1、考研英语（短文写作）模拟试卷 135 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the drawing, 2) interpret its meaning, and 3) support your view with examples. You shou
2、ld write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2 Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and 2) point out its implications in our life. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSW
3、ER SHEET 2. (20 points) 3 Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 4 Write an essay of 160-200 words bas
4、ed on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 考研英语（短文写作）模拟试卷 135 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follo
5、wing information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As the picture given above depicts, a runner, summoning up his last ounce of strength, is dashing to the finishing line, hot sweat rolling from his forehead. He is overjoyed to have won the race. Besides, on both sides of the finishing line are two big words in
6、Chinese: Start and Finish.What does the drawing intend to tell us? In my opinion, the information it conveys is what one has achieved so far is merely a new staring point for what he is going to do next. Owing to the fiercer competition and the quickening pace of life, people must keep striving for
7、a higher goal. Once he stops or lags behind others, he will be eliminated by this competitive world.There are a lot of examples to support my view. The most obvious one is the discovery of the radioactive element radium, which means the successful result of Curie s research work. Yet it is just a go
8、od beginning of the scientific study on atomic energy. Lets take another example to illustrate the view. We have achieved great success in rural reforms, which has greatly raised the living standards of farmers in the country. But it serves only as the starting point for pushing forward rural reform
9、s in a comprehensive way. In conclusion, it seems obvious that the finish of a thing signifies a new start of another one.【试题解析】 本文结构清晰，表达连贯。首段采用先人物后背景的顺序描写了图画的主要信息。第二段揭示了图画的主旨，论述了图画反映的社会问题。第三段用居里夫人发现镭和农村改革的两个具体事例层层展开论证，清晰严谨。全文主题思想鲜明，准确达意，词汇量丰富。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 The picture above depicts a flower
10、sheltered under a greenhouse, safe and sound from the heavy rain. The next picture shows the same flower under a different condition with no shelter exposed to the storm and lightening. And the flower withers with peddles falling on the ground.These pictures remind me of the spoiled kids in todays s
11、ociety. Nowadays parents pay too much attention on their children and provide all that the children ask for without restraints, which results in the appearance of many “little princes“ and “little princesses“. These pictures make us aware that if we over-protect the children, they will be too fragil
12、e to the danger and difficulties outside. Since parents can not accompany their children through their life, children must be given the opportunity to be independent and self-responsible, or the “over-love“ will finally harm the children.There is an old saying, “spare the rod and spoil the child“. N
13、ow it is high time that parents brought their children out of the greenhouse and let them fight on their own.【试题解析】 文章第一段分别描述了两幅图画展现的不同场景比较了花朵在移出温室前后面对暴风雨时的不同遭遇。第二段作者就联系了现实来做深层剖析，即被宠坏的孩子们正如温室中的花朵，过度保护反而会造成孩子们的脆弱，并用Since 引出对原因的进一步阐述。最后，文章用 There is an old saying 做生动总结，鼓励家长们让孩子学会自己奋斗。全文联系现实，立意准确，结构及逻辑
14、清晰，俗语引用得恰到好处。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 With the rapid development of tourism, a growing number of people throng to the scenic spots during their vacations. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, in the middle of a lake rows a boat, carrying two tourists, who are littering while enjoying the scenery. We ca
15、n deduce from the picture that the cartoonist is trying to capture our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of the rivers and lakes, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet. Occurrences of water pollution caused by the rapid development of tourism industry are unde
16、rstood by many people. Unfortunately, in real practice, tourism has developed in a manner which often conflicts with the environment. To some extent, the faster the tourism economy develops, the worse the environment becomes.What is the significance of tourism development if the ecological balance i
17、s destroyed? In my view, measures should be taken without any delay to address the problem before cost is paid for the negative development of the tourism. What should be done first is to make more people aware of the importance of environment protection. Otherwise, sightseeing, as a relaxation for
18、most city dwellers, would be impossible to be realized within a few years. Meanwhile, related laws must be laid down to protect the fragile environment and to penalize those who violate the law. Only in this way will we enjoy a wonderful natural ecosystem and a fast growing tourism economy.【试题解析】 本文
19、共分两段。第一段简述了这一社会现象的普遍性。接着以图画为例，具体勾勒出人物的动作以及背景所反映出的信息。同时，指出了经济发展与环境污染之间的关系，从而引出第二段的内容。第二段提出了解决问题的途径，末句设想途径落实后的效果。全文使用了大量精彩词汇与短语，不定式的被动语态与主动语态交替使用，倒装、省略、非谓语动词以及各种从句的运用，使得全文语句变化多端、摇曳生姿。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 This picture features two things, the spider web and the “cubicle farm“. The spider web is of cours
20、e our modern metaphor for the Internet, which connects one point to every other point, and thus allows a web user to access a great deal of information. Being interconnected like this is what makes the Internet so popular, as people can communicate with anyone in a variety of ways from all over the
21、world.The second thing about this picture is the common office “cubicle farm“ people at their desks using the computers, but without a lot of face to face contact with real people. Some people might argue that while the Internet allows people to always stay in touch, make more friends and even find
22、romance online, while a side effect is that sometimes it makes people more isolated. Some people stay in their homes and only make online friends, chat online and never experience direct human contact. If their average day at work is like this too, then the Internet may be a curse rather than a blessing.【试题解析】 本文分两段具体阐述了图画背后的深层含义。第一段在点出图画的两个主要对象“spider web”和“cubicle farm”后，首先对前者“蜘蛛网络”进行具体说明，指出其就是现代互联网的隐喻，它受欢迎是由于它为人们之间的沟通带来便利。第二段首先解释了“隔间农场”的含义，接着在说明互联网的好处的同时，用while 引出它会带来的副作用，即让人更加孤立。全文主题理解准确，内容对比鲜明。【知识模块】 短文写作
