分析。 范文采取思路 3，从家庭和学校两个方面分析如何培养大学生的自律性，最后强调自己树立自律意识的重要性。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 My Views on Chinese Students Psychological Problems A r
20、ecent survey shows that the mental health of Chinas youngsters is on the decline. Many college students feel isolated and more feel social injustice. These feelings have led to psychological problems like Internet addiction and suicide. In my opinion, the current crisis of personality is the consequ
21、ence of the lack of psychological care from both family and society. First and foremost, family factors contribute most to students mental problems. We often say that parents are the first teachers of their children. A good family environment is the prerequisite of the development of children. But m
22、any parents neglect their task in the fostering of a childs early characters and may consider financial support as their sole duty. Without parents love and escort, children often feel lonely and even deserted, which may cause their loss of family cohesion. Whats more, the society, especially school
23、s, did not attach enough importance to the sound development of students mental health. The whole society and the majority of schools in China still adopt an examination-oriented educational concept. The only standard to assess a school is their admission rate to famous schools. Under such circumsta
24、nces, teachers will care more about “ good students“ and neglect “ bad students“ , and thus “ bad students“ may develop psychological problems. Young students mental problem is by no means a minor issue; it is closely related to the rise and fall of the Chinese people. We should not forget students
25、mental health when emphasizing a good mastery of knowledge. It is time that the whole nation should seriously consider the crisis and take measures to solve it. 【试题解析】 本题是一个观点型题目，应该指出造成中国学生心理问题的原因，也可以提出解决办法，并根据自己的观点进行论述。针对该题目，可以根据以下思路展开写作： 思路 1：侧重从社会和家庭两方面论述心理问题产生的原因。 应试教育带来的苦果，学校过分强调学生的学习成绩，使学生成了刷分
26、的机器，与此同时却忽略了孩子的心理健康。家长也缺乏对孩子的心理引导：很多家长忙于工作，以为只要出 钱就行了。对此学校和家长都应加强对孩子心理健康方面的引导和教育。 思路 2：侧重如何解决学生的心理问题。 一方面要完善家庭教育，建立和谐的亲子关系。学生的心理问题主要是由于缺乏与父母的沟通和交流。因此，要建立和谐的亲子关系、创造良好的家庭环境。另一方面要加强学校教育。学生在心理发展上存在许多的困惑与问题需要学校给予更多的帮助与疏导，需要通过教师、集体的温暖弥补亲子关系缺失对其人格健全发展产生的消极影响。 范文选取了思路 1，从社会和家庭两方面分析了中国学生产生心理问题的原因，并呼吁政府尽快颁布相关
27、法律法规，学生也应加强自身的心理修养。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Is Change Always Good? As George Bernard Shaw put, “ Progress is impossible without change; and those who cannot change their minds, cannot change anything. “ It is undeniable that change, the only absolute in the world, advances human development, but history
28、shows that change, even as measured by progress, always has its cost. When change serves evil, the result hurts. A typical case in point is Germany in the 1930s. The Germans were suffering after World War I from a terrible economy and massive inflation. Then Hitler took power and mobilized the Germa
29、n economy. In several years Germany became among the most powerful in Europe, but Germanys aggressive change enabled Hitler to finance his military power and then sparked World War II, a catastrophe that killed tens of millions of people all over the whole world. Likewise, remarkable changes have be
30、en seen in China over the past three decades. Standard of living has gone up dramatically, but those changes have negative aspects as well as the obvious positive ones. As wealth gaps widen, social problems like crime and poverty become increasingly pronounced. The damage done to the environment by
31、factories and ever-changing human activities might not be able to be repaired for hundreds of years, affecting the lives of generations to come. Although change may come with unexpectedly bad consequences, I agree with what Irene Dunlap, one of the world best-seller writers said, “Change is the only
32、 thing you can depend on. You can hold onto the past and get left in the dust; or, you can choose to jump on the ride of life and live a new adventure with perseverance and an open mind. “ 【试题解析】 该题为观点论证型题目。需要注意的是 ，一般带有 always这种绝对色彩的题目，选择一边倒的观点都不太客观，更不能选择 “改变总是不好的 ”这个立场。针对该题目，可根据以下两个思路展开： 思路 1：改变总是好的。 可用多个例子着重论述改变带来的诸多益处，如各种发明创造、改良进步等。但需要注意的是，此观点不易写出新意。 思路 2：改变虽会带来一些进步。但也会带来副作用。 比如，德国经济状况的改变激发了二战；再比如，中国经济状况改善的同时却也带来了诸多问题。最后，再强调自己的观点：改变虽然不一定是好的，但却是我们唯一确定的东 西。因此，我们要对改变持开放态度。 范文选取了思路 2。 【知识模块】 作文
