1、考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 33 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 More and more people choose to travel abroad in their vacations. Many people believe that traveling abroad benefit them a lot. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on
2、 the benefits of traveling abroad. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.2 Despite the mountains of information warning us of the danger of smoking, teenager smoking is on the rise. In this section, you are asked to write an essay on
3、the consequences of teenage smoking. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.3 We often donate money to the needy in many ways. But sometimes people are worried about where the money actually goes. What do you think? In this section, yo
4、u are asked to write an essay on donating. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.4 We sometimes hear the sad news of suicide in universities. Is there any way to prevent this from happening again? In this section, you are asked to wri
5、te an essay on the best way to prevent suicide in universities. You can provide specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write at least 150 words.考研英语二（作文）模拟试卷 33 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 As w
6、e have more money to dispose, we tend to choose to take our vacations abroad. Admittedly, traveling abroad has a lot of benefits.First of all, traveling abroad enables us to broaden our view. We are no longer confined to the landscape and culture of one nation. Instead, we will be greeted by exotic
7、folk culture and scenery, which will trigger us to learn more about the destination. Secondly, traveling abroad is a character-building experience for us, especially for young people. A person who travels a lot is usually independent, tolerant and resilient. Because of the different practices and be
8、liefs between the foreign culture and the home culture, one needs to adapt quickly to the local culture. Therefore, you will be more tolerant with different people and customs along the way.In conclusion, traveling abroad brings you “seeing eyes“ to see the kaleidoscopic scenery and an “open mind“ t
9、o experience and embrace the world.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“出国游的好处”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段提出话题：出国游有很多好处。第二段阐述具体的好处：其一，出国游能开阔我们的视野。其二，出国游能塑造我们的性格。第三段总结全文：出国游的主要好处是扩大视野、塑造性格。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 It is very hard to see any advertisement or promotion about cigarettes. Still, cigarettes manage to find their wa
10、y to teenagers. At their tender age, teenagers might be tempted by the illusion that smoking is cool. That is mainly why more and more teenagers develop a habit of smoking.The major consequence of teenage smoking is the harmful impact on health. As is known to all, smoking is the major cause of lung
11、 cancer and many other respiratory diseases. Once developed, the smoking habit is addictive and hard to get rid of. This means those young smokers will have a longer smoking history than those adult smokers and are more prone to smoking-induced illnesses. In addition to this, we should be aware that
12、 the lung is a delicate organ. When it is impaired, it is hardly reversible.In conclusion, teenagers should be warned about the health hazard caused by smoking and they shall not develop the habit of smoking simply because it is “cool“ or “awesome“. What is really awesome is a healthy life.【试题解析】 本题
13、要求考生对“青少年吸烟的后果”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段指出越来越多青少年吸烟的原因容易受到香烟的诱惑，以为吸烟是很酷的行为。第二段阐述后果：青少年吸烟的一大恶果是对健康的摧残。重点讲述对肺部的伤害。另外，香炯一旦上瘾就难以戒掉。第三段总结全文：青少年不应以为吸烟“很酷”就对香烟上瘾。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 Donation is a charitable act to benefit the most disadvantaged and it is a generous offer to those in need. Sadly, sometim
14、es, the donated money and goods are embezzled or taken by the charity organizations. And thus I think it is wise to adopt a third-party organization to audit the donation and publish the results periodically. First of all, the involvement of a third-party organization will ensure the impartiality of
15、 the charity foundation. People are worried about the whereabouts of their donation, because there is no watchdog to monitor the charity foundation. Once an impartial auditor is in the picture, a check-and-balance system will be established. Secondly, publishing the auditing results will guarantee t
16、he transparency, which in turn will lead to the increased accountability of the operation. When the results are made accessible to the donors, every penny must be accounted for.In conclusion, by obliging a third-party auditor to periodically review and release the whereabouts of the donation, more a
17、nd more people are willing to make donations because they are assured that every penny really counts.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“捐赠”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段由所捐的物资遭到慈善组织的挪用或侵吞入题，指出应该让第三方机构来审计捐款并定期公布结果。第二段阐述原因：其一，引入第三方机构能保证慈善组织的公正性。其二，公布审计结果能确保透明性，从而能督促慈善组织对自身的运行负责。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 Due to the increa
18、sing pressure, a larger number of university students are feeling depressed. Some of them even go to extreme and end their lives. To resolve this issue, I think the best way is to involve students in the community service.First of all, students can make some friends in the process of serving the com
19、munity. Through different kinds of activities, students can make lots of friends with various backgrounds. When issues arise, these friends will shed different lights on the issues. Solutions could be found from a broadened and enlightened perspective. Secondly, by serving the community, sense of ac
20、hievement will be established among university students. Usually, university students commit suicide simply for the reason that they do not think they are worthy enough to live on. If they are committed to the community service, they could see the difference they have made and find out the meaning o
21、f life.In conclusion, university students are encouraged to contribute to the local community. By doing so, they can find more friends and gain a meaningful purpose of life.【试题解析】 本题要求考生对“防止大学生自杀的最佳途径”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求全文可以安排如下：第一段由学生所承受的压力入题，指出最好的办法是让学生投入到社区服务中。第二段阐述原因：其一，在社区服务过程中，学生可以结交一些朋友。当我们有困难时，这些朋友能从多角度为我们分忧。其二，社区服务能使在校大学生建立起成就感，找回生命的意义。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 短文写作
