1、模块主题写作八,模块主题写作八,话题分析,本模块的话题是“旅游和休假”,通过本模块的学习,学生能够将自己的旅游见闻和感受表达出来。,典型例题,上周末,你参加了一次野营(camping)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息,用英语写一篇80词左右的题为“A pleasant camping”的短文,参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。,参考词汇: go for a camping; climb the hill; have a picnic A pleasant camping _ _,模块主题写作八,思路点拨,模块主题写作八,引出话题,描述经过,概述感受,Last weekend,we had time off
2、 and I decided to,At 7:30 am,we metWe wentOn the way,weWhen we arrivedwe started After that,weLater,some girls and some boysWe didntuntil,What a wonderful experience we had,1休假 _2爬山 _ 3在学校门口 _4如此以至于 _5野餐 _6在山顶 _ 7沿着小路走 _ 8休息 _9直到才 _ 10劳累但很高兴 _,素材积累,climb the hill,at the school gate,sothat,have time
3、off,常用短语,have a picnic,at the top of the hill,walk down the path,have a rest,notuntil,tired but very happy,模块主题写作八,1Last weekend, we had time off and I decided to 2At 7:30 am, we met 3On the way, we 4When we arrived, we started 5. We didntuntil 6What a wonderful experience we had!,常用句型,模块主题写作八,高分模版,
4、模块主题写作八,A pleasant campingLast weekend, we had time off and I decided to climb the hill with my classmates. At 7:30 am, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we all sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at on
5、ce. We had a picnic at the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didnt go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy.What a wonderful experience we had!,名师点评,模块主题写作八,本文作者能正确运用表格中提示的内容
6、,并能用恰当的语言进行表达,内容完整,意思连贯。另外,简单句和复合句的交替使用,提高了文章的档次。文中decided to climb, sothat, When we, notuntil, What a/anadj.可数名词单数!等为此类写作话题中常用亮点词汇或句型。,假设你是大明,上周六和父母去颐和园游玩,请根据表 格中的提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下颐和园和你们的 游玩经历。,小试身手,模块主题写作八,要求:1. 内容要包含表格中所有提示信息,可适当增加细节;270词左右,One possible version:My parents and I visited the Summer P
7、alace last Saturday. Its about twenty kilometres from the centre of the city. It covers 2.9 square kilometres. One of the most famous tourist spots is the Longevity Hill. We had a clear view of the whole park on it. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much.I was really proud of our city. I hope people all over the world will come to visit it.,模块主题写作八,