1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 43 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Strike a Balance between Work and Rest Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended mea
2、ning, and 3) give your comments. 2 How to Prevent Hypertension? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 3 High Charge of Medical Service Write an essay of 160-200
3、 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 4 The Short-sighted Students Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) ex
4、plain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. 5 The Dangers of Smoking Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 43 答案与解析Part BDirections: Wri
5、te an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 【正确答案】 In the picture, a man is lying on the ground, with his back facing up and his hand grasping a briefcase saying “work“. His back is pierced by a winding key, on which we can read “excessive overtime“. And an eerie sk
6、ull is adrift above him. This picture intends to warn those workaholics of the dangers of getting too obsessed with their work, at the cost of their health and life.In my opinion, a proper balance between work and rest should be struck. It is good that we young people are committed to our work, but
7、that does not mean we should work 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Overworking may pose a threat to our physical and mental health. On the contrary, if we take a rest from the tight schedule, we would feel relaxed and refreshed both in body and mind, thus enhancing our efficiency when we get back t
8、o work.In short, no one can be a machine in perpetual motion. When we feel exhausted, it is a signal from our body to tell us that we should take the time out for a break.【试题解析】 这幅图刻画了一名年轻人因过度加班累倒在地上的情景，他手上还拿着工作的公文包。写作时可从“在工作与休息间取得平衡”入手，根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片意在告诫我们不要为了工作而牺牲个人的健康和生命。第二
9、段提出个人看法：工作和休息之间应该取得恰当的平衡。年青人积极工作是好事，但是要适可而止。有些时候休息一下，反而更能提高工作效率，也能保证我们的身心健康。第三段总结全文，再次点题。【知识模块】 大作文写作2 【正确答案】 In the picture, a large-sized blood-pressure meter is featured. On the meter stands a middle-aged man, who is holding several balloons, saying “lack of exercise“, “stress“, “cigarettes and w
10、ines“, “obesity“, and “high salt intake“.Around him, three people are looking at the balloons, stunned. The picture intends to inform the reader about the problem of high blood pressure. Its causes are multiple, the most common ones of which have been illustrated in the picture.For the sake of our h
11、ealth, I think certain measures could be taken to prevent and tackle high blood pressure. First, we should have a balanced diet. As the saying goes, “We are what we eat“. To avoid or curb high blood pressure, we are advised to cut down on the amount of salt, fat and calorie we have. Second, we shoul
12、d exercise more often. According to some research findings, those who are on a regular exercise scheme can better prevent and control stress-induced hypertension and primary hypertension.In short, in order to prevent and control hypertension, we need to be careful with what we eat and get ourselves
13、off the couch to exercise more.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名中年人血压超标的情况，图中还列举了诱发中年人患高血压的原因，提醒读者要注意生活的各方面以避免或控制高血压。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：提醒读者导致高血压的原因是多样的，中年男人身上的这几种原因最为常见。第二段提出个人看法：应该采取一些措施来预防和控制高血压。其一，要平衡饮食，注意盐分、脂肪和卡路里的摄入量。其二，经常运动有助于控制压力引起的高血压和原发性高血压。第三段总结全文，重申观点。【知识模块】 大作文写作3 【正确答案】 In the fir
14、st part of the picture, a man walking out of a hospital is asking a middle-aged man walking in: “Whats wrong?“ He answers: “A headache.“ In the second part, an elderly lady asks the middle-aged man the same question: “Whats wrong?“ He replies “Heartache“, holding a medical bill in hand, which says:
15、“A common cold; cost: 888 RMB.“ This picture apparently intends to draw its readers attention to the exorbitant prices for seeing a doctor in todays China. It also implies that many Chinese people could not afford to get sick.As far as I can see, medical care reforms should be launched to solve this
16、 problem. On the one hand, doctors salaries should not be linked to the medicines they prescribe and medical checkups they perform. Instead, their income should be based on the performance of their work. On the other hand, the government healthcare system should cover more categories of medicines fo
17、r common and chronic diseases, thus reducing the expenditure of the patient.In short, to make visiting a doctor more affordable, the government should reform doctors income structure and extend its healthcare coverage.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名男子去医院看病前后的情况，该男子进医院前是头痛，从医院出来时由于支付了昂贵的医药费，变成了心痛。该图从侧面反应了看病花费高。根据这一
18、思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：如今在中国看病花费不菲，中国老百姓病不起。第二段提出个人看法：要推行医疗改革来解决这一问题。其一，医生的工资应该与他们所开的药和检查脱钩，而与其工作表现挂钩。其二，政府的医保体系应该涵盖更多常见疾病和慢性疾病的药物类别，降低老百姓看病的费用。第三段总结全文。【知识模块】 大作文写作4 【正确答案】 In the picture, a teacher is questioning his students: “How come all of you come to the front of the classroom?“ H
19、is students, all bespectacled and with books piled up on their desks, answer with one voice: “We cant see the blackboard clearly in the back!“ This picture is telling us how schooling has done harm to students. Specifically, long hours of study and heavy workload have impaired their eyesight and pro
20、bably caused other physical problems.There is no doubt that Chinas primary and junior schooling is very effective. A student in Grade 8 can solve some math problems that are only learned in universities in the West. Sadly, this achievement comes with a price: the physical well-being of students is d
21、amaged. With years of commitment to their studies, many students are very short-sighted. Occupied by mountains of homework, some students are even unable to finish a 1000-meter race, because of the lack of physical exercise.To address this problem, I think it is necessary for schools to reduce stude
22、nts study load, by cutting their homework and tests. We should let them enjoy some valuable free time and experience more things outside classroom. This will ultimately be beneficial to their eyesight and horizons.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一群学生簇拥着围到黑板前。他们都带着眼镜还嚷着“坐在后面看不见”。可见，学习的负担孩子们的视力不小的损害。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可安
23、排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：学习的负担对学生造成了身体伤害。第二段提出个人看法：繁重的学业负担，占用了学生的锻炼时间。第三段提出建议：学校为学生减负，还学生一个健康的身体。【知识模块】 大作文写作5 【正确答案】 As can be seen in the picture, a man is lighting his cigarette, with his shadow being enlarged and cast on the wall. However, there is one inconsistency. His shadow is not lighting a cig
24、arette, but rather holding a gun pointed at himself. The picture, as I see it, intends to warn its readers of the dangers of smoking by comparing smoking to committing suicide.There is no doubt that smoking is harmful to us and people around us. For one thing, smoking is detrimental to our lungs. Pe
25、ople with a long history of smoking are most likely to develop lung cancer and other lung disorders. For another thing, smoking poses threats to family members and friends. As is known to all, the adverse effects caused by second-hand smoking are even worse than those caused by first-hand smoking. P
26、eople who are exposed to second-hand smoking are actually victimized by smokers self-indulgent pursuit of pleasure. This is unfair and unacceptable.Given the harm done by smoking, it is advisable to quit smoking, or at least keep it to yourself.【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名吸烟人士。图的关键在于他身后的影子，打火机和香烟的影子居然是一把对着他的手枪，可见该图是要引起读者对吸烟危害的重视。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，并指出图片意在强调吸烟的危害。第二段提出个人看法：吸烟对我们和周围的人都有危害。其一，吸烟对我们身体健康有害，以肺部为例。其二，二手烟威胁家人和朋友的健康。第三段提出建议。【知识模块】 大作文写作
