1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 29 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay based on the drawing. In your writing, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write a
2、bout 150 words. 2 Write an essay based on the drawing. In your writing, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 3 Write an essay based on the drawing. In your writing, you should 1) describe the drawing
3、 briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 4 Write an essay based on the drawing. In your writing, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 考研
4、英语二（作文）模拟试卷 29 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As can be seen, an official is lying on an official seal. Another man is building four walls around him with piles of money. Under the picture the caption reads: “Bribery mon
5、ey? The walls of the jail! “ The intention of this picture, I think, is to offer a cautionary tale about the criminal nature of accepting bribery. This is a timely reminder for those who are tempted to trade power with money.As far as I am concerned, bribery is a serious illegal act that must be pre
6、vented. For one thing, officials, especially those with decision-making power, should be constantly reminded about the consequences of accepting bribery. For another thing, a systemic scheme of making officials financial status accessible to general public is helpful in keeping them in check. This m
7、echanism is effective in deterring their officers from doing monkey business.In short, in fighting against bribery, raising awareness of the harm it does and making officials financial information available to all are two necessary measures.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一名男子用贿赂的金钱在砌监狱的墙，墙内一名官员躺在他的官印上。从图解可以看出，本图旨在谴责受
8、贿行为，提醒人们这是犯罪行为。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片。并指出图片的意图：提醒人们收受贿赂是刑事罪行。第二段提出个人看法：贿赂是恶劣的违法行为，必须阻止。其一，提醒官员收受贿赂的后果能在一定程度上阻止贿赂。其二。官员财产公开机制有助于阻止贿赂行为的发生。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture, a lady is hugging and kissing a man, who is covered with U.S. dollar bills. Underneath the picture, the capt
9、ion reads: “Love him or his money?“ This picture gives a description of the superficialness of some materialistic-minded girls, who only see love as a means to wealth.As a man who believes in true love, I detest these kinds of girls and hope that they can wake up from their money fantasy as soon as
10、possible. Pretending to love someone for his/her money will not end up well. It is not surprising that some beautiful and young ladies manage to find golden bachelors and live a well-off life. However, without love, their life is just a melodrama in an endless tragedy of life. It is fascinating outs
11、ide, but painful inside.In short, a life with true love is so invaluable that no money can buy it.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一名女士在亲吻一名身上布满美元的男士。从图解看出，本图是要让读者意识到一些物质女孩把金钱置于感情上，而这一做法很肤浅。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片。并指出图片的意图：指出一些物质女孩的肤浅。第二段提出个人看法：为了金钱而假装爱上某人不会有好结果。金钱可以带来物质享受但是难以买来心灵慰藉。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案
12、】 In the picture, two birds are flying in the sky. In the meantime, they are together carrying a cage with their claws. Inside the cage, a little bird is also flying. This picture is trying to draw our attention to the problem of parents overprotection of their children. The two birds can be exactly
13、 described as “helicopter parents“ who are always hovering over their children trying to keep them from danger.In my opinion, “helicopter parents“ would only do more harm than good to their kids. To begin with, kids would fail to grow independent under their parents strict control. Moreover, kids wi
14、th excessive protection would not be able to form a realistic view about the world. Just like the bird in the cage, overprotected kids would see the world as a forever safe place in which they do not need to worry about anything at all. Sadly, this fantasy is not true and even dangerous.In short, in
15、 order to help children become independent and see the real world, parents should smash the protective cage.【试题解析】 这幅图片描绘了两只鸟抬着一个鸟笼在飞翔，鸟笼里面有一只小鸟。从标题“ 关 爱 ”可看出该图对鸟爸和鸟妈过分保护小鸟的行为提出质疑，认为父母应放手让孩子接受锻炼。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的内在含义：父母不应该过度保护孩子。第二段提出个人看法：过分关爱孩子弊大于利。其一，孩子在父母严格监管下无法学会独立处事。其二，过度保护
16、下的孩子无法对现实世界进行正确判断。第三段提出建议：父母应该打破过度保护的牢笼。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a student is featured in a dorm room. He is calling his mother, asking for instructions to wash his socks. The intended message of this picture is about students poor ability of taking care of themselves, a problem quite pre
17、valent in China today.In my view, both students and their parents should take the blame for their inability to take care of themselves. For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted. That is why they do not bother to learn some basic life skills. For another thing, the indul
18、gence of parents encourages the laziness of their kids. Some parents go to extremes to micro-control every little detail of their kids. They even discourage their kids to make efforts to live an independent life. In their minds, children are always the little kids who need constant love and care.In
19、short, to help children become independent and capable, parents should loose control on their children, while children should learn to take some responsibilities for themselves.【试题解析】 这幅图片描绘了一名学生在宿舍里打电话给妈妈，询问如何洗袜子。可见，这名学生无法自理，基本的日常洗涮也要向家里人请教。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的内在含义：学生的自理能力差。第二段指出学生的自理能力差是自己和父母共同造成的。其一，学生认为父母包办生活中的一切是理所当然的，懒于训练自己独立生活的能力。其二，父母的溺爱纵容了孩子的懒惰，使孩子缺乏锻炼机会。第三段作出总结：父母不要凡事都代办，学生要学会有所担当。【知识模块】 短文写作
