1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 54 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay based on the chart In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 2 Write an essay based on the c
2、hart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 3 Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 4 Write an essay based on the
3、charts. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the charts, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. 考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 54 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As is shown in the chart, the incidence of obesity
4、 or overweight is of different propensity across different ages and gender groups. To be exact, on average, 37% of the women are obese or overweight, compared to 47% of the men. When age is factored in, the peak percentage of obesity is found in the 40-year-old men, with over 55% being obese, while
5、obese women peak at the 60-year-old age group, taking up 50% of the group.This chart seems to demonstrate that men are hit by obesity problem at a much younger age than women (e.g. 40 vs. 60) and that men are more likely to suffer from overweight problems (47% vs. 37%).To solve and prevent obesity i
6、ssue, we are advised to follow a regular exercising scheme and pursue a healthy diet. This is especially true for men, because they are usually so absorbed in making a living while ignoring their health condition.【试题解析】 该图表显示了男女各年龄组别超重和肥胖的比率。从图表可见。肥胖比率受性别及年龄两个因素的影响。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二
7、段指出男性与女性肥胖情况的差别。第三段提出建议：预防肥胖，要规律运动、健康饮食。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 The chart displays the projected trend of the aging population in China, As it shows, between the years 2010 and 2050, people above the age of 60 may experience the sharpest increase (19%), followed by the age groups above 65 and 80 years o
8、ld (15% and 5% respectively). In the year of 2050, about 33% of the Chinese population would be 60 years old or above, while 24% and 7% of them would be 65 and 80 years old or above.The magnitude of the aging population in China is explicitly presented in the chart, which may bring lots of trouble t
9、o our society. The fact that aged people are dependants of their children means many couples have to provide for 4 seniors, adding to their already mounting pressure of life. The shortage of workforce in China will be another problem.To ease the burden brought by the aging population, the family pla
10、nning policy needs reforming. Fortunately, our government has begun to do so already.【试题解析】 该图表显示了 20102050 年中国人口老龄化的趋势。从图表可见，老龄化在三个组别均呈上升趋势，而 60 岁以上这一组别的上升最为迅猛。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段指出人口老龄化带来的压力：很多夫妇要赡养 4 个老人，社会压力增大。第三段提出建议：调整计划生育政策，以缓解老龄化带来的各种压力。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 The chart shows the
11、 respondents opinion about how to improve food safety. As can be seen, 42.4% of them think that government supervision should be strengthened, and a further 40.7% think that the corporate social responsibility should be enhanced. In addition, enhancing other forms of supervision is also suggested, s
12、uch as consumers supervision (11.1%), the medias supervision (3.7%) and the supervision by shareholders in the food companies (2.2%).The survey results spell out the crucial roles played by both the government and enterprises. First, government agencies must give due attention and discretion to food
13、 safety issues. They must carry out regular tests on food samples to check and monitor food quality. Second, food enterprises must be aware of their ultimate responsibilities to provide safe food to consumers. If they fail to do so, they will face criminal charges. Therefore, enterprises are advised
14、 to commission third-party safety audit or at least do internal safety audit to avoid any possible food safety accident.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者对改善食品安全的建议。从图表可见，受访者大多认为需要加强政府的监督和企业的社会责任。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段从政府和企业两方面介绍应如何改善食品安全，并提出建议。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 The two charts show the extent to which
15、respondents feel safe about school buses and the concerns they have. As many as 60.52% of the respondents do not trust school buses, compared to 23.53% expressing their trust, remaining 15.95% are not sure about it. Besides, 35.2% of the respondents point out that school buses may be scrapped ones,
16、and 24.3% worry that school buses are overloaded, followed by lack of safety facilities (21.3%) and speeding (18.7%).The survey results raise our concerns about school buses, an issue that has a critical impact on the safety of students. To address this issue, it is advisable for schools to take som
17、e measures. First, schools must purchase buses that are tailor-made and fully equipped for the purpose of transporting students safely. Second, the passenger capacity should be strictly observed, because overloading would incur serious consequences.In short, the above-mentioned measures, namely, a strong school bus and a stringent rule, could reduce the risk of school bus accidents substantially.【试题解析】 该图表显示了受访者对校车信任度翱担心的原因。从图表可见，较多受访者对校车不太信任，认为校车多用报废车，而且存在超载问题。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法：从两方面着手解决校车安全问题购置配好安全设备的专用校车和严格执行限载的人数。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作
