1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 38 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.多数的网上商店都是有年轻人
2、运作的。一些大学生也试图开办网上商店，以便赚点钱、获得一些社会经验。不同的人对此有不同的看法。你的看法如何?2 In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.校园暴力已经存在了很多年，引起了很多关注。怎样才能遏制校园暴力?请提出你的建议。3 In this section, you are asked to wri
3、te an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.一些人认为高校应该提供更多关于流行音乐、电影、广告和电视节目等课程，因为当代文化比以前的艺术和文学与学生关系更加紧密。你的观点是什么?4 In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and
4、express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.如今许多大学生喜欢追求名牌；有一些人甚至为了追求名牌，毫不考虑家庭的经济负担。你如何看待这个问题?考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 38 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age
5、 of e-commerce. Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops.First of all, running an e-shop requires a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Students coul
6、d not afford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experience and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of “being their own bosses“, are ignorant of financial risks and might end u
7、p in heavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management. When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks.In conclusion, college students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lowe
8、r the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the ever-changing ocean of e-commerce.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“大学生应否开网店”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从电子商务时代人题，指出大学生不应该开网店。第二段阐述原因：其一，经营网店需要大量的时间和精力，这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上。其二，开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。第三段重申观点
9、：大学生应该先学习技能，然后投身到电子商务的生意中。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseli
10、ng scheme.First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Second, counseling
11、scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings. If a counseling scheme is set up, victims can turn to it for guidance and help. They are able to get
12、 the psychological sessions and possible intervention could be staged before it is too late.In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is helpful and beneficial to prevent, intervene and eliminate violence.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“如何遏止校园暴力”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题，建议在大学里面建立一个辅导机制。
13、第二段阐述原因：其一，辅导机制能采取先发制人的措施，把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态，以防事态严重而失控。其二，辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助，有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。第三段总结全文：在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除暴力是有帮助的。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 With the development of globalization, we are exposed to different cultures. And cross-communication has become an irresistible trend. Under this con
14、text, I think colleges should offer more courses on contemporary culture.First of all, more courses on contemporary culture will help students develop a discerning taste. Faced with different sources of information, students are usually confused about what to choose. This would not be the case, if s
15、tudents take the course of contemporary culture and undertake an in-depth analysis about the nature of contemporary culture. Secondly, more courses on contemporary culture could get students to get more motivated in the study. As some of the students complained, classics courses are usually delivere
16、d in a boring manner, which discourage students from getting involved. On the contrary, students will feel much driven when they are required to do a case analysis of the recent blockbuster or a survey assignment about a controversial social phenomenon.In conclusion, more courses on contemporary cul
17、ture should be offered to students. In this way, students will be rewarded with a better sense of judgment and a strong motivation to learn.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“大学是否应该开设更多关于当代文化的课程”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从文化交流人题，指出大学应该开设更多关于当代文化的课程。第二段阐述原因：其一，这些课程能帮助学生分辨是非。其二，它们也能增强学生的学习动力。第三段总结全文，重申观点。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【
18、正确答案】 Levis, Burberry and Calvin Klein are some of the most sought-after brands among college students. They claim that these brands give them confidence and superiority. I, however, do not agree with them. I do not think college students should pursue famous brands.First of all, famous brands are o
19、ften luxury ones. As we are aware, the majority of students are still short of income sources. If they want an expensive product, usually they have to lead a miserable and debt-ridden life. Secondly, the chase of famous brands would inadvertently lead students into a trap of “materialism“. They are
20、convinced that buying things could get you the sexy figure you dont have or the refined taste that is elusive to you. Bit by bit, students are trained to fill the emotional void with different material products, ending up with a more insecure state of mind.In conclusion, college student should be ca
21、utioned against the negative impacts of pursuing famous brands. Their money could be better spent on their health and study.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“大学生是否应该追求名牌”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段从李维斯、巴宝莉和 CK 等名牌入题，指出大学生不应该追求名牌。第二段阐述原因：其一，名牌通常都是奢侈品牌，学生收入来源不稳定，难以负担得起。其二，追逐名牌会不经意间让学生陷入物质主义的陷阱中。第三段重申观点：大学生应对追逐名牌的负面影响有所警惕。【知识模块】 短文写作
