1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 84 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 On Bribery Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your com
2、ments. 2 Love Him or His Money? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 3 The Only Child Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you shoul
3、d 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 4 Can I Buy Insurance for My Marriage? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give you
4、r comments. 5 Set an Example for the Children Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 84 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on t
5、he following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As can be seen, an official is lying on an official seal. Another man is building four walls around him with piles of money. Under the picture the caption reads: “Bribery money? The walls of the jail!“ The intention of this picture, I think, is to offer
6、a cautionary tale about the criminal nature of accepting bribery. This is a timely reminder for those who are tempted to trade power with money.As far as I am concerned, bribery is a serious illegal act that must be prevented. For one thing, officials, especially those with decision-making power, sh
7、ould be constantly reminded about the consequences of accepting bribery. For another thing, a systemic scheme of making officials financial status accessible to general public is helpful in keeping them in check. For instance, in Hong Kong, citizens are able to obtain information about the share hol
8、dings, properties and other assets of government officers. This mechanism is effective in deterring their officers from doing monkey business.In short, in fighting against bribery, raising awareness of the harm it does and making officials financial information available to all are two necessary mea
9、sures.【试题解析】 这幅画刻画了一名男子用贿赂的金钱在砌监狱的墙，墙内一名官员躺在他的官印上。从图解可以看出，本图旨在谴责受贿行为，提醒人们这是犯罪行为。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：提醒人们收受贿赂是刑事罪行。第二段提出个人看法：贿赂是恶劣的违法行为，必须阻止。 其一，提醒官员收受贿赂的后果能在一定程度上阻止贿赂。其二，官员财产公开机制有助于阻止贿赂行为的发生，以香港地区为例加以说明。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture, a lady is hugging and kissi
10、ng a man, who is covered with U.S. dollar bills. Underneath the picture, the caption reads: “Love him or his money?“ This picture gives a description of the su-perficialness of some materialistic-minded girls, who only see love as a means to wealth. To them, romantic love is less desirable than “all
11、-powerful“ money.As a man who believes in true love, I detest these kinds of girls and hope that they can wake up from their money fantasy as soon as possible. Pretending to love someone for his/her money will not end up well. It is not surprising that some beautiful and young ladies manage to find
12、golden bachelors and live a well-off life. They may fill the living room with noises and guests by hosting a glamorous party. Once the party is over, however, the emptiness in their life would strike back and haunt them like worst nightmares. Without love, their life is just a melodrama in an endles
13、s tragedy of life. It is fascinating outside, but painful inside.In short, a life with true love is so invaluable that no money can buy it.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一名女士在亲吻一名身上布满美元的男士。从图解看出，本图是要让读者意识到一些物质女孩把金钱置于感情上，这一做法很肤浅。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：指出一些物质女孩的肤浅。第二段提出个人看法：为了金钱而假装爱上某人不会有好结果。金钱可以带
14、来物质享受，但是难以买来心灵慰藉，举派对为例。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the picture, three generations are featured. A young couple is at the bottom, supporting their parents in the middle. Their kid, a little girl, is on the top, supported by her four grandparents. This picture draws readers attention to the pressu
15、re that Chinas only-child generation is facing. Pressures on them to provide for their parents and take care of their own child are daunting.While I really empathize with the couple in the picture, I still think that Chinas one-child policy should be continued in the foreseeable future. To begin wit
16、h, the one-child policy would continue to be good for Chinas economic development, which will contribute to better nutrition, rising levels of education, higher living standards, and longer life expectancies for the Chinese people. Moreover, the policy has been able to maintain a balance between pop
17、ulation and resources. If the policy is discontinued, the population boom would drain the already limited resources, such as land, energy and other raw materials.In the light of the two reasons mentioned above, I think the one-child policy should be carried on for the sake of our well-being.【试题解析】 这
18、幅图片刻画了一对独生子女夫妇艰难地托着四个老人和一个小孩。由此我们自然会想到：独生子女的压力如此大，那么独生子女政策应该继续下去吗?根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出“独生子女”这一代承受的压力巨大。第二段提出个人看法：独生子女政策应该继续下去。原因为：其一，独生子女政策能有效推动中国的经济发展：其二，该政策能有效保持资源和人口之间的平衡。第三段总结全文：为了我们的福祉。独生子女政策应该继续执行下去。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a couple is holding a wedding ceremony. Exce
19、pt for a priest, three sales representatives from insurance companies are also present. Under the picture, the caption reads: “Insure against marriage?“ The intended message of the picture is that marriage is far less secure today, which makes “buying insurance for it“ seems a natural option.In my o
20、pinion, we should restore the trust and commitment in a relationship to ensure a happy and lifelong marriage. First, we should have faith in our partner. Mistrust is not uncommon in todays society. However, a relationship without trust is like a car without gas, we can stay in it as long as we want
21、but it wont go anywhere. Thus, we should love our partner without fear and trust him or her without wondering, so as to keep our relationship clear of doubts and worries. Second, honoring our commitment is equally important in a happy marriage. We may be tempted by having an affair, but the oath we
22、took is the constant reminder of who we really love and how much we are willing to sacrifice for him or her. The commitment would empower us to fight against the temptation.In short, mutual trust and commitment are two elements in a secure marriage.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一对夫妇正在举行婚礼，而婚礼上有三个保险公司的销售代表在场。从图解可以看出
23、，现代的婚姻不如往昔牢靠，新人居然要通过买保险来维系婚娴。那么，怎样才能使人们对婚娲重拾信心呢?根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出现在的婚姻缺乏安全感。第二段阐明可从两方面确保婚姻美满幸福、夫妻白头偕老。其一，我们应该对对方有信心。其二，要时刻恪守我们在结婚时许下的承诺。第三段总结全文：双方的信任和承诺是一段美满婚姻的两个重要因素。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 As can be seen, the picture is divided into two parts. In the first part, a middle-aged man pic
24、ks up a fish bone to his mother, saying: “Mum, you should take some calcium.“ In the second part, the middle-aged mans son follows suit and offers him a bone, saying: “Dad, you also need to take some calcium“. The implied message of the picture can actually be summed up by a saying: “Like father, li
25、ke son.“ To teach our kids to be decent, we should first of all be decent ourselves.I strongly believe that example is better than precept. There are times when we hear some parents scolding their kids for laziness, who happen to be so lazy themselves. For me, those parents have no right to tell off
26、 their children, since they are equally lazy. Theres no deny that children would imitate adults behavior. They pattern themselves after their parents, internalizing parents words and deeds into their behavior and personality. That is why parents should set a good example for their kids.To conclude,
27、children will become what their parents are. Therefore, parents should pay attention to then-words and deeds and form a good example for their children.【试题解析】 这幅图片由两部分组成。在第一部分，一位中年人给他妈妈夹了一条鱼骨，美其名曰让她补钙。在第二部分，中年人的孩子给他夹了一块骨头，也说让他补钙。图片意在提醒成年人要为下一代树立一个好的榜样。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，点明“有其父必有其子”的寓意，提醒成年人要为孩子树立好榜样。第二段提出个人看法：身教胜过言教。以责备孩子“懒”为例，父母自己如果不勤奋，就难以让孩子勤快起来。孩子们的模仿能力极强，成年人要为孩子树立好的榜样。第三段总结全文：父母要注意自己的言行举止，为孩子们树立一个好榜样。【知识模块】 大作文写作
