1、考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 70 及答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information. (20 points)1 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your commen
2、ts. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 2 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 poin
3、ts) 3 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 4 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the foll
4、owing drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 考研英语（写作）模拟试卷 70 答案与解析Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.
5、 (20 points)1 【正确答案】 With the rapid development of tourism, a growing number of people throng to the scenic spots during their vacations. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, in the middle of a lake rows a boat, carrying two tourists, who are littering while enjoying the scenery.We can deduce from
6、 the picture that the drawer is trying to capture our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of the rivers and lakes, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet. Occurrences of water pollution caused by the rapid development of tourism industry are understood by many pe
7、ople. Unfortunately, in real practice, tourism has developed in a manner which often conflicts with the environment. To some extent, the faster the tourism economy develops, the worse the environment becomes.What is the significance of tourism development if the ecological balance is destroyed? In m
8、y view, measures should be taken without any delay to address the problem before cost is paid for the negative development of the tourism. What should be done first is to make more people aware of the importance of environment protection. Otherwise, sightseeing, as a relaxation for most city dweller
9、s, would be impossible to be realized within a few years. Meanwhile, related laws must be laid down to protect the fragile environment and to penalize those who violate the law. Only in this way will we enjoy a wonderful natural ecosystem and a fast growing tourism economy.【试题解析】 本文准确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切中
10、题意，并且涵盖了题目中的信息要点。文章思路清晰，清楚地表达了其内涵。句子形式具有多样性，词语选择恰当，准确地表达了意义，词语的使用面比较宽。第一段紧扣提纲，第二段主题突出，第三段衔接顺畅。【知识模块】 短文写作2 【正确答案】 The enlightening picture portrays that a hot pot, with numerous ingredients in it, includes domestic and alien cultures such as literature, moral values and performing arts. It seems tha
11、t the hot pot tastes very delicious because of the rich nutrition of the multi-culture.Obviously, the picture characterizes the status quo of Chinese society in which Chinese and Western culture conflict with each other but they merge into a unique form to a certain degree. Since China has opened it
12、s door widely to the outside world, many people from different countries have been deeply fascinated by Chinese culture. They will accept and love Chinese culture as a whole. In addition, Chinese culture should be well shared with foreign people, who have shown their enthusiasm towards China. Meanwh
13、ile, the Chinese people are also exposed to foreign cultures when more foreign people come to this oriental country. In this way people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other.In my opinion, the culture of any nation is a kind of precious heritage
14、, and belongs to the whole mankind. With economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become an inevitable trend of the time. No country is an isolated island, be it China or the western world. The clearer we grasp the current situation, the more it would be beneficial to the globa
15、l villagers.【试题解析】 本文分两段具体阐述了图画背后的深层含义。第一段在点出图画的两个主要对象“spider web”和“cubicle farm”后，首先对前者“蜘蛛网络”进行具体说明，指出其就是现代互联网的隐喻，它受欢迎是由于它为人们之间的沟通带来便利。第二段首先解释了“隔间农场”的含义。接着在说明互联网的好处的同时，用while 引出它会带来的副作用，即让人更加孤立。全文主题理解准确，内容对比鲜明。【知识模块】 短文写作3 【正确答案】 This picture features two things, the spider web and the “cubicle far
16、m“. The spider web is of course our modern metaphor for the Internet, which connects one point to every other point, thus allowing a web user to access a great deal of information. Being interconnected like this is what makes the Internet so popular, as people can communicate with anyone in a variet
17、y of ways from all over the world.People are at their desks on the “cubicle farm“ using the computers, but without a lot of face to face contact with people around. Some people might argue that the Internet allows people to always stay in touch, make more friends and even find romance online, while
18、a side effect is that sometimes it makes people more isolated. Some people stay in their homes and only make online friends, chat online and never experience direct human contact. If their average day at work is like this too, then the Internet may be a curse rather than a blessing.【试题解析】 范文正确解读了图画的
19、深层含义，主题思想鲜明，论述的层次清晰严谨，论据紧紧围绕中心，合乎逻辑性。第一段概括了图画反映出的寓意，第二段分析了遇到困境相互帮助的必要性，第三段提出了如何发扬互帮互助的精神。句子与句子、段落与段落之间采用了多种衔接手法，过渡自然通畅，整体性强。【知识模块】 短文写作4 【正确答案】 As is illustrated in the picture, the two disabled persons whose crippled legs are bound together travel in the journey of life. Accordingly, this far-reach
20、ing picture reflects a common phenomenon in todays society: the people who are in the dark and want to turn the corner can not make it respectively but in turn have to choose to pull together in times of trouble.There are several reasons accounting for this. Since we have to live in an on-the-move l
21、ifestyle, we may encounter various plights, where its better to seek for others assistance than to feel over whelmed. Furthermore, if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemmas, we will not realize our dream. And to build a harmonious society in China, no issue is as basic as to co
22、nduct coordination in face of disasters.Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the value of mutual aid. It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate spirit of supporting each other. To begin with, the government should make laws to encourage
23、 people to unite. In addition, people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble. Only in those ways, can we make people, even strangers, help each other.【试题解析】 本文正确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切合题意，并且涵盖了题目中所给的信息点；结构完整合理，层次分明，每一段的段落主题句都出现在句首，段落衔接紧凑。句子形式具有多样性，语言表达通顺。【知识模块】 短文写作
