1、1（32）短文改错三1、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词: 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。Ted, a British boy, along with his parents were invited to visit a Chinese calligrap
2、hy exhibition in London on last Saturday. They were exciting to have such a good chance to have a close look at the traditional Chinese culture. On the show they enjoyed various fine work with great admiration. To their joy, they saw some Chinese artists giving live performances with brush pens. Ted
3、 couldnt help approach an elderly Chinese artist, which was writing attentively with a big brush pen. Ted watched with great interest but asked the artist to show her how to use the brush pen. The artist agreed and gave him some instruction patiently. Then Ted couldnt wait to have try. He admit he w
4、as deeply attracted by the Chinese calligraphy.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。It has been a long time since I did anything good f
5、or the environment. Feeling responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take the action again. I told my idea to my friends and we planned to plant tree on the hill in the countryside. We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place where looked suitably and settled down. We spend a fe
6、w hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings. Then we wrote our wishes on cards one to one and buried it deep down the roots of the trees. We also took a lot of pictures. We were such busy that we didnt realize that it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the e
7、nvironment.23、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more tr
8、affic jam: and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, dont forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while
9、 walking or cycling. Since we cant pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()
10、划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。All students from our class go to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition.While listen,we made some notes carefully.We
11、felt excitedly and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were both inspired by the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country.The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen.Immediately
12、 we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。3修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。During my childhood, I only had a tiny bit of
13、privacy. I didnt have my own room and have to share one with my two young brothers. When I was fifteen years old, our family moved in a new house and I got my own room. Since then, my parents have seldom come into my room and I have had a privacy completely. While it was still necessary for my paren
14、ts to support me economically and mentally at that time, I was old enough to think and decide by myself which I should do. I wanted my privacy to be respect and thought it was important for me to become an adult. I agree that get my own place and becoming independence are two important ways for me t
15、o preserve privacy. By the way, I also agree that every child thinks privacy is important. Maybe its only important to those children who are mature, such as myself.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划
16、一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。I didnt realize the importance of working in groups since I was chosen the monitor of my class in high school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared much about class activities. As a result, I was tired o
17、ut and depressing. Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice on how to cooperate well with other. However, I begin to realize the power of my classmates and have everyone do his part in class.From my experience, I strong feel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has fre
18、ed me from trouble and made me work efficiently. So we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。4删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Journ
19、ey to the West is a fantastic story setting in the Tang dynasty.When opening the book, you would read an exciting story. Tangseng and his three companions went through adventurous experience to get the scriptures(经文) , which could be beneficial for ordinary people. They made the long and hard journe
20、y westwards to achieve their dream. The Monkey King, also was called Sun Wukong,managed to fight against all kinds of difficulties. Therefore, the Monkey King as a symbol of being bravery and determined is deeply loved by our Chinese.The story is so amazing that it is very worth reading, I believe y
21、ou can learn more about Chinese culture from this book.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Jack lives in a smaller town inEngland. He
22、usually stayed in his own country during the holidays. Last year, he decided to go toRussiaand stayed there for a few day. One day, he went out for walk. InEngland, people drive on the left side of the road. And inRussia, they drive on the right, which Jack forgot. When crossed a busy street, she wa
23、s almost knocked down by a car. Jack stood here for a moment, full of fear. Shortly after he recovered from himself, he said: “Where am I?” An old man which sold maps nearby ran to Jack at once and said: “Maps of the city, sir?”5答案以及解析1 答案及解析：答案： Ted, a British boy, along with his parents weras invi
24、ted to visit a Chinese calligraphy exhibition in London on last Saturday. They were excitngd to have such a good chance to have a close look at the traditional Chinese culture. On the show they enjoyed various fine orkws with great admiration. To their joy, they saw some Chinese artists giving live
25、performances with brush pens. Ted couldnt help aproching an elderly Chinese artist, whico was writing attentively with a big brush pen. Ted watched with great interest butand asked the artist to show herim how to use the brush pen. The artist agreed and gave him some instruction patiently. Then Ted
26、couldnt wait to have try. He admitehe was deeply attracted by the Chinese calligraphy.解析：考査主谓一致.along with 不是并列连词.不连接并列成分,谓语动词的单复数取决于最前面的主语。考查介词。last Saturdy 前不能加介词,故去掉 on 考查形容词。形容同 exdted 形容人的状态 考査名词。work 表示“作品”时是可数名词,因此.“各种各样精美的作品”应为 various fine works。在考査非谓语动柯。cant/couldnt help doing sth.是固定短语,意为
27、“忍不住做了某事”。 考查定语从句先行词。artist 指人,故应用关系代词 who 引导非限制性定语从句,且 who在从句中作主语 考查并列连词。根据句意可知,上下文之间为顺承关系,故应将 bill 改为 and. 考查代词根据句意可知,此处 show 的宾语为 Ted,故应将 her 改为 him。 考査冠词。have a try 是固定短语,意为“试一试”。考查动词的时态.全文以一般过去时为主体叙事时态,故应将 admit 改为其过去式.2 答案及解析：6答案： It has been a long time since I did anythigsomegood for the env
28、ironment. Feeling responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take the action again. I told my idea to my friends and we planned to plant tres on the hill in the countryside. We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place /whertaic looked suitablye and settled down. We spendta few hou
29、rs digging holes and placing the young seedlings. Then we wrote our wishes on cards one tobyone and buried ithem deep down the roots of the trees. We also took a lot of pictures. We were suco busy that we didnt realize that it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made a difference to the
30、environment.解析：考查不定代词。something 常用于肯定句中;而 anything 常用于疑问句或否定句中。考査固定短语。take action 是固定短语,意为“采取行动”故把 the 去掉。 考査名词。tree 是可数名词,根据句意可知此处应为复数形式. 考丧定语从句。分析句子结构可知,定语从句中缺主语,因此应将关系副词 where 改为关系代词 that 或 which 来引导定语从句.修饰先行词 place. 考查形容词.此处 look 是系动词,表示“看起来”,其后接形容词作表语。考査动词的时态全文以一般过去时为主体时态,因此应将 spend 改为 spent .
31、考査介间。one by one 是固定短语,意为“一个接一个地”. 考查代词。根据句意可知,此处的代同指代的是前文中的 cards,因此应使用复数形式them. 考查状语从句。busy 是形容词,其前应用 so,构成 so.that结构,意为“如此以至于”。考査冠词。make a difference to sth.是固定短语,意为“对.有影响”。3 答案及解析：答案： Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jams: and accidents
32、. As the student, what can we do 7to guarantee our safety? First of all, the traffic rules must be stricly obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light tunrs green. Next, dont forget Atowalk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dageoly to wear headphones while walking or cycling.
33、 Since we cant pay enough attention ontthe traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Tkinae good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.解析：考查名词。jam 作“拥挤,堵塞”讲时为可数名词,其前有 more 修饰. 故此处应用其复数形式。考查冠词。此处表示泛指,故应将定冠词 the 改为不定冠词。考查名词。由语境可知.guarantee 的宾语应该是名词,故将形容词 safe 改为其名词形式safely。 考查副词。
34、此处修饰动词.PV:用副词,故将形容词 strict 改为其副词形式 strictly. 考查主谓一致全文主体叙事时态为一般现在时,在 until 引导的时间状语从句中,主语the traffic light 是单数,故谓语动词 turn 应用第三人称单数形式。考查非谓语动词。forget 后接不定式作宾语,forget to do sth.总为“忘记要去做某事” 考查形容词。本句为“think + it(形式宾语)+adj.(形容词作宾语补足语)+不定式(真正的宾语)”结构,故将 dangerously 改为 dangerous。 考査介词。pay attention to sth.是固定短
35、语,意为“注意某事” 考查连词。该句含有从属连同 since 引导的原因状语从句,故主句前的连词 so 多余,应删除。考查祈使句。此句为 and 连接的两个祈使句,故应以动词原形开头。4 答案及解析：答案： All students from our class gowent to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition.While listeng,
36、we made some notes carefully.We felt excitdly and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were bothalinspired by the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed 8train.We took a lot of phots and were proud of the achievements of our country. The next day,we decided to have a class meeting to
37、present whicat we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to preing the presentations.解析： 考查动词的时态。根据时间状语 month 可知,谓语动词应用一般过去时。考查介词。时间状语以 last 开头时,其前不能加介词。 考查冠词。名词 introduction 以元音音素开头,其前应用不定冠词 a。 考査省略句。当时间状语从句的主语和主句主语一致,且从句中含有 be 动词时,可将从句的主语和 be 动词一起省略,即“While (we were) listening, we made some not
38、es carefully“。考査形容词。feel 是系动词.其后接形容词作表语,故应将副词 excitedly 改为 excited。 考查代词。根据全文第一句可知,both(两者都)不符合文意,应改为 all 表示“三者或三者以上都”。 考查名词。photo 是可数名词,“很多照片”要用 a lot of photos。 考査非谓语动词。表示“决定做某事”时,decide 后跟不定式作宾语, 因此在 have 前添加 to。 考查宾语。从句句意:第二天我们决定举行一个班会,把我们看到的东西呈现出来此处应由 what 引导从句作 present 的宾语,且 what 在从句中作 had see
39、n 的宾语。考査非谓语动词。在动词短语 devote oneself to 中.to 是介词跟动名词作宾语。5 答案及解析：答案： During my childhood, I only had a tiny bit of privacy. I didnt have my own room and haved to share one with my two younger brothers. When I was fifteen years old, our family movedinta new house and I got my own room. Since then, my pa
40、rents have seldom come into my room and I have had a privacy completely. While it was still necessary for my parents to support me economically and mentally at that time, I was old enough to think and decide by myself whicat I should do. I wanted my privacy to be respctdand thought it 9was important
41、 for me to become an adult. I agree that getin my own place and becoming indepct are two important ways for me to preserve privacy. By the way, I also agree that Anot every child thinks privacy is important. Maybe its only important to those children who are mature, such as myself.解析： 考査动词的时态:作者在回忆自
42、己的童年往事,应用一般过去时.故将 have 改为 had。 考査形容词 “我的两个弟弟“要用 my two younger brothers。 考査动词短语 move in 不及物,其后不接宾语,若要接宾语,应将 in 改为 into。 考查冠词 privacy 是不可数名词,不能加不定冠词。 考査宾语从句此处应用 what 引导从句作 decide 的宾语,且 what 在从句中作 do 的宾语,意为“什么”。 考查非谓语动词动词 wanted 的宾语 my privacy 和 respect 之间是逻辑上的被动关系,故应用 be respected 作宾语补足语。 考查非谓语动词:在 t
43、hat 引导的宾语从句中,and 连接两个动名词短语作主语。 考查形容词 become 是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。 考查部分否定根据下文可知,此处指“不是每一个孩子都认为隐私是重要的”,every 与not 连用可表示部分否定,因此在 every 前加 not。 考査代词 such 中的 as 是介词,后接宾格 me 作宾语;反身代词必须与句子主语为同一主体。6 答案及解析：答案： I didnt realize the importance of working in groups sinceutl I was chosen the monitor of my class in high
44、school. At first, I did most of the duties myself whenil other students cared muchlite about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and deprsing. Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice on how to cooperate well with others. /HowevrTfhus, 10I beginato realize the power of my cl
45、assmates and have everyone do his part in class.From my experience, I stronglyfeel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me from trouble and made me work Amore efficiently. So we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.解析： 考查连词。根据句意“直到上高中被选为班长,我才意识到团队合作的重要性。”可知,此处为 not.until句
46、型,意为“直到才”。 考査冠词。表示独一无二的职位名称前不用冠同,故删除 monitor 前的 the。 考査连词:句意:起初,大部分职责都是我自己承担,而其他同学几乎不关心班级活动由句意可知应用连同 while 连接. 考査副词。上下文的对比关系提示该处应用表示否定含义的副词, 故将 much 改为little。 考査形容词.形容词 depressed 用来形容人的状态. 考査代词。此处表示“其他人”应是复数概念,故将 other 改为 others. 考査副同:根据句意可知,上下文之间为因果关系,故应将 However 改为 Therefore/Thus. 考査动词的时态.第一段是作者回忆
47、的往事,应用一般过去时,故将 begin 改为 began.考查副同。副词修饰动词 feel。考査副词的比较级此处表示工作更加高效了。 efficiently 多音节词,应在其前加 more构成比较级.7 答案及解析：答案： Journey to the West is a fantastic story seting in the Tang dynasty.When opening the book, you wouldi read an exciting story. Tangseng and his three companions went through adventurous ex
48、princs to get the scriptures(经文) , which could be beneficial fot ordinary people. They made thealong and hard journey westwards to achieve their dream. The Monkey King, also was called Sun Wukong,managed to fight against all kinds of difficulties. 11Therefore, the Monkey King as a symbol of being br
49、avey and determined is deeply loved by ours Chinese.The story is so amazing that it is verywl worth reading, Aand I believe you can learn more about Chinese culture from this book.解析：考査非谓语动词。set 与它修饰的名词 story 之间为逻辑上的被动关系,故应将现在分词setting 改为过去分词 set. 考査动词的时态。句意:当你打开这本书的时候.你将读到一个令人兴奋的故事,故应改为一般将来时。 考查名词。experience 在此处指“经历”,故应改为复数名词,泛指“许多冒险的经历。 考査介词。be beneficial to 是固定搭配,意为“对有益处”。 考查冠词。此处泛指“一次漫长而又艰难的向西之旅”,故应将 the 改为不定冠词 a。 考查非谓语动词。此句的谓语动词是 managed,应将 was called 改为非谓语形
