1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 121及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of material abundance and capability. You should write at least 120 words
2、but no more than 180 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of excessive enthusiasm toward childrens education. You should write at least 120 words but n
3、o more than 180 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the problem of drunk driving. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 4 For this part,
4、 you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of finding our own merits. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 121答案与解析 一、 Part I Writi
5、ng 1 【正确答案】 Material Abundance and Capability The above picture is a vivid description of the present phenomenon for some rich young children. Material abundance makes them feel different from others because they can afford luxury clothes, electronic products, etc. to show off their wealth. However,
6、 material abundance brings only superficial confidence for them and cannot provide them with long-lasting capability. Firstly, material abundance can only distinguish them from others superficially. Along with the passing of time, people get to know others better and have their judgment according to
7、 some inside merits such as honesty, persistence, kindness, etc. Secondly, material abundance tend to make one lose persistence and patience in perfecting themselves. Thirdly, this kind of material wealth is accumulated by the parents, and therefore should not be bragged about by the children. All i
8、n all, we are living in a society featured by wealth gap, but people are born equal. We should not rely on material abundance or stop making efforts to be a better man. 【试题解析】 第一段说明图片体现的问题。首句直截了当地说明图片反映了当前富人的孩子的一些问题。本段末句用 because引导的原因状语从句说明物质上的富足让这些孩子感觉他们与其他孩子不同。 第二段分析了物质富足给孩子可能带来的一些不良后果。首先，物质上的富足只能
9、从表面上让这些富人的孩子与其他孩子有所区别，但随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解其他人，会根据一些内在品质对孩子作出判断；第二，在追求自我完善的过程中，物质上的富足会使人丧失执着和耐心；最后，物质上的财富是父母积累起来的，因此，孩子们没 什么可吹嘘的。本段中， long-lastingcapability，bragged about等均为高分表达。 第三段总结全文并号召大家持续努力完善自我。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Excessive Enthusiasm Toward Childrens Education In the above picture, several kids ar
10、e getting ready to run, with heavy bags on their backs. On the banner is written: Starting education early and never let children lose at the starting line, which vividly reflects the educational attitudes of most families in China. Parents are always too enthusiastic and expect their children to ac
11、hieve too much. However, this is certainly against the law of education. Education should not be spoiled by excessive enthusiasm. Then what should we do? In the first place, we should abide by the law of education and respect the nature of children. Boys and girls should be given enough time for gam
12、es and physical activities in their childhood. Secondly, we should try to reduce the heavy study burden on the shoulders of our children. Thirdly, what we need to do is to inspire the children and broaden their vision. Every child is endowed with the opportunity to enjoy his childhood, but only once
13、. If we really love our children, we should learn to enrich their life with various extracurricular activities instead of imposing endless tasks and burdens on them. 【试题解析】 文章第一段对图片所反映的问题进行了简单的分析。家长望子成龙心切，学龄孩子普遍压力过大。 第二段从教育规律以及孩子成长特性等多角度分析了过重学习压力的弊端。第一，我们应该遵循教育规律，尊重孩子的天性；第二，我们应该减轻学生的负担；第三，我们需要激励学生并扩
14、展他们的视野。 第三段总结全文，建议相关人员为孩子减负。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Stop Drunk Driving The picture above obviously and vividly demonstrates the common social phenomenon of drunk driving. The driver in the picture has one bottle of wine in his right hand and the steering wheel in the left, with no consideration of the w
15、oman walking in front of the car. There is no doubt that drunk driving should be completely eradicated. However, what can we do to put an end to drunk driving? Firstly, there should be systematic and strict laws to regulate and supervise all the drivers. Secondly, the whole society, all the social o
16、rgans and the individuals should actively inform the departments concerned of the cases of drunk driving. Wide-range supervision must be more efficient to warn those who favor drunk driving. Thirdly, the media should try every means to cultivate all the citizens safety awareness and make the concept
17、 of “no drunk driving“ deeply rooted in the hearts of the public. Only in this way can people consciously resist drunk driving. Safety is of topmost importance for ail of us, and everybody has the responsibility to take the safety of himself as well as that of others into consideration. 【试题解析】 文章第一段
18、先指出图片反映的是一个普遍存在的社会问题：酒驾。然后具体描述图片的内容，最后明确表示需要根除酒驾的行为。末句用特殊疑问句引出问题：我们如何做才能停止酒驾的行为。 酒驾导致的严重后果不言自明，但怎样才能杜绝酒驾行为呢 ?作者在第二段从三个不同的角度给出了切实可行的建议。第一，需要系统严格的法律来监管驾驶人；第二，整个社会都要通知相关部门酒驾的案例；第三，媒体需要通过各种方式来培养人们的安全意识。 第三段总结全文，重申主题。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Finding Our Own Merits The above picture is a reflection of ourselve
19、s in daily life. Sometimes, we are just like the cute fireflies in the picture, admiring others while forgetting our own merits. Actually, it is important to reasonably accept ourselves, find out our merits and develop the merits to the utmost degree. Firstly, finding out and acknowledging the merit
20、s of our own can help us build our confidence and behave better. Secondly, a better comprehension of our own merits can make us set more suitable targets for our future development. Thirdly, a better understanding of our merits can let us have better cooperation and communication with the world arou
21、nd us. There are many ways for us to better understand our own merits. As long as we pay enough attention to ourselves, we can find out our own merits and make full use of them in the pursuit of progress and self-perfection. 【试题解析】 第一段描述图片内容并指出图片反映的问题：很多人都习惯于看到别人的长处而忘记自己的优点。末句的谓语使用并列结构突出理性认可自己、发现自己的优点及将这些优点发挥到极致的重要性。 第二段分析了我们为什么要找到自己的长处并尽最大可能发展长处。第一，发现、承认自己的优点会帮助我们建立自信心，会使我们表现得更好；第二，更好地认识自己的优点能够使我们对未来的发展制订更合适的目标；第三，对自己优点较好的理解可使我们与周围的世界拥有更好的合作与交流。 第三段总结全文。 【知识模 块】 作文
