1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 118及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1向老师致以节 日祝贺 2从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献 3我如何回报老师的关爱 2 For this part
2、, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1简单叙述一下这位同学生病 (或受伤 )的情况 2同学、老师和我是如何帮助他她的 3人与人之间的这种关爱给我的感受是 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minut
3、es to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书必须包括以下几点： 1车祸发生的时间及地点 2你所见到的车祸情况 3你对车祸原因的分析 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a poster recruiting volunteers.
4、 You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动，现招聘志愿者 2本次志愿者活动的目的、内容、安排等 3报名条件及联系方式 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 118答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Teachers Day Teachers Day is the day for every student to convey his heartfelt gratitude to the teachers, who have dev
5、oted most of their time and energy to their students. Happy Teachers Day! My college English teacher has left the deepest impression on me. When I entered the college, English was a nightmare for me. I couldnt follow the teacher and I almost decided to give up. My English teacher, thoughtful and con
6、siderate, noticed my depression and discouragement. After class she came up to me and talked with me for a long time. I still remember what she told me that day, “Nothing is easy and nothing is impossible, but if you persist you will succeed.“ From then on, she helped me with all her efforts and pat
7、ience. It is she, on the long journey of my English learning, who has guided me and encouraged me. I would never forget my college English teacher. The best way for me to show my sincere love and respect to her is to do my utmost to study and make great contributions to our society. 【试题解析】 第一段引出文章的主
8、题，在教师节来临之际对老师表示衷心的感谢。使用 who引导的定语从句增加了句子的层次感。 第二段叙述英语老师在英语学习方面给予自己的耐心帮助和无私教诲。利用表示时间顺序的词 WhenAfterFrom then on 连接整个事件，脉络清晰。 第三段有感而发，只有努力学习、为社会多做贡献才是回报老师的最好做法。本段末句中的不定式结构 to show my sincere love and respect作状语，和第一句简单句结合，使段落错落有致。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill Yesterday when we were ha
9、ving our English class, a classmate sitting in front of me began to vomit suddenly. Before the class began, he had said he felt sick, but we didnt take it seriously. Immediately my English teacher came up to him, looking at him worriedly. At the same time, some students ran out to get the mop, broom
10、 and dustpan, while someone fetched bottles of water and I passed the water and some napkin paper to his desk mate. At last when he stopped vomiting, the teacher asked the monitor and another student to accompany him to the school clinic. What happened touched me deeply. The world we live in is full
11、 of love and warmness. If everyone lends others a hand when they are in trouble, our society will be more harmonious. 【试题解析】 第一段简单叙述同学生病的时间、地点及情况。 第二段以时间为主线，描述老师、同学和 “我 ”对生病同学的帮助。首句中的现在分词短语 looking at him worriedly作状语。 第三段描述感受，只要人人伸出援手，社会将更加和谐。 What happened touched me deeply The world we live in is
12、 full of love and warmness这两个句子虽然不长，但都使用了从句结构，第一个句子含有主语从句，第二个句子包含定语从句，使句式多样化。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident At about 7:00 in the morning of May 8 on my way to school, I witnessed a traffic accident. That morning I went to school by bike as usual, and suddenly I was
13、startled by a screech of a car. 1 saw the car stopped in the middle of the street and a man lying in a pool of blood. I ran to the spot and more and more people gathered there. Someone called the police. Soon the police and the ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to hospital and the dri
14、ver was taken away. As for me. there are two possible reasons for the traffic accident. The first reason is that the pedestrian may walk across the street, paying no attention to the traffic light. The second reason is that the driver may drive too fast. Maybe they want to save time, but do remember
15、, “More haste, less speed. “ After all, life is the most precious. 【试题解析】 第一段简要交代目击车祸的时间和地点。 第二段按照时间顺序描述车祸的情况 ，注意时态的正确使用以及长短句的交替使用。 第三段从两个方面分析了引发车祸的原因。段落的整体框架借鉴了议论文列举理由的模式，从中可以看出夹叙夹议的影子，文章并非单纯的记叙文。本段第二句中 paying no attention to the traffic light作句子的伴随状语，使段落紧凑。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Volunteers Needed Dea
16、r fellow students, The Students Union of our university will organize a social practice to teach computer science in a village school during the summer holiday and now is recruiting volunteers. This activity aims to teach the students in the village knowledge about computer. The arrangement of this
17、activity goes as follows, first, the volunteers will work as teachers in the school for three weeks. Second, the volunteers will spread knowledge of the computer and how to use it by giving lectures and distributing computer-related learning materials in the school. Third, the volunteers are respons
18、ible for maintaining the computers of the school. Any student who is interested in this activity and has a good command of computer science is welcomed. Please contact us at 8765-4321 or send an e-mail to senior 163. com. We are waiting for you! The Students Union 【试题解析】 第一段直接点题，校学生会招募志愿者暑期去乡村小学进行计算机帮教活动。首句由并列连词 and连接的两个简单句构成。 第二段描述此次活动的安排。使用 First， Second， Third进行描述，使段落连贯且脉络清晰。 第三段表示欢迎志愿者报名并留下联系方式，告知如何参加此次活动。首句使用 who引导的定语从句，使句式多样化，是该段中的一个亮点 。 【知识模块】 作文
