1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 4 及答案与解析Part ADirections: Write a composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information. (10 points)1 Write a letter to your friend Zhang Ailing to convey your congratulations on her admission to Nankai University. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
2、 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.2 Suppose that your friend has just graduated from university and got a good job. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate him. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not s
3、ign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.3 Write a letter to your best friend Yan Yufei, congratulating him on being admitted to a postgraduate program. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of th
4、e letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.4 You bought a refrigerator several days ago and there is something wrong with it. Write a letter to the store to complain your problems and extend (表达) your requirements. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your
5、 own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.5 A chemical plant should be responsible for the water pollution in a nearby river. Write a letter to the City Environment Protection Agency to1) state the present situation, 2) suggest ways to deal with the proble
6、m and3) express your sincere hope. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.6 You made a travel with a travel agency a few days ago and you were disappointed with its service. Write a let
7、ter to the related department to: 1) complain about their bad service and2) give your suggestions. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei“ instead. Do not write the address.考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 4 答案与解析Part ADirections: Write a
8、composition/letter of no less than 100 words on the following information. (10 points)1 【正确答案】 Dear Zhang Ailing, I am writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my heartfelt congratulations on your admission to Nankai University. I know how hard you have worked to achieve this goal. Therefore,
9、 I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition. Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you. On the other hand, for me, it is a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded. In short, I take pride in your present success. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations. W
10、ish you still further success. Yours truly,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段只有一句，表明写作目的祝贺对方被大学录取。第二段共五句。首句讲述对方付出的艰辛和努力。第二句和第一句是因果关系，用了连词therefore，表明对方的喜悦之情可以理解。第三句评价对方的成功是应得的。第四句表明自己也深受激励。第五旬总结自己以对方为荣。第三段共两句。首句请对方接受自己的衷心祝贺，使用了一个形容词 heartfelt，意思是“衷心的”。第二句祝愿对方以后获得更大的成功，是祝贺信的经典结尾句型。【知识模块】 作文2 【正确答案】 Dear Yan Yufei, I
11、 am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my congratulations to you for you have just graduated from Fudan University and got a job in Jinghu Company. After years of hard and creative study, you finally achieved your goal. Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an
12、 ambition. Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you, as you have done your utmost to progress. On the other hand, for me, it is a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded. In short, I take pride in your present success. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations again. Wish you
13、still further success. Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段只有一句，表明写作目的祝贺对方大学毕业并找到工作。第二段共五句。首句讲对方付出的艰辛和努力。第二句和第一句是因果关系，用了连词 therefore，表明喜悦之情可以理解。第三句评价对方的成功是应得的。第四句表明自己深受激励。第五句总结自己以对方为荣。第三段共两句。首句请对方接受自己的衷心祝贺。第二句祝愿对方获得更大的成功，是祝贺信的经典结尾句型。【知识模块】 作文3 【正确答案】 Dear Yan Yufei, I am writing the letter to convey m
14、y warm congratulations on your admission to the Postgraduate School of Tsinghua University. I was not surprised to hear this good news as I know that you have been desirous of furthering your study in a prestigious university, and how industrious and persevering you have always been in order to real
15、ize such an ambition. No one could have been more deserving than you. It is also an encouragement to see four years of your hard work finally rewarded in this way. In short, I take great pride in your present success. Congratulations again. Wish you still further success in your future life and stud
16、y. Yours truly,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段只有一句，表明写作目的祝贺对方考上研究生。第二段共四句。首句讲述对方付出的艰辛和努力，获得成功是自然的，自己并不感到吃惊。第二句评价对方的成功是应得的。第三句表明自己也深受激励。第四句总结自己以对方为荣。第三段共两句。首句再次向对方表示祝贺，第二句祝愿对方获得更大的成功，是祝贺信的经典结尾句型。【知识模块】 作文4 【正确答案】 To whom it may concern, I am writing the letter for the purpose of complaining some problems about my
17、 refrigerator which I bought from your store three days ago. It was a great pleasure to me when the refrigerator arrived. But it is regrettable for us to have found some faults of its function. Firstly, the food preserved in it goes bad quickly as it doesnt function at all. Secondly, we could not ad
18、just the temperature to adapt for utility. Finally, the door cannot be opened without extravagant strength. Taking into consideration what has been discussed above, 1 strongly demand that you should change a new one for me or refund my money in full. I wish you could treat my complaint seriously and
19、 give me a reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段只有一句，表明写作目的投诉冰箱有缺陷。第二段共五句，总分关系。首句坦诚买到冰箱的喜悦之情。第二句话锋一转(but)，宏观说明冰箱有缺陷。第三句、第四句和第五句分别说明具体缺陷和瑕疵(firstly，secondly ，finally)。第三段共两句。首句说明自己的期待和要求。第二句希望对方尽快答复，是投诉信的经典结尾句型。【知识模块】 作文5 【正确答案】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter for t
20、he purpose of complaining the chemical plant which contaminates (污染) the nearly river. Every day the plant pours a flood of waste liquids into it. The water in it gives off an offensive smell. Fish has become extinct and local residents suffer a lot from the polluted water. For my part, the authorit
21、ies concerned should take some drastic measures to change the current situation. Firstly, the factory should be closed if it cannot purify the water before it enters the river in a given time. Secondly, stricter regulations and even laws should be instituted and put into effective practice. Thanks f
22、or your due attention to this letter. 1 look forward to seeing some new changes as soon as possible. Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段共四句。首句表明写信目的投诉污染河流的化工厂。第二句讲述该厂的污染行为，第三句和第四句详述污染的后果。本段第二四句全面阐述了当前的形势，完成试题指令 1)。第二段共三句，总分关系。首句说明有关部门应采取有力措施改变现状。第二句和第三句详述具体措施(firstly，secondly)，全面完成试题指令 2)。第三段共两句。首句感谢
23、对方关注，第二句期望看到有所变化，是投诉信的经典结尾句型，也是试题指令 3)的完成。【知识模块】 作文6 【正确答案】 Dear Sir or Madam, I traveled to a world-famous attraction with your company several days ago. But I found some places were to be improved in your management. In the first place, the day-long excursion down to the beach and back failed to l
24、ive up to the expectations. While the scenery was fantastic, the bus ride was unbearable because of the “noises“ that the surly (粗暴无礼的) driver played on the radio at will. Secondly, the hotel we lodged in was not the five-star one as you originally promised. Finally, the room we lived in was full of
25、 foul smell and the toilet was out of order. I sincerely hope that you can take my complaint into serious consideration and make some improvement in your service. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours truly,Zhang Wei【试题解析】 首段共两句。首句说明一个事实参加了旅行。第二句表明写信目的投诉旅游遭遇的问题。第二段共四句。分别说明旅行遭遇的具体问题(in the first place，secondly ，finally)。使用了一些经典词组，如 live up to(符合标准)和 out of order(不能使用)。第三段共两句。首句希望对方关注投诉。第二句期望尽快得到回复，是投诉信的经典结尾句型。【知识模块】 作文
